Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Fractured Hearts
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

I liked angery bella.Go bella, kick some Cullen boo-tay. You go girl.

 

keep rocking it!



Author's Response:

Haha - thanks. I have to admit I didn't want to write this chapter. I tried so hard to write it any other way than the way it turned out. But the Bella in my head absolutely insisted it had to be this way. She's quite stubborn. ;) Thanks for continuing to read and review. I'm loving it!

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2: Voicemails

This should be SM`s bella for the very simple fact of THIS IS WHAT SOME ONE DOES WHEN THE LOVE OF THERE FREAKING LIFE UP`S AND LEAVES.

{Smoothes down hair}

Thank you for writing this and from one strong woman to another, thanks for keeping it real.

I would love to read the other voice mails, maybe posted aport from the story?

 

keep rocking it!



Author's Response:

Why thank you so much. I obviously felt that Bella should've fought harder. I mean SM made it clear that Bella was an intelligent girl and then had just accept all that BS in the woods? I don't think so. It's actually quite funny how loud the Bella in my head is, as well as all the other characters, I kinda had no choice but to write this. It was that or never sleep again. ;) I'll consider perhaps writing a one-shot chapter of the remaining voice mails once this story is over. A few people have expressed an interest, and they certainly went through the gamut of emotions as she progressed from despair to anger. Thank you for taking the time to read - and to leave me a review. I deeply appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

I almost cried when she laid it down on Jasper. So, he's gonna teach her to play chess, huh? Nice!

LOL!! Rose was about to beat her ass!!! The tires and the shoes!! Classic!

~Shay~ 



Author's Response:

Jasper and Bella have a connection. It's not a sexual connection - like I've seen a lot of people write - but it's a connection all the same. Her faith in him to be able to control himself is like a salve to his soul. He's not sure why she has such faith in him, when even he doesn't - but he can feel her sincerity and it means the world to him. Yes, Rose was about to go vamp on her ass, but I think Bella did a great job of making her point. ;) haha

~Lisa

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

I love Bella and Jacob's friendship. It pains me everytime she grabs that arm. Poor Bella!

~Shay~  



Author's Response:

When she grabs that arm it pains me too, especially as it's become an unconscious gesture that she doesn't even realize she's doing.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

A little Jasper and Alice action, huh? That was hot, Lisa!

~Shay



Author's Response:

Yes, I've been getting teased that the only lemon in my Edward and Bella story isn't even E/B. ;)  I can't help it. Alice and Jasper just have that wild chemistry going on.

~Lisa

Reviewer: karajgil (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Reality Check

okay so i almost died when Edward fell out of the tree, that was hilarious. i am loving this story just because when edward left bella it never sat well with me that she just took him back. i would have been beyond pissed and he would have had to prove his love not just act like nothing ever happened. i've been looking for a story like this for so long, i love it



Author's Response:

Well, I'm so glad you found this story - especially if it's what you've been looking for. As you can see, I felt Edward had some serious 'splainin' to do as well. Now, these two kids are going to learn how to love each other and be together - together. They both have a lot to learn, but I'm guessing it's going to be a lot fun. ;) Thanks for reading and for taking the time to drop me a note that you're enjoying it. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

I just flipped by and noticed that you hit the ONE THOUSAND mark!!!!!

WOOHOO!  Did your computer spit out confetti and shake you awake in the middle of the night!?!?  If it didn't, it totally should have and you should look into buying the software for that program.  ;)  *mwah!* Congrats! 

p.s. cfDAD totally deserves some A/J-style love for being your enabler/fanclub!!  Then, write about it for us! Hehe.



Author's Response:

Haha - thanks. *mwah* No my computer didn't wake me up - but my cell phone did chime an alert that I had a message. I check it only to discover that my husband had typed my 1000th review while lying in bed next to me. He's a sneaky one. ;) I don't think I'll write about the celebration lovefest - but I will definitely enjoy it. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

Congrats on your 1000th review. Now let's but that island and find those handcuffs.

Author's Response:

I love that you're my biggest fan! I adore you and I'm swinging the fuzzy handcuffs around my wrist waiting for you to get home. ;)

We will buy that island one day. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

I loved this chapter!  I hope they eventually can be intimate!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Trust me, you're not alone in hoping that's the direction these two take. I'm getting a lot of requests for lemonade. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

Ahh Lisa,


 


Do you know why this is one of my very favorite chapters?  Yep, I thought you would. ;)


Alice & Jasper’s little teasing game while she’s getting ready to go see Bella is one reason I like it.  I can just see the lusty smirk on his face.  Teeheehee


 


“Ponder on this image while you’re gone, my dear.”


He’s so naughty!


“Damn that man!”


Alice, you took the words right out of my mouth!


 


I also loved it when Bella answered the phone and immediately laid into Alice.


“Rude much, Alice?”


The pixie ballerina isn’t going to know what hit her.  Hahaha


 


Have you found the cuffs yet? ;)


 


~Jen



Author's Response:

Hahaha - this chapter is still one that's near and dear to my heart. The entire chapter had me laughing in surprise as I wrote it. The girls are quite snarky with each other, but they make up. I love them. =)

Handcuff search is in full swing. ;)

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Wish Upon A Star (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

I have to admit I'm embarrassed.  I really like Evanescence, Kelly Clarkson, and the Goo Goo Dolls, but I've never heard those songs before.  *shut up.  I MEAN IT THIS TIME!!*

Imaginary Emmett and imaginary Abby are arguing over how to get me the songs.  Imaginary Emmett says You Tube.  Imaginary Abby says iTunes.  I think I'll just ask imaginary Alice to go to the imaginary mall for me and get the CD's.  Wait, no, she'll be there all day.  *calls imaginary Edward over and asks if he can do a huge favor and get the CD's*

RSFTC:  I used to be a schizophrenic, but now we're all better.



Author's Response:

Haha - well I have to say I'm glad I provided some new songs for you to enjoy. ;) Hopefully imaginary Edward did a stellar job of obtaining the music you needed. I agree that Alice would've not only taken a lot longer, she would've brought back more than you asked for and you would've needed imaginary McGee to help you sort through them all.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Wish Upon A Star (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

Adding that to my nicknames list.

OMHIJ!!

RSFTC:  I saw g-d and she's black.



Author's Response:

I'm going to take a guess here - are you adding pint size pain in the ass to your nicknames list? And I have to confess that I for the life me cannot figure out what OMHIJ means. I'm confuzzled.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Wish Upon A Star (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

This was downright incredible!! 

RSFTC (and I imaginary Ziva thinks this fits quite well): Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional.



Author's Response:

There you are. I've been wondering where you've been. I'm so glad to see that you and all your imaginary companions are okay. I can understand why imaginary Ziva would provide the RSFTC quote for this chapter. Esme's pretty kickass - much like Ziva. I'm glad you liked it,

~Lisa

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 6: Toture Devices

I really loved how Jasper checked Edward! That was classic!

~Shay~



Author's Response:

Only brothers can get away with stuff like that and really Edward kinda deserved it. I laughed so hard when Jasper told me that little bit. I had to push away from the keyboard. For real.

~Lisa

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

Yes, ma'am I'm trying to get all caught up on my reviews, but I love Bella and Alice's relationship. I love how Bella's trying to hold on to her anger towards Alice, but she can't. You're an awesome writier!

Love,

~Shay~



Author's Response:

Why thank you ma'am. Did you know that if you review the rest of the chapters you'll kick me over 1000 reviews! *happy Alice dance*  And really - who could stay angry at Alice for very long? I know I can't. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

I loved this chapter, not as much as 'Blood doesn´t make a mother', but I've lots of fun reading it...Rose was asome.Also see Edward really trying to do thigs well with Bella is so cute!!!   XD

hope you up date soon I'm really looking foward to see what activity he has choose for them to spend Saturday...

You're soing a great job...keep working

Kisses. R. 



Author's Response:

Aw - thanks. Blood Doesn't Make a Mom was a really popular chapter. Esme really made an impact with the readers that surprised me, but really I guess it shouldn't have. How could anyone not just adore Esme?  I got some good work done on chapter 19 today and the group date is shaping up to be a lot of fun. Real life threw my writing schedule all out of whack this past week, but it's getting there. Thanks for continuing to read and I appreciate the review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: sagefemme (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

[pout] have we seriously heard the last of the Badass Bella Show? [/pout]

seriously, though, I've been so busy that I got to read TWO chapers of FH today!  What a treat!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - you don't really think Emmett will admit he lost the match do you? And even if he does admit it - I doubt he'll stop his antics as he loves the punishment he receives from Rose. ;) Thanks for reading and I'm sorry you're caught up again, but I am working on the next chapter so I hope to have an update soon.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

I love that Edward is letting go a bit.. he needed to loosen up... can't wait to see how the date goes



Author's Response:

Oh Joy, I'm a little sad you're all caught up now. I'm working on the next chapter which has a lot of shape to it as it was supposed to happen in this chapter, but then the boys started playing and well... you read what happened. ;) I'm in completely agreement that Edward should let go a little and let himself have fun. I think his group date plans will go a long way in doing just that. Thank you so much for taking the time to not only read, but also leave reviews along the way. I have enjoyed each and every one.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

I like that Bella is talking to Edward about things that matter.. Hopefully, they will start moving toward more romance, friendship and understanding..I know they can find a good balance



Author's Response:

See. Baby steps. They both screw up. They both find a way to move forward. Edward may be immortal - but he is a frozan as a 17 year old teenage boy. Those hormones have to play a factor somewhere. And Bella? Well, she may come across as a 35 year old trapped in a teenager's body - but don't let her fool you. Her hormones are kicking in as well. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 14: Too Much Testosterone

I sort of felt bad for Edward...especially since Jacob is totally crushing on Bella.  He is trying to grasp everything that has to change between him and bella, then Jacob is thrown in... I just wish Bella woudl be a bit more understanding.  True, he hurt her, but his reasons, while totally male, came from a good place...I can't imagine loving someone so much that I would take mself away from them if I thought it best.. I am too selfish



Author's Response:

Don't worry. She does realize she was a bit brutal and actually wrong here. Don't lose faith. ;) Like I said, she's never done this before either so she's going to make mistakes, just like he will. The kids can't be perfect. They'll stumble, fight, even hurt each other - but they'll learn, grow, and get closer because of it. I wouldn't have them go through all of this just to keep them apart. I promise.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Love the story but I could have done without the Jacob date factor...LoL



Author's Response:

Haha - don't worry. There is not a triangle in this story. I am anti-love triangle. Jacob is a friend and only a friend. Period. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 11: Reality Check

I love when he fell out of the tree...Priceless... I just hope he doesn't blow things again



Author's Response:

Haha - well we are talking about Edward. He's bound to find some ways to still screw up. He might be immortal, but he's as new at this love thing as Bella. The mistakes they make together should be a lot of fun to watch. ;) Thank you for your support.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

I laughed, bu mostly I cried at the pain Bella has felt, especially with Esme.  This is a great story!!!  I love it!!



Author's Response:

You know, I keep forgetting to go back and add a tissue warning at the beginning of this chapter. I'm sorry for the crying, but hopefully the showdown with Rosalie made up for the crying with Esme. Thank you so much for continuing to read and drop me reviews along the way. I always get a contact high when a new reader joins the fray. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 6: Toture Devices

Woo Hooo.. !!!  Love it... the packages are beyond brilliant!



Author's Response:

Haha - yes, well, Bella had to find a way to inflict pain and I think she did it rather sucessfully. Edward never saw it coming either. Kapow - right to the kisser. ;) I cheered quite a bit for Bella writing this chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your reviews and hearing what you think. Keep 'em coming.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: Voicemails

Oh I loved the messages..,.I could read 100 of them!!!  Keep it coming!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you've discovered my little story and are enjoying the ride. It's gets a little wild and we have a lot of fun. Thanks for reading and for dropping me a line about how much you like it. =) I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Submit a Review




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.