I must beg your forgiveness!  I sent you a ranting/raving all-caps review last night, and your "uh wow" response warranted further comment.

My caps screaming just indicates how into this story I am, how I love your young, struggling couple, and how eeeevil I think Rosalie is! It's a sign of intense emotion - clearly, I am into this story in a big way! 

Didn't mean to horrify you. :)  Promise to be more gentle next time!

If you could find a way to squash Rosalie - maybe a logging truck accident? - that would be fine by me.  What a beast she is!!  I'm older than dirt, and the thought of my father hearing me grunt and groan on Youtube has me breaking out into some serious hives. :)

Enjoy your weekend!

Author's Response:

No no no, don't misunderstand. I got what you were trying to convey. I don't get offended easily and certainly not over fan fic. I hate that intonation and expression doesn't come across well on the Internet. I saw your caps as how you felt about the story and what had happened. It was exactly the emotion I was trying to elicit. You have nothing to apologize for. You did absolutely nothing wrong. And don't ever be "gentle". It's less fun that way! ;)

I think I'm going to throw up

It can't be rosalie ( althougth I wouldn't put it past her)

Jessica or lauren

This...oh....man ( feeling my head is going to explode)

 

No. no. no.....please update this....arghhhhh!!!!

 

rachie

God, Rosalie is such a b****!  She is freaking psycho.  I hope she gets hers, and doesn't just live happily ever after with Emmett.

OOOOOOH Rosalie is such a bitch if that was her... oooooh!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

-Rach x

OMG ROSALIE!!! What a bitch! Now Bella's going to freak out! :( I can't wait for more! xx

=O Roslaie is such a bitch!! I hoped that she'd have some kind of redeeming quality, like she had more dignity than to stoop so low! tut tut

I loved the add, can't wait for the next add - I can't wait to see where verything goes from here x

AHHH! Who did it? I'm thinking it's Rosalie but I'm thinking you're gonna surprise us. O_O

HAHAHAHA, Happy Birthday, Madison! Your brother has a porn posted on the Internet on your big day. :D

Oh, NO... this is AWFUL!!  I'd say Please fix this fast, but I don't even know how it can be...  Poor Bella - she is going to be devastated & she may blame Edward & he'll feel horrid and what about their brand new relationship?  Please, please, update soon with a chapter with better events than this one!  I want to scratch Rosalie's eyes out right now.  Aaargh!

Aww poor E/B. That is so creepy that someone was watching (and videotaping) uch a private moment. Great job. I can't wait to see what happens next.

omg omg i cant believe rose did it right? im sure she did

Whoa!

That sure turned for the worse. :)

Right when everything seemed to be going so well, too.

Ah. Love the chapter. Update soon?

Ugh! Rosalie is a heinous bitch!!! I can't wait until everyone knows it was her.  This act is so repugnant, on so many levels!

She should suffer horribly for this sick, pathetice scheme of hers.

How is Bella gonna cope?  

You have to fix this...I hate the idea of Bella getting hurt...it's just not right!!!

oh no she didnt!