Great story!  I just finished reading all 11 chapters in one sitting, so this single review will have to suffice.  GO, BELLA!  I Love her kickassedness (love that word, too!).  Ch. 11 was fun reading - I relish getting inside E's head - and I'm glad that with help from Bella, Carlisle and others he's Finally seeing the error of his ways. That he couldn’t keep himself away from Bella’s window was *so* Edward – but thank goodness he kept himself from going in! I laughed out loud when he fell out of the tree and then learned he hadn't gone unseen – score another for Bella!  I can't wait to learn the contents of the note he left in Bella’s truck (the cala lily was a very romantic touch), and I'm really looking forward to reading more as E learns how to woo B the right way - I’m sure it’ll be both romantic and comical! [C'mon Edward, you can do it!]  Please update again soon - waiting is soooo hard...

Author's Response:

Oh I'm so thrilled you found my story and loved it. I'm honored you read it all in one sitting as some of the chapters are pretty wordy. These characters sure can be long-winded. hahaha I'm so excited about the wooing and courting that's coming up. I just know there's a serious romantic in Edward dying to throw Stalkward aside and really win Bella's hand the right way. =)

Thanks for joining this crazy adventure and leaving me your thoughts. I love hearing what my readers think about how the story is going for them.

Much love,

~Lisa

ha ha loved it !! I love bad boys and Edward crashes out of a freakin tree that has me rollin over here lol

Author's Response:

Well - Bella does have quite the love for Bad Boys. ;) I just don't think Edward was expecting her to express it in quite that way. hahaha

Thanks for staying on the rockin roller coaster with us and letting me know your thoughts on each chapter. I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa

I think it's a hoot that Edward fell out of the tree! Serves him right for not staying away like Bella asked!

Author's Response:

I agree =) Not only does it serve him right but it probably shocked the hell out of him that he actually fell.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review - I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa

haha Edward fell out of the tree!! :)

Badass Bella is in the house (I think the phrase is? lol)

I think Edward made some real progress this chapter - so I'm not too upset that he 'hijacked' it :)

Author's Response:

Well - I've forgiven him or hijacking it as his conversation with Carlisle really seemed to help him realize how much he's being a tool. Now we get the wooing and courting. Hooray - I love romance!

Thanks for riding the crazy train with me and leaving me your thoughts on each chap.

Much love,

~Lisa

still laughing about Edward falling out of the tree, hilarious! :) Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Oh me too any time I let my mind wander back to it. =)

Thanks for reading and leaving a review - I appreciate it.

Much love,

~Lisa

I liked that she gave him the show. Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response:

I liked that she did too - I was worried she'd suddenly get too shy and chicken out. ;)

Thanks for continuing to read and review - I love reading each and every comment.

Much love,

~Lisa

edward falling out of the tree was hysterical!  great chapter!

Author's Response:

Yes, it made for quite the mental image. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for continuing to read and leave comments - I appreciate it every time.

Much love,

~Lisa

Hahaha I agree, I love that Edward fell out of the tree!  I knew Bella was doing that on purpose (and in my head I said, "right on!") but I was still pissed that Edward was there.  Like, really buddy, you have this epiphany that you don't respect her wishes and then you disregard her rules?  Stupid boys.  I also love when Emmett talks about the Badass Bella show.  So appropriate!  Oh, and I like the blue panties.  Very nice touch!

Author's Response:

Hahaha - he deserved to fall out of that tree after going over there when he wasn't supposed to. He's having a little trouble with the epiphanies versus the desires - but I'm hoping he'll concentrate more on the wooing and courting now. Less likely to get in trouble that way. =)

I couldn't resist the underwear - I knew it was just the thing to throw Edward over the ledge.

Thanks for staying on this crazy ride with me and leaving me your thoughts on each chap. I love hearing your opinions.

Much love,

~Lisa

between the badass Bella show and Edward falling out of a tree- this chapter was HILARIOUS!!

the chapter between Edward and Carlisle was really good- it covered a lot of things and i think carlisle got some stuff through to him that only carlisle would have been able to.

I must say I was so mad at Edward for going there. i was expecting him to maybe toss rocks at her window or knock on it to ask permission. but edwards a lil perv lol

I like the Bella that you've created. Shes truly strong. Much stronger than SM ever gave her the ability to be.

Author's Response:

I love that you loved it. And hey - at he bit his fist instead of pillows - for now. ;) I agree that Carlisle really got some much need points through to Edward in a way that only Carlisle can. Because of that - I've forgiven them for hijacking this chapter and making me start over. Edward is a little perv isn't he? Don't think that little golden nugget of info won't come up. =)

Thanks for keeping me going by reading and continuing to let me know what you think of each chapter. I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa

I loved the whole muthafuckin thing! and when edward fell out of the tree it was  fuckin awesome i knew she knew from the 'mysterious smile' i was like 'god, edward you dumbass - she totally knows!' haha please keep them coming i love it!

Author's Response:

Your review made me laugh out loud - so thanks for that. Laughing never gets old. I'm glad you liked it - including clumsy Edward - that must have felt so strange for him. =)

Thanks for continuing to ride the rockin' roller coaster with me and leaving me your thoughts. I love them.

Much love,

~Lisa

This was too much.  I love it!  Having Edward fall out of the tree was over the top.  I hope Alice shared his little mishap with everyone and he has to face the teasing of his siblings.  I can hear Em giving Eddie crap about coming home spotless after hunting mountain lion, while stalking Bella leaves him a train wreck.  Too much, too much

Author's Response:

Haha - you make a good point. Edward, usually so controlled becomes a human teenage clutzy boy all because of Bella. It'll be interesting to see just how and when his family finds out. You know Edward isn't going to share those deets. =)

Thanks for staying on the roller coaster ride this story has become and leaving me your thoughts on each chap. It thrills me every time.

Much love,

~Lisa

 

I really like that Bella is not allowing Edward to control everything. And him falling out of that tree was priceless. Great story!!

Author's Response:

Well, Bella had decided that Edward isn't allowed to have the final word anymore - and that's certainly going to be entertaining. Especially when things like falling out of trees happen. =)

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts - I love it.

Much love,

~Lisa

Bella asking if Edward enjoyed the show was my favorite part.  Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response:

Yeah - it was a favorite of mine to because you just know if he could blush he would after getting busted. =)

Thanks for reading and reviewing - I appreciate it.

Much love,

~Lisa