Very creative and it lived up to the hype.  I was concerned that after all the build up, you would not be able to deliver -- but you did.  The only disappointment was Emmett -- she loved him and he loved her, i would have thought she would have "more" for him.  That is my only critique -- wonderfully done!

Author's Response:

Oh - you have no idea how worried I was about living up to the hype. I have agonized over this chapter so it's such a pleasant relief that you feel it lived up to the build up. And I'm sorry you felt a disappointment regarding Emmett, but I don't think Bella's completely done with him just yet. She fully plans on continuing to find ways to torment Rose - which leads me to believe that the more Emmett defends her and suffers the wrath of Rose the more tension will build between Bella and Emmett. Of course, Bella could completely change her mind on me. ;)

Thanks for reading and leaving a review - I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,

~Lisa

Absolutely Amazing, Incredible. Bella has an awesome Kickassedness for sure! Alice was definitely not lying there. I was so worried about Rosalie losing it, and all for nothing. I shouldn't have bet against Alice. Emmett I think got off the easiest, which is fair because he's the easiest to manage. I actually had tears dripping down my cheeks reading how Esme and Carlisle reacted to the wounds Bella had Self inflicted.

 

Just Stunning.

Author's Response:

Wow - thank you so much for such a glowing review. I'm absolutely thrilled it moved you in so many different ways.

And I wholeheartedly agree that no one should ever bet against Alice. =) Oh, and I'm not sure if Emmett really got off that easy. I have a feeling that Bella is going to continue to try and irritate Rosalie - and each and every time Emmett intervenes Rose's wrath will turn on him. Bella knew what she was doing there. ;)

Thank you so much for the read and review - I cherish each and every comment.

Much love,

~Lisa

I so can't wait to see what happens when Edward comes home!  As usually, great chapter, Lisa!  You're really doing a fabulous job!  :D  And congratulations on the speedy validation!

-Your Astronaut Rockstar

Author's Response:

Thanks. I couldn't do it without your help - my fabulous Astronaut Rockstar. =)

Oh, and Edward's homecoming is shaping up nicely. I'm hoping to shoot it to you by the end of this weekend.

Much love,

~Lisa

Hi Lisa!

It's me again, reviewing yet another chapter. I am LOVING the fight in Bella! I'm so glad she is sticking up for herself. I couldn't stand what a wuss she was in the books most of the time. Thank you for giving her a voice and some "balls"!! I can't wait to read the next few chapters on the train tomorrow!

So this was the last chapter I was able to read on the way from work. I will review the next few chapters tomorrow night. =)

Author's Response:

Ah thanks Achelle - I have to admit this is one of my favorite chapters. I just love the relationship between Alice and Bella and this chapter had me constantly laughing before I even typed it out. Alice and Bella's verbal sparring in my head was pretty funny. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. Some of my best friends read my stuff on the subway, now I can add one more to that list. ;)

Thanks for the read and review. I love each and every one.

Much love,

~Lisa

I'm showing love! I'm showing love! LOL.

Okay, this chapter was brilliant. Actually, the whole story is brilliant. Your Bella is fabulous, and I can hardly wait to see what she and Alice have planned! I have to admit, though, that I'm most interested to see what she has up her sleeve for Rosalie, closely followed by Edward, then Jasper.

You write fantabulously and I heart everything you have done so far, you mad genius you!

Author's Response:

I heart this review. And sssshhh - no one is supposed to know I'm a mad genius. LOL! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story so much - it's been an awesome experience so far and I have so much fun not only writing it, but also reading what each reader thinks of it from chapter to chapter. The comments often make me pick up on things people are curious about for future chapters.

The most popular curiousity seems to be what Bella has in store for Rosalie, so you're in good company there. I have to say that Bella was being a stubborn bitch and didn't easily share the deets until the last possible minute. However, I'm proud to let you know that the chapter is finished, has been checked by my beta and only needs a few final adjustments.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review that boosted my ego up an infinite number of notches. *mwah* my dear.

Much love,

~Lisa

NICE!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.

Thanks for continuing to read and review - I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa

i love it all ,my fav part was when Edward realized what a ass he had been to take all her decisons out of her hands and Bella got pissed and took her control back and is going for what she wants  

Author's Response:

Oh, Edward is not done discovering what an ass he's been. hahaha - Bella intends to point it out a little more.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it so much.

Much love,

~Lisa

It did seem like a filler chapter, but still can't wait for the next chapter!  I can't wait to see what she has planned for the Cullens.  I always thought from the books that Bella should have fought for what she wanted!  Can't wait for the reunion between Edward and Bella too.  Good job and happy writing!

Author's Response:

I'm sorry you felt it was filler - it really wasn't intended that way. Bella had been bugging me to visit Jacob and this was the first place it actually worked as she was still waiting for the Cullens to get back. Don't worry though - the next chapter they're back and she's finally able to get a little off her chest. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

i like it.. but i'm so want to see the Cullens!!

Author's Response:

Well, your wait is almost over. The Cullen chapter just got back from my beta. Now, I just need to make some revisions and it should be good to go. :)

Thanks for continuing to read and review - I appreciate them both much.

Much love,

~Lisa

I do hope that Bella makes Alice "pay", too.

 

And that Rose will FINALLY get her head out of her ass. I'm sick of her.

Author's Response:

Rose is about to learn that Bella's done taking any crap. :) Alice is going to have a lot to deal with when Edward gets back.

Thanks for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate your thoughts.

Much love,

~Lisa

I really liked this chapter; playful evil!  Great job!  I don't like the whole cutting thing, but whatever.  I've enjoyed everything else so far! 

Author's Response:

Awww thanks. I didn't want to write the cutting thing but the Bella voice in my head wouldn't let me write around it. So, whatever - I tried to write it in a way that would be tolerable and I'm glad you're sticking with me through the story.

Thanks for reading and revieiwng, I appreciate it so much.

Much love,

~Lisa

In a happy world Jacob would'nt be there.........it wasn't the chapter I likced the most but I hope jacob won't be an important part of the story

 

Still intrigied to keep up with story though

rachie

 

 

Author's Response:

So your happy place is Jacob free huh? hahaha - I found that comment cute and loved it. I'm glad you're sticking with me even if this chapter wasn't your favorite.

Thanks for continuing to read and review, I really appreciate it.

Much love,

~Lisa

i would love to know what text she sent him....  i am so loving this bella.  i love that she recognizes that everyone makes decisions for her (especially edward) and she isn't going to stand for it anymore.  i am sad that she took it to the extreme of cutting herself, but i imagine that is a legitimate reaction to what she has been thru.  i will be anxiously watching my inbox for a notice that the confrontation is ready to commence.  :)

Author's Response:

Haha - you're the first person to actually mention the text she sent him. I, too, was sad Bella took the extreme of cutting herself - but I guess everyone reacts to personal pain differently.

Thanks for the read and review - I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa