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Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
omg omg i knew it cant wait for more
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
I just found your story. It's very interesting and entertaining. I hope that Bella can help Edward with his reading - it would open whole new worlds for him.
And Rosalie being a bitch is just so typical. I just hope Alice can find in Bella the friend that she needs, wants, and deserves. Rosalie is just a selfish, self-centered person and is hardly a real friend.
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
AHH!!!
i love you for updating,.
hate you for leaving it there.
i will love you for updating soon?
Reviewer: Rosalice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
oh whats going to happen with alice and rosalie?
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Time to make a decision, Alice.
(And I wouldn't mind Edward kicking Tyler's ass...)
Reviewer: kittikat505 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
oooh that rosalie is such a bitch, why must she make it so hard on edward and bella. keep up the great drama. kitty
Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Rosalie. That f*ing bitch...
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
IT'S TIME FOR ROSALIE TO LOSE HER BEST FRIEND!!!!!!AND GET HER ASS KICKED, HEAD SHAVED, ETC!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: RoxyCapri (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
poor bella, rosalies a total creeper. love the story :)
Reviewer: mychemfan78 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
the plot thickens.......im lovin it!
Reviewer: lenny7 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
so cool. i hate that edward's pressuring bella. And alice needs to take rosalie down. update soon please
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Delete it!!! Fast!!!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
NICE I LOVE BELLA
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
NICE I LOVE BELLA
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
That went much better than I thought it would. I liked how the chapter flowed and that Alice was nice to Bella regarding the whole Video thing. Hopefully Rosalie won't hurt Alice too much.
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Great chapter! please update soon! Can't wait to see what rosalie does to alice!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Wowsa! Loved it!
Reviewer: wildebeest_running (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Lying in Wait
Gah!! Edward Don't get too pushy!! I love that Bella Stuck by Edward, stay strong... Rosalie irks me in so many ways!!! I can't stand her... So exciting, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: edward0313 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
OMG love this story....err i hate rosalie please have edward & bella do something to embrass her. i love this bella n edward.......
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
i re-read this again and i was thinking, the good thing here is that they can't see anything in the video. it's all black. all they hear are the sounds. i think a sex video is scandalous if we actually see what they're doing..see their intimate parts that we're not supposed to see. if it's all sounds, its like NOTHING. if anything, they will envy bella because she had a great time with edward! hahaha.. =)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
i re-read this again and i was thinking, the good thing here is that they can't see anything in the video. it's all black. all they hear are the sounds. i think a sex video is scandalous if we actually see what they're doing..see their intimate parts that we're not supposed to see. if it's all sounds, its like NOTHING. if anything, they will envy bella because she had a great time with edward! hahaha.. =)
Reviewer: eliz21 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Victory
ohhhhh, his note makes me want to cry.... :(
Reviewer: eliz21 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
wow, i so did not see that illiterate thing coming... cool twist.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
What a sad situation. Alice will know who did this - she saw the camera. Rosalie is rotten. The long and descripted smut however, was perfect.
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Party Pleaser
OMG what a cliff hanger. Please update soon. I am at the edge of my seat.
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