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Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I was really laughing by the end of this as I thought 'Does Edward even know what's happening to him? Poor guy." I might have to re-read it again just to squeeze every last drop to entertainment out of it.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I consider these updates awesome. I'm quickly falling in love with your Edward and Bella. You really do portray them in a different way.
Reviewer: vote (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
i love how his personality changes. awesome.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I saw your story tonight, read all the chapters in one sitting and I'm really loving it! Your pacing is great-not too fast or slow-you are setting up the back story and relationships between the characters so that they are believable and real. I really can't wait to read more-so please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Awesome chapter! I liked that E/B seem to be warming up to each other. Rosalie is definately going to be a problem though. Is Emmett going to be in this story eventually? Somebody needs to get her attention focused elsewhere.
Author's Response: Emmett is Jasper's brother in this story. He was in chapter 6 or 7. I forget which...
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
i don't really ever review , but i like this story a lot and you've been asking. i like the subtleties of edward and bella's characters. can't wait to see how this continues to unfold...
good writing, really enjoy this fic.
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
i like the way bella handled the edward not being able to read well thing. i cant wait for the next chapter, this is an excellent story!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Another interesting chapter is sucking me into this little world you have created. I just wonder how Edward is really going to learn to read...After all, he won't be able to pass the written drivers test without being able to read the questions..
And even though Rosalie is crazy about Edward, I am not really liking that little sub-plot. When is Emmett coming along to distract her from Edward. Or is Edward just going to have to tell Rosalie to back the hell off? Now that might be pretty interesting...
I like to read...so, more please...
Author's Response: Or he could take an audible computer test...
Reviewer: femme_ecarlate (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
"So...do I have to watch my back for some jealous football player or something?" he asked.
^Favorite line. Silly Edward oblivious of his own feelings. I loved this chapter. Absolutely excellent. I can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: twoandeight (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Your fic is fab. I love your troubled Edward! I hope you keep going.
Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Great writing. Intriguing.
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I am glad to see things progressing between them but Rosalie is likely going to get in the way. It was cute he asked about a boyfriend. I wonder if he even realizes how he is starting to feel about Bella. More soon please and thank you :)
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I really like where this story is going! I can't wait to read more! :)
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Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I do consider these updates a fair payoff!! Great job!! You do a great job updating... I have read other fanfiction authors that take up to 2 or 3 weeks to update you take at most a week... YOU are the BEST!!! I was a little confused did Rosalie ask Bella to stay away from Edward after 2nd period or before?... Keep up the good job... =)
Author's Response: Even though your question is answered at the beginning of chapter nine (which I haven't posted yet), I'll answer it here: Rosalie warned Bella to leave Edward alone before Bella's second class (her class with Edward).
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
lol how cute their getting along when i read this i thought of one tree hill and thought of "tutor girl" haylee and nate lol
Author's Response: that's cute, although there probably won't be much parallel, as I've never seen one episode of one tree hill!
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Well, I thought this chapter was excellent! It flowed well and moved the plot forward. I like how Bella is getting Edward to do work without him losing any pride while doing it. The dinner scene was an eye opener as well. Really looking forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Oooh I loved the interaction beeen Bella and Edward. You could see a shift in this chapter. And OH Rosalie!! Such a bitch but I love it. I imagine Bella may get more than a talking to now. I hope she can help him with his reading problem one day, but for now at least she's helping him gehrough his homework. He'll have trouble actually taking the test though I imagine.
Anyway, awesome chapter. I'm loving watching the character grow and change slowly.
Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I just started reading this story and I am really enjoying it. It's different. It will be interesting to see where you take it.
Reviewer: sapphire (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I'm curious to see where this goes. Bella's observation of Edward is very astute. I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: Lyra56 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I'm really enjoying the story so far! I can't wait to see where this is going.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
I'm hoping you'll have Edward plant a kiss on Bella soon....In private, of course!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON"T WE ALL LOVE A STORY WHERE THE BAD, POPULAR BOY LOSES HIS HEART TO THE SMART, SWEET, GOOD GIRL????
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
Love it. Very sweet and romantic. Bella has figured out Edward can't read past a third grade reading level, right?
Author's Response: she's guessing he can't read. It hasn't really been confirmed, so she's going with her hunch. And so far, nothing she's seen is disproving it.
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
great chapters keep updating
Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Victory
I hate when people read my work and don't review and I'd hate to do that to you!
Bitchward is hilarious. Admit it! He's a bitch. And I love it.
Illiterate? That seems so..different. But in a good way! I'm sure it'll be explained later on.
I love how Bela can keep up with him, and how he loves her already and doesn't know it. ^^
Updates exponentially increase your awesome. ^-^
Author's Response: What a sweet review! Thank you very much. And chapter 8 is coming up soon!
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