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Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

That was one of the sexiest things ever...bella and that ice cube...well this is hotting up and is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!  That was a fun date too, sounds perfect!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so. ;) I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story and it certainly does seem to be heating up. The group date was fun - I wish I lived closer to Seattle. I'd take my kids to Winterfest. Thank you so much for the review and your continued dedication reading this story. I never fail to appreciate it.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

phew ! hot stuff !



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate the review and I'm virtually fanning you with a palm frond. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Great chapter.  They are starting to move along which makes the story much more interesting in my opinion.  I really enjoyed the last part of the chapter it had my LOL with Edwards reactions.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, things seems to really be on a roll now. And of course, Edward - never having reacted like this before - is quite funny. Can you imagine having all that intensity directed at you? No wonder Bella needs ice... ;) Thank you so much for reading and I truly appreciate the review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Whew!  Now I'm overheated!  Gosh, girl!  That was hot at the end!

I'm so glad that Jasper could handle everything.  It sounded like such a fun day for them.

I like that you are doing so many different and cool things in this story.  This is what I wished had happened instead of Bella becoming such a ghoul for all those months and then suddenly taking him back, no questions asked.  Thank you for writing this.  This is my new New Moon.



Author's Response:

*waves big palm frond to fan you* Sorry I didn't put a heatwave warning. ;) I was so happy that Jasper not only handled everything, but also really had a good time. The fact he was a great dancer surprised me a little, but Edward's right - he loves it because Alice loves it. I'm thrilled that you like all the different things they're doing and experiencing in this story. I'm honored and humbled that this is your new New Moon. Thank you for continuing to gift me with your reviews and continued reading of this story. I never fail to appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: twilightgal4eva (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

gah this chapter was amazing! ah! way to leave me hanging!



Author's Response:

Sorry about the cliffhanger but this monster chapter had to end somewhere. ;) Don't worry though - it won't be quite so long between updates this time. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Well, I have missed you and your underwear with an attitude!  And you know I mean Bella's undies, as of course, I have no idea whatsoever about your under garments!!  This was a sweet chapter, especially the "girl" talk.  Winterfest sounds like fun-we haven't been up to Seattle in a long time.

I can hardly wait until Edward shows up at her window-who knew that a foot rub at an ice rink could be so hot!



Author's Response:

Haha - my underwear has attitude too and is usually where most of my message ideas come from. ;) Winterfest does sound like fun doesn't it? If only I didn't live on the complete opposite corner of the US. Thanks for your continued dedication in reading my story - I truly appreciate, especially in light of this last chapter's delay.

~Lisa

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

LOVED this chapter. Jasper struggling for control at the beginning, seeing glimpses of the Cullen capabilities throughout the day, the Cullens blending in with food and what not, and the "girl" talk leading to the foot massage (my favorite pasttime BTW ... well, close to favorite) and the phone sex ... um can I just say "YUM"!



Author's Response:

Yes - foot rubs are at the top of my list as well. ;) I'm thrilled you loved this chapter so much, it was quite the monster to write. That group date was certainly a better venture than the movies. Thank you so much for reading and for leaving a review. I truly appreciate your continued dedication.

~Lisa

Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Go Bella.  She shocked me with the commando line!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - yeah she shocked me with that line too. I guess she really took that girl talk to heart. ;) Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Woot, woot! The window is finally opened. 



Author's Response:

Yes - the window has been opened. Now, will Edward get there before the ice melts? ;) And if he does just how far will things go?

~Lisa

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

HOTTEST. CHAPTER. EVER!!!! Whew...I need an icecube! Edward? Can you bring ME an icecube? Please??? (fanning self)

Loved the date...sounded like so much fun. Great day for Jasper who passed with flying colors...Alice got to dance & be "human" for a chance with the girls. Good bonding all around. The footrub? Can't forget the footrub! ahem Yeah...also loved the lion & lamb..CUTE idea!

I liked how it was all so believeable...great job all around. Now, for the love of God...HURRY UP WITH THE UPDATE...THE ICECUBE'S MELTING FAST!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha -yes the ice is melting isn't it? Luckily it looks my writing schedule is back in sync with my life so the next chapter shouldn't take nearly as long. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it as much as you did. I know that when my husband gives me a foot rub I'm willing to do just about anything for him - so yeah Bella was a puddle of goo. ;) Thanks for taking the time to read and to leave me such an excited review. I truly appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Great chapter.  I love how they were able to spend the day with Angela and Ben.  I love how well Jasper did and the confidence boost it must have given him.  :)  The way you wrote the foot massage even had me a bit hot and bothered.  LOL!!  Can't wait to see how hot things get when Edward gets to Bella's.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much! The group date turned out rather well. They had a fabulous time, and even Jasper had a great time; something I think he was fairly certain wouldn't happen. The foot massage. *wink* Yes, well, I know that when my husband gives me a foot massage he can have just about whatever he wants from me. le sigh. I imagine Edward's hands, given his piano skills, would be quite skilled. Lucky girl! Thank you for your continued dedication to this story and for your review. I never fail to appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

OMG!  I can't wait till Edward gets there!!  Poor guy...he's trying so hard to be good!! 

Great chapter and date story!!



Author's Response:

I agree - poor Edward. He's been trying so hard to be good and keep his hands off Bella - so to speak. Bella however, is decidedly stubborn and determined. Ice? I mean what a naughty girl. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the date and the chapter. Thank you so much for the patience while I worked this chapter out and for the continued reviews. I never fail to appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Hot hot hot!  I loved the ending of that chapter!!!!  I loved that she took the initiative in pushing our reluctant boy.  I love that he could barely control himself!  I loved the flirting throughout the day!  I loved all the sweet moments!!!!  Keep it up and I"ll be waiting very anxiously for the next chapter!  I want the lovin'!



Author's Response:

Haha - thank you so much. I have to admit I was a bit nervous about this chapter. I have known the kids were headed in this direction, but I wasn't sure how or when it would happen. The fact it started during the group date caught me by surprise. Still, I can't really blame Bella. When my husband gives me a good foot rub I'll do just about anything he wants. ;)

Thanks for the patience while I made sure I got this chapter right. As you can see - it was quite the monster. I appreciate your continued reviews and like you - I'm looking forward to the lovin'. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

i loved it!!! update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The next chapter was just sent off to my beta for a second run of proofing. Hopefully it'll be up soon. =) I appreciate you taking the time to read and to review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

Dang girl, you go w/ your 1000+ reviews!! i'm here to add another. THis was another great chapter of course.

I love that edward's finally taking the initiative in their dating life. you do bring up a valid point. they never really had a real date!! Then again this is also a group date.. but he also took her to bella italia another night so that was good too!

but i do have one question... they're CARPOOLING with JASPER?? would carlisle allow that? would that be canon?? Good thing you're AU! Or else you'd be breaking some rules!!  LOL sorry couldnt resist.

and of course my favorite line was:

Closed until further notice,” she sneered as she turned on her heel and walked away. 

That was perfect! interesting thought.. romping in the snow.. but i wonder if htat would effect them anyway... they could always make "special shaped" snow angels in the backyard!!

Good times!! Can't wait till 19~



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha - yes they're CARPOOLING with JASPER. It is a good think I marked this AU isn't it? Carlisle would likely hit the roof. ;) Mari, you seriously crack me up. I knew you'd appreciate Rose's message, I mean Emmett really deserved it. lol

Thank you so much for your continued support and friendship Mari. It's something I cherish greatly.

~Lisa

Reviewer: ealla (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Martyr

keep wrighting

please ok



Author's Response:

Thank you. Just got the next chapter back from my beta. Hopefully it will go up tomorrow.

~Lisa

Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Martyr

More Please



Author's Response:

Well, I'm not sure if you're asking for more after chapter one or if you've read all 18 chapters so far and want more. I'm thrilled either way and sent the monster chapter 19 off to my beta today. Hopefully it'll go up soon. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

Thanks for the quick respond, I appreciate it! So sorry to hear about your family, I hope everyone is feeling better and so excited to read the group date part! Thanks again for taking the time to respond..your one of the best people on here who does that!! I'm glad my reviews brighten your day!



Author's Response:

They absolutely do brighten my day. =) Everyone is on the mend and feeling better, although I'm sure these coughs will last a while. Now to dig in to my weekend writing. *rub hands together in excitement* These kids have been chattering in my head all week. I'm excited to be able to finally finish it up. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

When's your next update? lol..I am very patiently waiting for it..I'm starting to get depressed that my email has been empty with no Twilighted updates from you..jk..you and your husband really must be celebrating your 1000 review..lol..please hurry I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey Stephanie, Sorry for the delay. I know it's been a little long. I was out of commission with a terrible migraine, the kids started back to school, then they came down with whooping cough, and work has been insane. Thankfully, it's not writer's block, but more just a bit of scheduling conflict. I have dedicated this weekend to remaining unplugged and finishing up the next chapter. It's doing well. This group date is an eye opening experience. ;) The 1000th review celebration was lovely - I knew those fuzzy handcuffs would come in handy. hahaha  I appreciate your gentle nudge. :)

~Lisa 

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

I like this chapter and oddly enough something I really loved was Carlisle`s using the Lords prayer as a mental block. Seems very like him. You`ve really done something in this story that I love, you showed how the Cullen`s have become Bella`s family as well.

Keep rocking it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I take your review as huge compliment. It has been very important to me to really show the family dynamic in this story. The Cullens are Bella's family in way that she's never really had family before. That was why their abandonment of her - coupled with Edward's - broke her down mentally so completely. And it's also why she's fighting so hard to get it all back. I continue to deeply appreciate your reviews.

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

So I suppose it really is true that 'hell hath to vengence like a woman scorned'.

 

Go Bella, go Bella, go go, go Bella.

Can`t wait to see what she dose to Edward.

Besides Bella being so kick-ass, this chapter also broke my heart in the beast of way.

Keep rocking it.



Author's Response:

Yes, the saying Hell hath no fury.... is a very true to life statement. Bella had to be creative in her revenge on the Cullens. She couldn't physically hurt them, but I think she handled things quite well - especially Rosalie. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

I love this story.



Author's Response:

Haha - I'm glad even through the Jacob chapter you love this story. A lot of people were a little put out that Jacob is still in the story. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

I LOVE Alice.

 

{Runs off to read next chapter}



Author's Response:

I LOVE Alice, too. Does it show? haha

 

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Toture Devices

I wonder what Bella has in store for the whole Cullen`s family.

Mwwhhhaaaa.

 

keep rocking it.



Author's Response:

Well, since I know you've read it by now - I'll just say that I hope you felt it was appropriate. ;) Keep rocking the reviews. I'm still loving them.

~Lisa

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

How sad, your tugging on my heart string.



Author's Response:

Damn. I always forget to go back and post a tissue warning alert on specific chapters. I don't think about it because the chapters that people tell me need it have chapter titles that would make you think otherwise. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying it and along for the ride. Thanks.

~Lisa

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