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Reviewer: megz8709 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

Yay for updates! I think I almost fainted when Rob started talking to her as Edward! Gasp! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

You're cruel!  What a tease!  Well, mission accomplished...I await with baited breath for the next chapter.  Can I just say "Woo-whoo for NC-17!"  My favorite!  Totally my kind of heroin.:) 

Loved the texting between Rob and Kristen.  Big Boy is a funny nickname, but will you include any reference to the Spunk Ransom nickname?  Don't really care as long as I get to read more of this story.  Thank God for fanfiction that fills the two month void before the movie release!  

Anyways, I digress, love the chapter; please update soon, and thanks also for answering my earlier question.  I went back to read that over again, and it made much more sense.  I love to learn phrases from different places, so that was doubly cool. :D

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

This chapter is good build up its sooo good.  I love this story and I can't wait to see things get steamy!  Please don't make us wait too long?

Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh...I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of akward moments are in store for Kristen and's sure to be interesting.

Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

I think I like this a lot! Cannot wait for the action in the next chapter lol!!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 6

What does Rob think of all of this?? Is he as conflicted as Kristen is?


Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love  it. more more more

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

I was wondering what you meant when you said that you knew the scenes wouldn't be in the film. And now I know. Brilliant. Haha. :D

Reviewer: megz8709 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

If you could see me right now, I am doing a spot on akward Bella impression of a happy dance! I'm so glad you've updated! I can't wait to see where this 'sex scene montage' filming goes!

Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a great twist on the Edward-Bella story! Really good work, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

hurry !! Update some more!! :)

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

How tantalizing was that?!  I want more!  What a great idea to include scenes that will not end up in the movie.  I am glad that you have Catherine being so thorough.  The Nikki and Kristen interaction is really cute too.  I loved Nikki's line, "Sorry baby girl.  I got nothing."

I have one question though, and sorry if it seems silly, but what is the meaning of "two pump chump"? Thanks for the update! :)

Author's Response:

It's not silly! Sorry, I always forget that not everyone uses my weird expressions. Plus, I'm Australian... could be that.

Aaanyway a two pump chump is a guy who 'finishes' after only two pumps. Essentially... prematurely ejaculates - just a funnier expression!

Hope that clears that up.

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love this story. I like the tension between the two of them. Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

LOL, I love the girl talk with Nikki.  I can't wait for the filming of the scenes.  That should be good.

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 6

Amazing chapter, I love the tension between them, I can't wait till it snaps!  Shooting the sex scenes should be interesting :)

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love soap operas. Neighbors, anyone? Totally an awesome show. Full of drama, and the teenage characters in Neighbores are played by actually teenagers. It's brilliant. :D

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

Alala. Well. I am loving it, but I can't type more because I'm practically using my elbows because my fingers fell off due to frostbite. :D

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Well. I still want more. So I am going to have to keep reading, even though I am freezing my ass off :D

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

Woah. That was mean. I wanted to know the look on his face when he saw her though! Damn.

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ah. I love it. I can't wait for more. I want to actually see Jess though. Is she his gf for real? Because I know that Michael is Kristen's bf. He was Sid in Lords of Dogtown, which is like the best movie ever. :D

Reviewer: daylight4twilight (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! Perhaps I'm the only one who feels bad for Jessica...=(

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Who is Jessica? And while it may be soap-opera-ish, there is a reason why they're so popular on TV... :)

Author's Response:

Sorry if that wasn't clear! I get so involved when I'm writing that I forget not everyone knows it the way I do.
Jessica is Rob's long term girlfriend who's staying with him for a while during filming. Sorry if that was confusing.


Reviewer: LeeLeeLove (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love it. Keep going!

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

It may have been soap opera-ish, but it was entertaining.  I read it at work and was doing my best not to laugh too loud or shout ASS at Rob a few times or say OMG when they got too hot and heavy for the scene they were doing.

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

please update this one soon!!

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