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Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 Falling into Place

Yes!  An update!!  Wow!  He has made so much progress!  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 9--Somewhere Only We Know (S/J)

Excellent story! Please update very soon.

Reviewer: birdee18 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

No, I'm not reviewing my own story!  I just wanted to let y'all know that I am working on the next chapter and hope to have it up very soon!  I apologize profusely for letting real life get in the way of Brainward and me.  He's been yelling at me to get to writing, and who am I to ignore him?  I hope to be back with a new chapter very soon!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

I feel so bad for both Edward and Bella but I have to hold out hope that he will in fact get better and become the old Edward that everyone loves. 

Once again you have done a wonderful job with the medical aspect of this story, not leaving us overwhelmed with medical jargon but still letting us know exacty what is going on and why.

I look forward to your next update!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 9--Somewhere Only We Know (S/J)

This was a great chapter.  I like that Edward admitted to everyone that he needed help.  He's beginning to accept what has happened and is willingly moving on from anger and depression.  I know there will still be a rough road ahead; but I think for him one of the greatest things that will continue to remind him he is a man and a man worthy of Bella, is his ability to make love to her. 

 

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 8--Give Me Strength (S)

Simply by relaying Tanya's story to me you have managed to both bring me to tears and give me hope.  I just hope that Edward will see what she is trying to tell him.  And I LOVE that she and Jake are together and getting married soon.  :)

I know that right away Tanya's story didn't seem to help Edward but everything he is feeling and experiencing is still so new and I'm glad to see it finally boiled over.  There's no way he could keep it in for long.  I know a lot of what he said seemed awful but I actually can't imagine him thinking any differently.  He is so stubborn and independent that this has got to be killing him.  And on top of everything else he was feeling he feels that he is the cause of Bella's back pain too.

I just want to weep for the both of them. 

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 7--Keeping Me Alive

Ok, so I had to pause in my reading to say AWWWWWWWW....Emmett can be such a sweetie sometimes.  I like that he didn't make a fuss about the things he did to help Edward be able to do more on his own because he probably knew his brother wouldn't like the extra attention. 

Now, I'm back to reading...

Wow, you covered a lot of ground in this chapter.  But you did it so that the story progresses and though a lot happens as the reader you don't feel overwhelmed or have information overload or anything.  I'm glad Edward finally relented to have dinner out with Alice and Jasper. That first step, that first time is always the hardest.  And each time Edward and Jasper have another "talk" I like his roll in Edwards healing even more.  Where as Bella's pleas for Edward to get better and her words that she needs him can spur him on, Jasper's words are deep and true.  There are no secrets there and I believe that almost helps more.

I was thrilled to learn that Edward has the same therapy team now that he is an outpatient and I hope we will see his work with them a little more, perhaps he even becomes friends with them as he makes progress and becomes more the old Edward we love.  (We do still love him now. :)  )

The nightmares didn't suprise me like I thought they would.  In fact, it seemed to me only a matter of time before he began manifesting his fear of Bella leaving in his subconscious.  The longer he has to depend on her the more he will fear her leaving him, getting tired of having him lean on her.  I hope that when his speech improves he will be able to talk this through with Bella.  Just like Bella had to learn in the actual books that Edward wasn't going to leave again, your Edward has to learn that Bella isn't going to leave him. 

It's horrible about the piano but I have great hope that since he seems to be regaining some snipits of memory from when he started to get sick that as his brain and body heal more he will be able to once again play, or at least relearn.  It would be a fantastic way of bonding for Bitt to be able to teach Edward to play. 

Oh, and I loved Emmett's overreaction to hearing of Bitt's date!  I laughed tremendiously when she suggest that Uncle Charlie come over with his gun and police cruiser.  That reminded me of my first date.  I'm an only child and as such obviously had no older brother to be overprotective but I was the only (and as such oldest) niece of my mom's 3 brothers.  The youngest brother was like my older brother and they all tried to show up at my house for my first date wearing wife beaters and carrying guns.  So yeah, I get Britt's frustration completely. 

Thanks for another fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 6--It's Not My Time

The one thought that I have is I wonder if Bella realizes that when she says she needs Edward to get better, to keep trying...if she realizes how much good that does for him.  With those little words she effectively gives him Jasper's speec all over again (just with a little more feminine touch to it).  We are seeing that Edward is using all the power he posseses to use his stubbornness to his advantage.  I really like the idea of Jake and Tanya as two of his therapists...I do hope that they get to continue to work with him as he is now an outpatient. 

I am really, really enjoying this story.  It's obviously more on the serious side but you do it well and throw in just enough family humor/drama that it's not overwhelming.  I will be forever grateful to jennmc for her recommendation!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 5--Grace

And yet, you wow us all with another fantastic and humbling chapter.  I just really don't know what to say except you have penned a beautiful chapter that perfectly describes what Edward is going through.  Especially the depression he feels and will continue to feel for a long while.  To go from a strong, smart, independent individual to someone that can't even go to the bathroom on their own is a terrifying and humbing experience.  I love what Bitt and Emmett did for Edward to show their support but i love Jasper for his words even more.  I have a feeling he's going to be the one next to Edward prodding and pushing him to keep going to keep being stubborn and be the man he knows he can be despite it all.  It's going to take all of their group to get Edward back but he will be back.  I have no doubts.

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

I want you to know that I cried throughout this entire chapter!  Not just at one point, but the whole freaking thing!  I completely lost it when Carlisle started blaming himself, and then when Esme was scolding Emmett for not having faith and for unknowingly taking faith, the only thing she has away.  But in the end when Bitt came in, that was the biggest tearjerker for me.  I've know that fear that while dealing with something as big as this the person you love could have died.  I experienced that fear with my grandfather a few years back.  It's an overwhelming feeling that while being stubborn and wanting to pretend they are not ill they could have died.  Extremely humbling.  At least Bitt and Carlisle made up. 

I'm glad Edward's waking up...well, I'm actually estatic but I know there will be a very rough road ahead of them. 

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day

Birdee18, you have done an amazing job with this chapter.  The entire time I felt as if I was right there with them, not just reading what was happening through words on the page.  I felt Emmett's anger and frustration, Bitt's confusion and fear, and Bella's loss.  As well as the emotions of all the other characters.  I can only pray that Alice is indeed correct and everything will work out in the end.  After all, in the previous chapter she didn't say there wouldn't be heartache or pain involved in what was coming but that in the end it would be alright. 

I think Esme's words were hardest to read.  Knowing that her husband is a doctor doing all he can to help his son, but still knowing that he may not be able to do enough. 

I did laugh though at Emmett's internal thought that he didn't care if crying on Rose like that was girlie.  Only Emmett could have that thought cross his mind at all through all his pain and fear. 

Fantastic job too on letting us know what happened and using the medical terms but not going over anyone's head with terminology, etc.

I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please

Oh.My.God.  I actually have tears in my eyes!  What's going to happen?  Edward has to be alright!  He just has to!  Jennmc told me to have the kleenex handy and she wasn't kidding! 

On a happier note I loved the line from Rose and Alice that without them she would be next on What Not To Wear! 

And the overprotective routine about Elizabeth's dress!  Priceless.  What really got me is that Elizabeth's dress was picked out by Alice and Rose!  hehe

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 1--Do You Realize

Hey, this story was recommended to me by Jennmc and I had to check it out and see what it's all about.  I like it so far.  The first chapter draws you in and leaves you with enough of a mini-cliffhanger to keep you wanting more.  You desperately want everything to be alright with Edward but at the same time you get this sick feeling in your stomach that something awful is about to happen.

I LOVE the idea of Bitt being Edward and Emmett's little sister and them being so overprotective of her.  It's just so Emmett and Edward! 

I'm looking forward to reading more and i really sincerely hope that everything is alright with Edward.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1--Do You Realize

Please update soon I need an update I crave the update our hearts won't slow to a normal beat until  you update don't cause us to combust!

Reviewer: Missing503 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

This is such a well written story. I think I have cried my whole way through it which is a testament to how well you convey emotions in this story.

Right now this is the story I am most looking forward to an update.

I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

=[ I want Edward to be ok. 

Just so you know, I think about this story a lot...I love when you update. Everything about this story is so powerful...when I was reading how scared Bella was, I started tearing up because it was so well written. It breaks my heart that all of this keeps happening to Edward. 

 

Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

Awwww. *sniffles* Poor Edward. *gives him a HUGE cookie*

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

oh my goodness, what else will poor Edward have to endure??? :( Please tell me there is a happy ending in sight!

Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

I was thrilled to see you had updated this story. I feel very invested in your characters. Please update again as soon as you can. Your writing is really wonderful.

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

I'm so glad he's going to be okay. And uti's are OUCH. The worst pain with no comfort for it at all!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

Wow!  Another great chapter.  You have an amazing ability to make me cry though.  Keep up the great work.  I look forward to your next update.  :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

Wow I actually looked at the reviews for your story to see if you comented any about posting again soon!  When I saw nothing I was so disappointed but I went and did some laundry to come back and update my page and see a new chapter post!  You could have knocked me over with a feather!  I guess your ears were ringing I was so happy!!! 

I loved this chapter after the cliffie it was a longtime coming and I am glad it was nice and long and we all had a chance to recover..I may have needed a little more oxegyn through out the encounter but I survived just like Edward will!!!  I know this is me reaching but you keep saying Bella keeps feeling sick to her stomach as a mother of three that was my first indication of being inhibited..LOL  Could she be or am I just reaching for a plot twist?

I love this story!  Its a breath of fresh air!  Its good to see bella needingto be so strong for both of them when hes so weak and vulnerable!  I look forwardto the next chapter and pray we won't have to wait so long ;)

Please post again real soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

I thought you gave up on this story!  I am sorry to hear you wre sick! 

I love your writing!  I am like a kid at Christmas when you update!  I am jumping up and down - I cannot wait to read!  Update soon - cannot wait for more!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

Glad to see Edward over that hump of depression (for the most part), but damn, to keep getting set back like that. At least he's got strong support from his family. I'm enjoying this story very much, and look forward to seeing how everything turns out.

Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 9--Somewhere Only We Know (S/J)

Please please please add another chapter!!!

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