Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
I'm sad this story is just about done. It's been a joy to read it! This chapter was great...love Alice confronting Edward and I'm so glad that he and Bella talked about what's been going on. I look forward to the epilogue.
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
I'll be sorry to see this story end, but there really is nothing else to tell-it has been great, though. I really like the way you portray the insecurities of youth.
Jill
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
OMG! They both need to talk to eachother and let them know one anothers fears!! I loved this chapter. Great job
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
LOVED it!!! Great job!! So glad they talked things out and LOVED his personalized license plate!! TOO Sweet!!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
A small part of me wants to feel bad for Rosalie, but talk about the definition of too little, too late.
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
I was wondering where Rosalie was... so sad they couldn't solve things through, I guess sometimes some things can't be taken back... they hurt too much.
Edward has come such a long way. Not only he doesn't lose completely his temper, but he's really made an effort on the reading part. He's grown up, he's really solving things as much as an adult as he can, I think he's finally the man Bella needs :D
OMG! That has to be by far the worst swallow-me-whole-earth-please-please-please moment I've ever read!!! Poor poor Bella... It's kind of funny though when it doesn't happen to you LOL :P
And Jasper's semi-joke about Edward being illiterate... WOW I think it was a really nice line to show that people do pay attention, he is Edward's best friend after all, but never THAT close...
The plates touch was a really nice one, loved it! :D And that last line was, indeed, priceless :D
Thanx so much for this wonderful wonderful story!!!
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
I'm starting to like this story. That was Haut but sweet.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Yay! They're a couple! Sweet.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
No fair!!! :-(
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I hope you can wrap up Edward's insecurities before the end!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
can't wait for more
Reviewer: lovnsomecullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I really love this story. Hope you update sooooon!!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Yup, loving this ride. Thank goodness Edward has Esme, I love their conversations. Hopefully Bella will soon be able to talk to Edward about her doctor's appointment.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
I really enjoyed this story and am sad to see it end. I hope that we get to see what happens to them as school lets out. Future pllans and all.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
This was amazing. A very deep chapter. Loved it. :)
I just want to say that I will be very sorry when I see "The End".
Reviewer: chagrace (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
r u freaking kidding me!?!? that last part that Esme said to Edward was exactly what my mom was telling me during dinner.. not in exact words tho but the same meaning and sentiment.. this is freaky...
Author's Response: thanks for telling me that! That made me smile!
Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Gah! Boys lol Always assume and never talk! That's a difference too lol "The End" is so...final. break my wittle <3
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
No, I'm not ready for the end just yet!! (sad face). You've left so many questions answered! Will Edward get into college? Will Edward and Bella get into the same college? Who will be brave enough to say I love you first? What is wrong with Bella? She should not still be bleeding, right? Will she tell Edward about her gynae visit? Absolutely DESPERATE for the next chapter...
AliciaZA
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Loved this chapter it was awesome. I love that he finally opens up to his mom. I hope he lets her help him.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Oh no, already, this story is coming to an end? Wow, This ride was an amazing one. Thank you for sharing it with us. This was a great chapter!!! I really do hate to see it end though.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
LOVEd it! Looking forward to seeing if Edward talks to Bella about his fear about College
Reviewer: evieeden (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
Can't believe we waited all that time for Edward and Bella to finally get together only for it to all go wrong physically. I do feel sorry for Edward that he's so shy and insecure about his relationship though, it makes me want to give him hugs. Not looking forward to seeing 'The End' at the bottom of any chapter though. I want this fic to go on...and on...and on..and on :)
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
ANGST HURTS SO GOOD.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
ahhhh
need another chapter - i hate this in between place, so stressful!!
good chapter though!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 31 Abandonment Issues
You know, I almost see this as epic fail on Carlisle's part. He should have asked more questions of Edward and made sure that Edward and Bella talked that night! Really, the two of them seemed destined to fail. Circumstances and lack of communication cause them turmoil on almost a regular basis. So, who will lead them into the light? Or will they just drift apart and learn to resent each other? I enjoyed this story, I really liked your pacing and the escalation of small failures into big events as happens in real life when perspective makes all the difference!
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