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Reviewer: schoolgirlkmb (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
maybe one kinda like a midnight sun idea you know... 100% Tori's POV or something
Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
You said before in an earlier chapter that Jesse had red hair. I'm sure this has been brought up to you before though. It seems like your chapters are too short and not far enough in depth although I do love the plot. :)
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
this was an interesting story!!
you put Victoria in a very different character!!
Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
I like this story and would love it if you would write another.
Reviewer: BeccieT (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
more more more! i demand more!!
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
well done
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
...you're a sucker for happy endings aren't you
Author's Response: Apparently you have not gotten to my series, Hyde. Be warned though, that one of them has a fairly grizzly ending...
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 19: Just...Wow
you know I was getting a sneaking suspicion that something was up at the end of the last chp, that whole continuous catching sight of Victoria but not getting closer thing was kind of suspicious
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Tori's Death
that sounds like James manipulated her
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 14: Tori
somehow I don't think that Bella is going to accept Victoria going to the Volturi
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
whoa whoa whoa!!!! liked the ending a lot! but u gotta make a sequel-this is one of the few stories that holds any promise on this site!!!!!
lol i love this story and really hope u make a sequel:):)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
Thanks for giving V the happy ending. She deserved it!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: Tori's Death
Was V that oblivious? I hope she finds out the truth in the end.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 14: Tori
Wow. What a shocker. I like this Victoria!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
ok. DEFINITeLY interested in asecond installment! a perfect way to end it and it opens soooooooooooo many more doors!! I loved the way it ended......I love this Victoria and i loved the sotryline - really priginal - my only regret is that I was away so had to wait until today to finish this story! It was fantastic! ten stars is the highest praise i can give! =]
NIAIS
Reviewer: Brandi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
This is definately a great fic. The evolution of your characters is amazing. Wonderful job! I especially enjoyed the happy ending.
Reviewer: katetml (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
This is a really really great story. I loved it! It was an interesting story. I really do hope that you make a sequal to this. I would love to know what happens next. Hope to read a sequal!
Reviewer: Kimber Goldmatch (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
Ok I love this ending way better than the one Stephanie gave Victoria. Bad girl turned good. I love it!
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
Thanks for the happy ending. I appreciate the short chapter though I wish some things would've been explained a little better. But we can't have both. All in all, it was a great easy read. Thanks!
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Tori
holy...
i did not see that coming. i love your writing style, and i'm sitting here in a crying mess
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Surprising Emotion
wow, i love your depiction of victoria. It makes heaps more sense for her to react this way, especially after edward left. Kind of like rosalie not being able to accept bella until she was pregnant.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
I t was beautiful! Amazing even! I have never read a story with a good Victoria...and such a great story line it was. Such a true true lesson. I loved it.
I always get so mad at Edward...but that can't be helped.
I will be looking for that 2nd installment lol~!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
oh.my.god. you are awesome, i am not sure why you think people would hate you, this is epic. THANK you. awesome story. speechless is right.
Reviewer: Blacklily (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: Speechless
this story has good ideas, greate potential. But the writing skills are not so good yet. But I like it and I bet a lot of people too. Keep going
Author's Response: Not to put too fine a point on it darlin', but could you direct me to your work? I can't seem to find anything posted by you so that I can gauge your comment by your own writing...wierd...
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Unexpected Aid
cool
so when is your fall? its winter here atm untill the end of august.
just courious
Author's Response: Well, we are in the tail end of summer. So, fall will hopefully mean late August to September for my story. I love my little brother, but with us both home a lot, not a lot is getting done.
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