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Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
I had a feeling, with size and no other ultra sound, that it was twins...although, I thought she would be earlier than two weeks. At any rate, I just found this story, or decided to read it so sorry for not reviewing as it went along.
It was great and I enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing your talent. :-)
Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
I fucking loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
Thank you for such a wonderful gift!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
This was a nice Christmas present. Thank you.
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
Ugh - my first long review didn't go through and I have to start from scratch. Thank you so much for this unexpected, but wonderful Christmas surprise. The Tutor will always have a special place in my heart, as it was one of the first fanfiction stories that I read and followed to the end. You don't skate over all the difficulties of real life and relationships and I love that about your writing. I can't tell you how much this glimpse into the future meant to me. Thank you and I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas! All the best for the new year. xxx
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 35 OUTTAKE: Eight Years, Eight Months Later...
Oh My God. Of the hundreds of fics I've read over the last 2 years, THIS CHAPTER flew to a whole new stratosphere of AWESOMENESS!!! I'm so choked up right now I can barely type. Stunningly Beautiful how you've wrapped up this wonderful story. The emotions...wow! Twins! A son AND a daughter. Loved his first conversations with them..I can vividly picture him. I wish SM had included more interactions between Edward & Reneesmee like this, but you've done so beautifully. The last paragraph? I'm shaking my head cuz I can't think of any words good enough. You're a genius. Damn girl!! Hope you keep gifting us with your stories. Linda xxxooo
Reviewer: HeartStopsBeating (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later
i really love that story.
it was well contructed and the characters maintained realism in every scene.
i would have liked a peak in at Rosaile and where her life had lead her and if she's properly with emmett yet. she may have been a bitch but she was lonely and id hve like to see them together.
also, in that chapter before the end, where they're talking about graduation and whats going to happen to their relationship, bella says she doesnt like math just like edwards doesnt like reading but then she becomes an accountant which is probabyl the post math filled job available. i wondered if you'd noticed.
again, it was wonderfull.
Author's Response: There's a reason why Accounting falls under a Business degree and not a Math degree. It's completely different and requires a different way of thinking. I can do accounting all day long, which is why I majored in business, but I don't like math. It doesn't mean I can't do it, I just don't enjoy it.
Reviewer: jen_cullen_17 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
i super love the epilogue and all the chapters...please please write more about tutorward and bella....
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 32 Priceless
That was a beautiful final chapter, sentimental, passionate, giving & forgiving...
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
This is the most realistic view of a teenagers first time I have read in ff so far, so well done. They are being as responsible & considerate as they can be. Usually in ff it is all mushy wiht only a brief sting followed by multiple earth-shattering orgasms. I love fiction but with a dose of parellels to real life too
Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later
awwwwhhhh!!! <33
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
AWWWW, THEY ARE SO FUC...FREAKING CUTE! STILL ENJOYING THIS STORY. OH THANK GOODNESS I AM NOT IN HIGH SCHOOL ANYMORE OR EVEN ON THE MARKET. I DON'T THINK I COULD STOMACH ALL THE START OF A NEW RELATIONSHIP. THE NOT WANTING TO SAY TOO MUCH TO APPEAR WEAK OR NOT WANTING TO GIVE TOO MUCH TO APPEAR EASY. THEN THE OTHER PART OF YOU WANTS TO LAY IT ALL OUT THERE AND JUST GIVE INTO DESIRE NO MATTER THE CONSEQUENCES. I THINK I MAY CRY WHEN THE ANGST OCCURS IN THE STORY
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Kiss & Tell
so i am reading this while i (im)patiently wait for A Rough Start to update. I really enjoy how you make your characters true to life instead of fantasy. I mean i really believe all of them to be in high school and just as immature , socially inept, akward, cocky, and all the other 'issues' we went through during that time. Just trying to figure things out and deal with school, parents, boys, girls, and growing up. I really do like this story just as much as A Rough Start. I also like this one is complete so no waiting for those pesky updates. At any rate, great writing skills and great storyline
Reviewer: Shygirljen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later
Great Story, I really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Shygirljen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Wow this was a great chapter! It had me jumping out of my chair at the end lol.. great work :)
Reviewer: Shygirljen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Awesome chapter!! I totally loved it!
Reviewer: Shygirljen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Victory
The story is going great so far, im really likeing it. Keep it up :)
Reviewer: Shygirljen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
Great story so far, keep it up :)
Reviewer: Savage (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
Reviewer: flutterback (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
I have to say, I just read through this story in three days. I was blown away by how well-described your characters were. You have an amazing talent for describing teenagers! I actually laughed out loud in one of the beginning chapters where Edward is hiding the fact that he is on the phone with Bella, and Carlise busts him by saying "Tell Bella goodnight for me." I can remember that happening to me FREQUENTLY when I was young! Too funny!
But your emotions, their mentality, how Edward and his parents are dealing with his challenges, it was all very well rounded and well written. I was amazed that you didn't lose it through the story.
Oh, and can I just say that the "proposal" was the sweetest thing I ever read? Making Bella work for her ring? Hahaha. I loved it!
Such a fantastic story! Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: justluey (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me
I was on the verge of tears. What can I say, I'm a sap!
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later
*squee!* *giggle* *squeal*
Feel Good Story of THe Month!
And if you knew how much I read, you would understand how epic that is!
Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later
Just read the whole story today and loved it! Would love another glimpse into the future when baby Cullen is born!
Reviewer: monabear (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
man that sucks... i would hate to be in their position right now
Reviewer: monabear (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Disclosures
damn!
get it bella.. thats right..its about time someone gave rosebitch a taste of her own medicne
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