Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty
Holy crap! Edward caught a clue! LOL
Author's Response: Finally, right? Hahahaha - it was fun writing him playful again. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken
Love that she has an outlet for her feeling that she way too often did not voice.
Author's Response: Thanks. I felt drawing wouldn't be too OOC for her since she "doodles" in the books and we really didn't get a chance to see much of what she was capable once she fell for Edward.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Too Much Testosterone
They are working on it!
Author's Response: Slowly but surely they're making progress. Both of them. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead
Charlie would shoot him for sure!
Author's Response: Too bad Charlie doesn't realize it wouldn't work. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves
:-)
Author's Response: =) I'm glad you're enjoying it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
I am so sorry I have been away for so long! Both of these last 2 chapters have been amazing, like yourself! I don't have words to express how wonderful this story is and I hopefully won't have to wait to long until your next update! You rock and I am so glad I started reading this story and I am so sorry I haven't been on sooner, first my computer died and also I have been having some problems with my diabetes that have kept me away from my compter, Please update soon! I am dying hear I hope all is well with your family and that you had a WONDERFUL HOLIDAY!! mUCH LOVE, sTEPHANIE cULLEN!!
Author's Response: Hey Stephanie. I'm so sorry to hear that your diabetes has been acting up for you again. That's never fun. I appreciate how much you love this story, and like you, I hope you don't have to wait much longer for an update. This chapter has been knocking around in my brain on full blast for over a month, but work has been so busy that it's put a total lockdown on my writing time. :( It's starting to show signs of slowing down and I will be relieved to get the chapter finished. These boys are in constant need of a timeout. ;) Thank you for your continued support and dedication to my story. I always appreciate you and your reviews. I hope you're feeling better.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Allstar (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
I am impatiently waiting for a new chapter! <3
Author's Response: Me too! I've been so swamped at work that it's put a real cramp in my writing time. Things should start slowing down a bit next week and I'll hopefully be able to get the chapter finished. It's in my head on full blast constantly making it hard to concentrate. Thanks for your patience. I truly appreciate it! =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves
Loved this chap! And dare I say... He is learning!
Author's Response: Haha - he's starting to catch on, but old habits die hard. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen
this chap so rocked!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. =) Thanks for the continuing reviews. I love them.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks
Super chap!
Author's Response: Thanks! I got some grief that this was a "filler" chapter but really Bella needed to practice standing up for herself. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons
Love Alice's taunting! She rocks!
Author's Response: She's kinda favorite of mine. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying her too.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
So who is going to change Bella is she going to need changing. My thoughts are yes but I can't wait for yours.
Author's Response: That is the big question, isn't it? Especially as this isn't how Edward wanted to "have" to change her - if he does. I'm trying so hard to get this next chapter finished - even though it doesn't answer your current question - but life has been so busy and the wolves and Cullens all are chattering away in my head. It's hard to get anything done. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line
Damn girl!
Author's Response: Yeah, she went just a bit extreme with that one, didn't she? ;) It certainly has interesting repercussions down the road.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Pendulum
You go Bella! Turn that pain into power!
Author's Response: She's trying. It slow going but she's starting to get that inner strength we only glimpsed. I'm glad you're digging the ride. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 26: Blindsided
Oh crap here we go with the teenage wolf anger. Considering she was never Jake's can't see how it is any of his business. Well should make the story more interesting.
Author's Response: Hi Benjamin: It's been a while. :) And yes, teen wolf anger in full force. You're absolutely correct that it is none of Jake's business, but that's certainly not going to stop him from thinking it is. Wonder how long it will take Edward to lose it with him?
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Voicemails
Yeah for angry Bella!
Author's Response: Haha - I'm glad you like her angry. While I love the books I wanted more anger. I would've been. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Martyr
Very deep chap
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate you finding my story and taking the time to let me know you're enjoying it so far.
~Lisa
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
This chapter made me so sad. My heart was getting pulled on from everyone in the family. Rosalie, especially. It kills me not to know if Bella is going to make it or if she is going to have to be changed. I hope things get better soon because I really hate a sad, broken hearted Edward. It breaks my heart. I am looking forward to the next chapter, Lisa!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that this chapter made you sad, but it was a hard one to write. Bella's life has become intertwined with so many others that the emotions just spilled over everywhere here - and Charlie isn't even there yet. I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it up soon. =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback
I have never heard of the nail but I loved the idea. Is there a link you to the info you have? I would love it. As always, your work is great. As I come to the end of what is already posted I find myself reading slower so it will last. I hope you post soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad I could provide a new christmas tradition idea for you. :) I can't find the link I used but here is one that has the same "explanation" of the nail I was basing it off of. http://www.catholiccompany.com/catholic-gifts/3001737/Pewter-Edition-Christmas-Nail-Ornament/ It's not just a catholic tradition and my husband and I have been using the christmas nail on our tree for almost a dozen years.
I can understand the slower reading pace. It's hard when there isn't a next button to hit anymore. I had hoped to have the next chapter finished this past weekend, but family circumstances prevented that. I'm working on it diligently to get it out as soon as I can. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I continue to appreciate it. =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
I hope Bella is wearing her "BITE ME" panties!
Author's Response: Hahahaha - those would certainly be appropriate in this instance. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
Really don't enjoy being inside of Jacob's mind.
Please don't make us wait to long to know that Bella pulls through.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jacob's been annoying the hell out of me. He hasn't gotten any less annoying in the chapter I'm writing now either. Thankfully, Sam is a bit more level headed and so are the Cullens, although Emmett is enjoying a bit of taunting. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen
no words...10
Author's Response: Wow. I don't think I've ever rendered someone speechless before. ;) Thanks.
~Lisa
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap
Great ch
oddly the line "It was bad enough that your son decided to leave the realm of rational thinking, but to discover you all went along with his decision nearly killed me." was very very funny.
Perfection
Author's Response: Haha -thank you so much. Yes, Bella was being purposely saracastic with that statement. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it. =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Toture Devices
PERFECT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. =) I'm glad you felt I handled it well.
~Lisa
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten
Don't think less of me but I love it. not the cutting but Angry Bella in general, I alway thought Edward (as much as I love him) deserved be put in his place for what he did to her. She was never mad enough.
Oh and on the criticism note, please add something to the description about Bella fights back or angry Bella, so it is easier to find, i have been wanting to read a story like this for a while and only found it because i decided to search Pissed in the description slot.
Author's Response: I'm glad you found this story and gave it a chance. I'll have to go back and check but I thought for sure that angry is mentioned a few times in the story description. Thanks for the heads up on that. And I don't think less of you for not loving the cutting. Neither did I. I tried everything to now write that part but the Bella in my head absolutely insisted. I hope you find some satisfaction in the way she fights back. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and hope to hear more from you along the way. =)
~Lisa
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