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Reviewer: rmallillin (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Love it...Need more please
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Aww there all coupley. I wonder how out in the open they are. Does he still ignore her at school?
Author's Response: The assembly was on a Friday. There wasn't much of the school day left after the assembly. And this chapter takes place on the Saturday after. In other words, I haven't dealt with that yet.
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Awwwww. I like sweet Edward!Can't wait for more - thanks for posting so fast!
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Ahh!!
I love your story.
Each time I read a new update, I have no patience for the next!
Please, update soon? :)
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Wow. I truly like this story. It's simply facinating. Your characters and writing are phenomenal!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Wow, edward is actually being very sweet. Are they going to the party?
Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Great chapter! please update soon!
Reviewer: HushedAngel (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
LOL Go Bella! *insert whistles and catcalls here* I really like this fic. It's innocent and hot all at the same time. I'm checking a couple of times a day for updates now!
I am curious if we will get to learn more of Edward's past in this story. I'm also anxious to find out if a friendship will bloom between Alice and Bella against the odds. How will Rosalie try to come between them this time? Also, what about Jaco? I think a cool twist would be if Jacob and Rosalie were to end up together. Definitely not cannon pairings, but it could be interesting.
Will James pop his head into this fic? Victioria?
Anxious to read more!
Author's Response: I promise this: there is absolutely no Jacob in this story. I have no need for him.
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Ahhhh, Edward is turning out to be such a sweet guy! Human Esme is much more strict than vampire Esme....poor Edward and Bella:)
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
what does something special mean??? lol
Esme and towels......hhahahhahha I've had that happened before but Esme is worried and wants to know everything which I can understand as Edward has changed being with Bella
Rosalie stalker crush hahahhahhah
loved the update and I look forward to more
rachel
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
So hot!! Can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
Just...wow. I'm so glad they fell into being a couple. Poor Bella, though. Failing the drivers test sucks.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
I am enjoying the devopment of Edward's character- not in your description, but the way you are showing his "personal growth"(for lack of a better term). I am wondering what Esme is going to tell Bella. I do hope that Edward tells Carlisle and Esme that he passed the test- without being too much of a smart ass. I don't want Edward to lose his edge, but I do want him to start treating his parents with a little bit of respect. If that's o.k. w/you...Ready for something good!
Reviewer: Risika (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
This has easily become one of my favorite stories!
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
How long until another chapter comes out? I love this fic :)
Author's Response: Well, I plan to post tonight, (Wednesdsy) but I don't know how long it'll take for the chapter to be validated.
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
YAY!!! Edward is Bella's 1st boyfriend (please update soon) =)
Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
MORE MORE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!
My friend recomended this story she claimed this was an awsome story great writting and it just had her very in to it still is! lol
WOW now i can see why your story was awsome i loved the writting please please update soon i need more of this awsome story!
Keep up the good work!:)
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Aw. Edward couldn't take not having Bella. I love this story so much. I can't usually get into third person stories, but I like yours!
Reviewer: dazzle_you (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
amazing =] Cant wait till the next Chapter
Reviewer: wildebeest_running (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
Yay!!! I'm so excited, yet so impatient... Update soon please!! Love it!
Reviewer: purely_blissful (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Ahhh...I love this chapter. I just...I can't explain it. Please update soon.
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
OMG! I just started reading this story and I must say how brilliant you are. I can't wait to read more chapters and I am so excited to see what Bella's reaction is after he said boyfriend. I honestly didn't see that coming so you are a great surprised person!
Reviewer: Shanael (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
Damn, that ended way better than I thought it was going to =D
I just found this fic earlier this evening, and after reading the summary, honestly, I thought it was going to be a big clusterfuck of nonsense and a huge joke. I've got to admit though, that I was dead wrong about that and I really love it.I love the characters, the story line, the ever-chaning point of view. Really, really good. Very glad I gave it a chance instead of shrugging it off :] Now I'm going to be really freaking impatient for updates haha.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
I felt so proud of Edward when he asked "Boyfriend?"
Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
awww!! I had a relationship very similar to this in HS. Must love brooding, self loathing musicians... ::sigh:: can't wait for the next instalment!
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