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Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
OMG ... that was so cute ... Im so happy they got it all figured out ... this story is a breath of fresh air ... i love how slow things are going right now ... it builds ! I love it ! im so exctied ... please update soon :)
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
yay! they kissed!
Reviewer: stb551 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Great chapter, thanks! Looking forward to the next!
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Yay, they finally kiss!
Reviewer: kimmyg (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Yay!! The ending to this chapter couldnt have been more perfect!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
OMG!! HE KISSED HER AT SCHOOL!! I WONDER IF ROSALIE SAW IT!!! HOLY CRAP!! THAT WAS AMAZING! HE APOLOGIZED TOO!!!!!! SO VERY EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!
Reviewer: Lyra56 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
It was a day well spent then! Loved this chapter, especially the ending. What a lovely first kiss! I was scared when Edward left with Rosalie, I'm glad it was unfounded :)
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
THEY KISSED WRITE MORE IN EDWARD POV WHEN HE KISSES BELLA DOES ANY ONE SEE WRITE MORE
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Yeah:) I am happy by how much Edward is progressing. Thanks for keeping the promise of a first kiss! I am always so excited to get email that you have posted!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
FINALLY Bella and Edward kiss. I was so scared when Edward got into Roselie's car and they headed to her house. I really thought that Edward would be so angry and hurt that he would do something really stupid (like kiss or worse sleep with Roselie) but thankfully he didn't. I LOVED this chapter. Keep up the great job. Thanks for updating so soon!! =)
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Bravo. That ending was perfect. The whole chapter was made of awesome, but the ending was beautifully done. Ooooh Rose is gonna be pissed! LOL
Reviewer: MisTwilight28 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Awssome ending to a great chapter! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
That was a...wow! Loved all the emotions that Edward went through and how both E & B couldn't help but defend the other when someone put them down! First kiss was awesome-left me all tingly!
Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
woohooo!! for the test, the realisation, carlisle, the kiss, the chapter!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Woo, that was some first kiss!!! I loved the whole chapter, but especially the ending! Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
OMG! That kiss was both cute and unbelieveably HOT!! I really hope this marks a milestone in their relationship - i'm so invested in this story that I honestly think it would kill me if Edward goes back to being a douche to her! lol
Fantastic update - I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next add =]] xx
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
loved the last chapter. great kiss.
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
DAH! Finally! I'm late for class because I just had to read this chapter--it's worth it. Sigh. Edward, what an adorable douche bag. :)
Gasp, what'll his friends think?!
Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Since you're so speedy with the chapters, I'd better review as I said I would ;)
I really enjoyed this chapter. Edward's C was great of course but I really love all the 'little things'.. Like Edward stepping forward expecting a hug... That was cute.. and the kiss... so sweet ;P I really love the way you write this story..
okay, until next chapter ;)
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Great chapter! Loved the first kiss. :)
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Wow. THat was a hell of a first kiss. I love Edward/Bella stories! This one is really good and actually has some depth to it. Kudos and can't wait for the next installment!
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
rosalie is going to be sooooo pissed!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!1
update fast please please please
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Whew! That was some kiss! I loved this chapter. I loved how he apologized. I would really love for Rosalie to have seen that just to get her reaction.
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
I'm glad Edward passed! I'm really glad Bella got her first kiss! I wonder how Rosalie is going to react!
Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Learning to Inhale
Oh... I somehow missed this chapter yesterday. But that just made me happy today. lol.
I really like the observations that the others make.. Like Jasper with Bella being the 'because'. Keep it up ;P
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