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Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Oh he is going to kill Rosalie, you have to feel bad for her, shes so fucked up she can't even see it. I can't imagine how much it would suck to have that on the net, and I can't wait to see how your characters react.
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Wow...that was hard indeed. I really hope someone recognizes a Passion Purple painted fingernail. I understand Rosalie having this unrequited love going on, but that definitely went too far. I have trust into the fact that someone will find out though and confront her. And I can't wait to read that.
This is my favorite story at the moment; please update soon!
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Ok, after the warning at the start, I almost didn't read the chapter. Please tell me Edward is going to massacre Rosalie for that...!!! And if not Rosalie, Jessica. I am glad they didn't actually have sex, but Bella will still be embarassed beyond belief. Hope this is going to turn out alright soon.
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
okay she's a bitch. Poor Bella and Edward. I hope Rose gets hers ASAP!
Reviewer: gcullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
:D BEST STORY EVAHHH!
love,
gail
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
IT IS TIME FOR SOMEONE TO BREAK ROSALIE'S FUCKING ASS, CUT ALL OF HER HAIR OFF!!! SHAVE OFF HER EYEBROWS..........TAR AND FEATHER HER!!!!!POOR BELLA AND EDWARD!!!!!!PLEASE FIX THIS ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ROSALIE NEEDS TO BE OSTRACISED IN A VERY MAJOR WAY!!!!!!!!I MEAN HURT HER!!!!!!!!!!!!AND EDWARD NEEDS TO CONVINCE BELLA HOW MUCH HE LOVES HER ASAP!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
FUCK ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS CLIFFIE IS JUST CRUEL AND UNCALLED FOR!
CHARLIE'S GONNA SHIT HIT UNIFORM!!
BELLA'S GONNA BE LOCKED IN A TOWER!!
ESME'S GONNA GIVE BIRTH!
BELLA'S GONNA TRANSFER TO A SCHOOL IN ARIZONA, IF CHARLIE DOESN'T SEND HER TO MILITARY SCHOOL!
YOU ARE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAN!!!!!!!!
waaaaaa :(
Author's Response: um...wow?
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
OH NO! Rolasie is such a bitch!! Perfect chapter
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Oh, god, I had a feeling something like that was going to happen, but I didn't think that even Rose would stoop to that level. This is not going to go over well - especially with Bella's bad feeling about the party in the first place.
Reviewer: Canadian Ginger (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
I'm thinking Rosalie should just get killed off. She serves no purpose in the books, and seems to cause trouble in every fanfic I read. *sigh* Can she accidently be hit by a car at some point in the near future?
Anyways, great chapter.
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Heh....why are you apologizing for smut? lol I didn't see anything wrong with it.
Rose is a bad, bad girl...and a little kinky too it seems.
Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
Question. When Edward and Bella were alone in jasper's room, what did Edward do when he jumped away from her. She was about to ask, but then she realized what he was doing. Just wondering. I got a bit confused at that part.
Author's Response: ejaculated. He did it into his already dirty shirt. He didn't think she'd swallow.
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
OMG...it's getting better and better. I can definitely feel the bond going strong between Edward and Bella. Thank you for sharing! =]
I can't wait for your update.
Reviewer: Edcob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
I love it!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
all caught up now, finally. if only real life understood my need for time to read fanfic...
totally waiting for the next chapter!
Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
I cant wait to see what happens at the party...this chapter was
awesome
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
awww! they're so cute together :)
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
total win, all around! i hope my next first kiss is that hot and sweet all at once. :)
Reviewer: Squigglyjello (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
Unreal story!:) I love this Edward - he's still strong and independent, but he can't help loving Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Learning to Inhale
i like that everyone, even charlie, knows boy likes girl and girl likes boy except the boy and the girl.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
just finished reading the entire thing. this is a really great story.. not the usual love at first sight thingy that happens between E & B.. they usually feel some kind of spark the moment they met. but here it's not and even if there is, it's very subtle. i like how their relationship progresses. and i love carlisle and edward's sex talk! haha.. so funny. =)
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
great chapter but they need to be longer or maybe they just need more detailed or at least say whose point of view it is even though it's obvious
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Questions & Answers
such a good chapter.
esme's comment about edward acting his age made me think how very canon this edward is. even in the book we see him struggle btw century-old soul and whiny horny teen boy.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Minor Misunderstandings
I have a feeling this party is going to be interesting. A show down between Rosalie and Bella???
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Kiss & Tell
i've had this story in my "to read" list since chapter 3 (i'm drawn to tutor plots) and am just now getting time to read since i finally got my own latest post up. so i'm playing major catch up and am loving this.
i really appreciate that it's different than the typical tutor plot and that there's actually a very serious issue behind it all. and most importantly is that it's not treated lightly. way to go.
and i enjoyed seeing a hint of playful edward here at the end of this chapter.
and now, onto more catch-up!
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