BRILLIANT!!!! GOD, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

i love this series so much. and this chapter is hands down my favorite. so far that is(coz there'll be more to come right?? *fingers crossed*) please, please update soon..

Wow.  Young love... mmm... yummy.  I remember that "first kiss" feeling, and you captured it perfectly.

Once again, this story rocks!

 

  I think I have been following it so closely because it hits close to home for me.  My sister has dyslexia.  Although a smart girl in every other right, I watched her struggle through years of wrong assumptions and misdiagnoses until they finally figured out why she had such a hard time in school.  Meanwhile I was a straight A student and school came effortless to me. 

At one point, they even took her out of our shared school to go to a "special" school that was supposed to help kids with learning disabilities.  It turned out to be a school for  primarily children with autism and some form of mental retardation.  She was riding the 'short bus' bearing the brunt of all the jokes only kids can be cruel enough to carry out.  It wasn't until her sophmore year that she was diagnosed with dyslexia. 

By this time she was in your character's shoes.  Quick witted, short tempered, vulnerable and misunderstood from years of well meaning neglect.  She was dropped back into the middle of a regular high school, unalbe to read because so manhy other attempts had failed.  She dropped out with one semester of English left to take; she just couldn't handle the disappointment again. 

Many years later, my sister stills live with the low selfesteem and confidence issues from her past.  I have worked for years to make her understand that she is not stupid, and at 36 she is finally coming into her own.  Last August I picked up a copy of twilight after it was reccomended to me.  I flew through the book in two days!  The next weekend I saw my sister and made the snap decision to give it to her.  "Just give it a chance, It will be worth the headache." I told her.  She called me a week later very excited, telling me she had finished the entire book, and she had the bags under her eyes to prove it! 

 

I was so proud! Needless to say, we are both huge twilight fans and I have since given the book to my mom and my aunt.  (hahaha....andunknowing people thought Twilight fans of a motherly age were odd....how about a twilight Nana?)

 

Anyway, keep up the great work!  I love your spin off.

 

Sincerely,

 

Hushed Angel

Author's Response:

Wow. That is so awesome! It warms my heart!

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a phenomenal first kiss scene!  I've been on pins and needles and boy, did you ever come through for your readers!

I don' t usually like to read 3rd person perspective stories but this one is great!  Keep up the good work, looking forward to where they go from here...

SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AbSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!AND THANKS FOR NOT HAVING HIM FALL FOR ROSALIE"S SCHEMES!!!!!!

Loved it! The chapter was a nice surprise, from the test and its events to the kiss. This chapter was nice and unpredictable and that kiss was hot. Great work!

love it

Yes, I enjoyed it so much. I really thought in the middle of the chapter that it was going to be all angst, and that we'd have to wait for them to make-up for another day. So, I am glad that the tide turned so quickly. I think the best thing about this fic is the speedy updates. I can't wait for more!

I am so glad that he didn't succomb to rosalie and their kiss was magical.....i am super excited to see where their relationship goes.

Awesome.  I loved it all.  I am getting very invested in these characters.

Great chapter. Worth the wait. She's breaking through his resistence. Thanks for not letting anything between Edward and Rosalie.