Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I'm learning so much from this story. Most FFs dont have hidden lessons but this one is filled with them. Its so freakin sad to read but the truth hurts sometimes....and thats what you've written here, the truth and its many ugly sides to it. Thank you
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Great chapter like usual! :) I'll be sad to see this end!!
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Please update soon
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Wonderful chapter! I don't want it to end.
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I'm going to miss this! I love this Edward so much, even when he's being a dysfunctional jerk! You've captured all the angst and confusion of being a teenager so well. It feels really authentic. Great writing.
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I really really have enjoyed this ride you have given us. I'm sad it's ending but all good things must end! Thank you so very much for entertaining me with your story. I really appreciate it. I really liked both your Edward and Bella - they are a little different to many of the stories i have read. I particularly liked how Edward was kinda the under dog instead of the perfect man. It was real and i liked it a lot. Cheers.
Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Nice chapter. =)
It'll be the end of an era when it ends. =(
But its been a good ride. =)
Lol. loved it. =)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Love this story, I'm going to be sad to see it go. Good chapter it feels like it is the chapter bordering some major life changes. More please soon.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Now class here is an example of lack of communication in a disfunctional relationship.
If this story ends with them braking up then I will...... do something that pissed off people do here on twilighted.
~ B
Author's Response: It's not so much miscommunication as it is being afraid to ask the question. There's a difference.
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
!!! I'm CRYING now. Aw, poor Edward! To think Bella is leaving him and because of his learning problems! *sigh* Those kids...I swear. Anyway- I loved it of course. I can't wait to find out what happens. I hope they get their issues resolved nicely.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Have enjoyed the "ride" very much. Not quite ready for things to be over...need some answers...please
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
**Sigh** Just when I thought they had all figured out... **sigh** It's almost funny, kind of tragic, how words are left unspoken and they start to ASSume everything...
Poor Bella, I can't for the life of me, imagine all that she's going through right now, she seemed terrified at all the things her body is experiencing. It makes me think that maybe she wasn't ready yet... but what do I know?? :P
And Edward... **more sighs** why does he doubt Bella so much?? after all she's given to him?? Though I do wonder what's going to happen when Bella goes to College... I still believe Edward can make it to College, he'll just have to work (VERY) hard for it...
Anyhow... loved loved the update!! :D As always... Thanx so much :D
Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
No no no, no The End. *sigh* but I guess it must happen. :(
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
This chapter was awsome!!! Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Wow, things seemed to have gone sour pretty quickly after their night together. I wish that they both hadn't so quick to let their insecurities influence their actions. Edward thinks Bella has already decided to leave, so he starts withdrawing, and Bella interprets his withdrawal as rejection after they finally had sex. Hope they can figure things out before the end!
Reviewer: courtenay (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Loved it, as usual.
Reviewer: Quinnlyn Kilara (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I have been enjoying your story so much. Your teen Edward is very real. I work with high school kids, and you are right on the mark with his behavior, especially concerning the emotional issues connected with his being a struggling reader. Thanks for sharing your hard work and creativity.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Great chapter! I'll be sad when this story ends. :)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
ugh...still so many questions!
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
oh that is so not what Bella wants - the 2 of them need to sit and talk about school
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
this too?? it would end soon?? but why? just about most of my favorite fics.. those that i really look forward to are ending.. huhuhuhuhu ='( but why is this ending soon? i feel like there's still a lot of issue to tackle.. it's like they barely scratch the surface. please don't make a hasty ending. are you tired of writing this already? =(
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
great chapter!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next one!!!!!!
Reviewer: Danna (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
please update soon
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Is it because Carlisle will help Bella with whatever is going on? Hmmm. I wanted to leave you a long review, telling you how much I love you and how much I loved this chapter and its realism, but I stayed up waaay past my bedtime to read this. So just know I loved it, like always.
Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me
Love it!
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