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Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Great chapter. Thanks for updating sooo quickly, it keeps the momentum going. I'm glad you're developing the mental relationship it just adds substance to Edward and Bella's coupling. Love Jasper!
Reviewer: vote (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
awesome if thats what they become.
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
My heart dropped. Thanks, now my stomach is digesting it. Hurts.I need a new chapter. Oh Edward, you emotionally stunted asshole.
Can he beat up Tyler? Please please?
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANKS FOR THAT-FOR NOT LEAVING US HANGING!!!!THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY!!!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Well that was interesting, if he was serious. I hope you show the reasons for his change of heart in the next chapter, More please soon.
Author's Response: Really? I thought it was pretty clear in this one...
Reviewer: belwardislove (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
You. Rock. My. World.
*hugs*
Reviewer: benafsha (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
wow! omg! this chapter was amazing, i really didnt´t see it coming. so please , please, please keep writing this beautiful story. i can´t wait to read what´s next. i´ll try to be patien but i´m pretty sure i won´t suceed.
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
The hardest thing about reading a WIP is the wait between posts, so I thank you that yours are so short a wait! I loved that chapter. Good for Jasper for confronting Edward and Tyler's timing was perfect to stir up jealousy. Rosalie is a witch. Edward is a jerk but he is learning and he is adorable (therefore easier to forgive) :)
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
awwwww ... good boy edward ... save her from tyler and ... newton (ewww) ... im so happy :) so will they get together now ? ?!?!?! omg so excited for more :)
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
!! Love it!! I love Edward but Bella needs to give him a nice kick in the ass!
Are we ever going to learn about Edward's past?? What made him the way he is? I mean, adopted at 13 (i think thats the age) is pretty late... is there a reason for that?? CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
xx
Author's Response: He was in the foster system before that.
Reviewer: bnj637 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
omg!!!!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
aww that was extremly adorable he said boyfriend that was a shocker
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Yay! Though, I'm guessing that there is more to this story?
Author's Response: I'm just getting started!
Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
awwww, sweetward comes out. well, sweet and an excellent kisser. may i borrow him please?!
Reviewer: Rosalice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
this was so good
i loved this bit:
"First cigarette, first kiss, first...
"Boyfriend?" Edward whispered.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Awww, they like eachother. I'm so glad he finally got his head out of his ass. I'm so happy and I can't wait for more. Keep rockin' the updates, please?
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Awww, they like eachother. I'm so glad he finally got his head out of his ass. I'm so happy and I can't wait for more. Keep rockin' the updates, please?
Reviewer: Hiraedd (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
ohhhh! i came this close to crying{-----}
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
So they're in a relationship now? Hope he can deal with it... Loved the chapter, but someone (Bella) needs to put Rosalie in her place.
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
I think it's great that Bella stood up for herself and called a break to things on her own, but that Edward made teh move to define things between them. Nice chapter! I look forward to the party and seeing what Rose has up her sleeve next.
Reviewer: iCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
AHHH UPDATE
Author's Response: I am, I am!!
Reviewer: wildebeest_running (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
I Love this story... You update so fast!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
I'm loving your story.....i really can't wait till you update. I keep thinking about where you're going to take them next. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Reviewer: kristiG (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
please continue
lol love the story!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
holy crap i loved it! i hope edward has to work a little harder to get to bella...she deserves to be at least talked to at school. great job! can't wait for the next chapter.
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