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Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls
Once again, great interactions with the siblings, especially Rosalie this time. (and yay!, a boob graze from Edward!)
Author's Response: Hahaha - a boob graze. You're hilarious. :) And yes, it was fun to watch Rosalie finally put a halt on Emmett's little game. He so deserved that, but I'm betting he doesn't mind her take down at all. ;) Thank you so much for continuing to read and leave these reviews. I look forward to each one.
~Lisa
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty
Lisa,
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing every chapter. I'm reading most of the chapters on my Ipod and for some unknown reason I can't type a review from there on twilighted.
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I love how free and easy they're becoming with each other. As always, I'm loving the interactions with A, R & E.
Best of all, I LOVED her message panties. What a crack up. Even better, how yummy was Edward on the chase for Bella? More please! Not sure if you've said it in earlier A/N or not but I'm hoping this story will have lemons. Right now though, the UST is delish.
Keep up the great work. I think you're doing a great job at developing their characters. Thank you so much for giving us a strong Bella, and an unsure Edward who's willing to try and change.
love, Richelle
Author's Response: Richelle, please don't apologize for not reviewing every chapter. I've enjoyed the reviews you have done and I consider each one a gift not a requirement. :) I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story, especially the way that I am fleshing out all the other Cullens to have a more pivotal role. I know that I always wanted to see more of them in the books, I thought I might not be the only one. ;) Hahaha - yes the message panties have become quite popular among the readers. I've gotten emails and reviews asking where to find them, or telling me about pairs they've come across while shopping, and I even had one reader have the pairs I've mentioned in the story so far custom made for herself. And without spoiling anything I would say there will be some citrusy chapters up ahead. Thank you so much for reading, and for reviewing. I appreciate it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Ok, now I'm caught up. I'm glad that Jasper and Edward had their talk. Edward needed someone who understood how he felt to set him straight.
Loved it.
Kisses.
Author's Response: Kisses back. :) I agree that no one could've gotten through to Edward in this instance better than Jasper. I think that talk was way overdue, but at least we can keep our fingers crossed that it will resonate with Edward. :) Thank you for your continued dedication to not only reading this story, but for also always leaving a review. I never fail to realize how blessed I am to have readers like you.
~Lisa
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Rounding Second
Oh hon! I'm getting caught up. I'm so glad that they finally pushed some of their boundaries. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: I noticed I hadn't seen you for a few chapters. I'm guessing your caught up in the crazy schedule like the rest of us. :) Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it, and yes, things are certainly starting to get interesting. ;) As always, I appreciate the review. I hope life is treating you well.
~Lisa
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead
Emmett and Rosalie were really great in this chapter. And who couldn't love Charlie as fierce Papa Bear. Great job.
Author's Response: Haha - I'm extremely excited that you enjoyed this chapter, especially as so many other characters are getting face time. I always wanted more from the secondary characters in the books and once I started writing this I realized that they all had a lot to say. :) Thank you for your continued dedication to not only reading my story - but also for reviewing. It makes my day. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
DEAR LISA AND MUCH BELOVED
WANT TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'M PROUD OF YOU. I WAS SURE THAT YOUR TALENT WOULD BE RECOGNIZED.
THANK YOU FOR YOU TO BRING IN so loving and LOVING THESE FICS. OUR BEST DAYS ARE YOURS ..
MOTHER HOW WE ALREADY KNOW HOW YOU ARE SUPER PROTECTIVE AS WIFE IS VERY DEDICATED, AND ALWAYS WILLING TO SINCERA MORDER WHO DOES "MAL" FOR YOUR DHG'S. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WOMAN, THE MANY FACES ... I am proud to know you ....
CONGRATULATIONS FOR PARTICULAR (Cullen best novel and it also has Fire and Ice under The Jasper Award for best one-shot AND The Razzle Dazzle has Fractured Hearts Awards under the Best Post). CONGRATULATIONS GIRL. WE DHG'S AND THEIR DEAR READERS WILL TOGETHER FOR THIS ACHIEVEMENT AWARD. (I KNOW HOW IT STANDS FOR YOU, WILL BE RECOGNIZED AS A WORK HARD AND DEDICATED).
KISSES TE AMO
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
Author's Response: Aww - Diana. Thank you for saying such pretty words to me. My heart warms at all the ways you complimented me - as a mother, a wife, a writer, a friend.... You are such a special person and I feel blessed to call you friend. Thank you for the well wishes on the Sparkle Awards and Razzle Dazzle Awards. Even if I don't understand all these awards, it's exciting all the same. :) Thanks for always reading and reviewing with such excitement. I appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
EI LISA (EviLisa-LAUGHS)
LISA WOMAN, QUEEN SMUT, YOU KNOW THAT I LOVED THIS INTERACTION OF JASPER WITH EDDIE. FOI LINDO READ THAT JAZZ WILL PROTECT AND ALICE BELLA so fierce, LOLLL. EDDIE NEED THIS ALERT TO MIHA JASPER pleasant surprise was who said that. I earnestly hope MASTER EDDIE GET YOUR MONSTER INSIDE AND YOU MAY HAVE AS BELLA WOMAN. ALIAS SIMPLISMENTE I LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE BELLA, AFTER PASSING THROUGH SO MUCH PAIN, NOW SHE IS AN AMAZING WOMAN, resolute, bold, WANTING TO TAKE THE LINK TO A HIGHER LEVEL, MORE MATURE.
EDDIE NEEDS SUCH LOVE, IT HAS TO TRY HOW TO BE A MAN IN ALL DIRECTIONS, BECAUSE HE NEVER HAD SEX.
A SCENE IN WHICH HE RETURNS TO THE HOUSE OF BELLA AND ORDERS Lie down in bed again, LOLLLL I saw something great will happen ... SO YOU MATA YOUR NEWLY CREATED MONSTER (U.S. CHICA BRAZILIAN LAUGHS) ...
CONGRATULATIONS GIRL, YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE how you write, as clear, consistent. READING IS EASY is always dynamic.
THOUSAND KISSES
DIANA-CHICA BRASILEIRA.
Author's Response: Hahaha - oh my Diana. I do so adore the enthusiasm for my story, especially as you don't usually like to read Edward/Bella stories. I'm glad that I could change your mind - at least for a little bit. ;) I can see that the teasers have you really excited for the next chapter. That's good. I like keeping people anxious for more. Was that evil? Hahahaha - maybe a little. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap
GREAT chapter. I so loved the throw down with Rosalie.
Author's Response: Hahaha - yes, was probably one of the most popular chapters. Everyone was anxious for the throw down with Rose, and I think Bella handled herself pretty well considering she never could've physically hurt Rose. I'm so thrilled you liked it as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Again, I appreciate it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Martyr
Good start, great Alice.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked Alice in this chapter. Thank you so much for giving this story a chance and taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Lisa it always makes my day finding out that you updated, especially when it’s a chapter as significant as this one. Congratulations it was really great and worth the waiting!!! I loved the deeps of Jasper’s interaction in this chapter. I think it was really necessary for Edward that someone told to him just that and Jasper was the best one for the job (after all he knows better than anyone what is going on with the emotions of others). I’m sure this was the right push that Edward needed to start trusting himself with all this new feelings and start talking with Bella about them (I hope he puts it in practice), in the end a good relationship needs two active sides to be successful. I was really thrilled with Jasper’s new connection with Bella, especially when he threatened Edward and in his last speech (it was so meaningful). You made me giggle when Edward found the underwear it was really funny seeing him so enthralled by it.
I’m really looking forward to your next update, can’t wait to see what happens when Bella wakes up. As always, I’m sure it’ll be something worth waiting for and reading. Keep on working you are doing a great job.
Kisses. R.
PS: I hope your life is treating you well…
Author's Response: R, your review just made my entire morning. :) I have to admit that positive response to this chapter has been overwhelming. Apparently there are a lot of readers that love Jasper, and felt that he was the perfect choice to give Edward that much needed push. Sometimes a big brother can make you see things in a new way that puts everything in perspective. I also think that it was extremely important that Edward realize how the family, especially Jasper, wouldn't be walking away from Bella again. If it came down to a choice - they would be choosing Bella the next go round. Talk about a shocking moment. I actually pushed away from the keyboard when Jasper threatened Edward. I guess I should have seen that coming, but I didn't. I do think that things will be much better for everyone from here forward. And yes, I giggled as well when Edward discovered Bella's panty drawer. How it didn't occur to him that it would be her underwear drawer I'll ever know. I also never pegged Bella for a thong wearer. ;) Thank you so much for your continued dedication to this story and for leaving me such lovely reviews. I truly appreciate it. And life is treating me wonderful, I hope it is also smiling on you. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
The conversation was much needed, but i can feel edward's frustration at jasper's "Timing." He's actually my least favorite male of the cullens, for some reason i never found his character attractive, but i've always respected him. this chapter helps me to respect him more, and as i told you on your thread,i was a bit surprised that he's willing to go head to head w/ eddie for bella's sake.
can't wait to read the next chapter... i'm looking forward to some strawberries and cream!! BellaBuffet here we *he* COME!
Author's Response: Oh, I can feel Edward's frustration too. I think we all can. hahaha However, I think it was good for him to have some time to actually cool completely down from what had just happened. If he wants any chance of being able to focus soley on Bella and not um - release too quickly - again, he's going to need to get that raging lust under control. *snicker*
I found it surprising that Jasper's willing to go toe to toe with Edward on this point as well. At first I didn't understand it. Then I realized that it wasn't just because of Bella, but it was also because of Alice. First and foremost, Jasper will always do what it takes to keep Alice from being hurt. Even when that means going against the family. I'm honored I was able to make him at least a little more interesting for you. ;)
Thanks for the review, Mari. I love hearing your take on things and I appreciate your support so much. Now back to the writing of Strawberries and Cream. Yum.
~Lisa
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
lmao...love the whole message panty plot. Can't wait until she wears that thong for him ;)
Author's Response: Hahaha - yeah I never pegged Bella for a thong girl, so she surprised the hell out of me too. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving a review. I really appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: FanFic4SANITY32 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm hard at work on the next chapter. I posted a teaser in my forum thread - if you're interested in getting a sneak peek. ;) I appreciate you taking the time to leave me a review. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
I love your Jasper. He's so insightful to the emotions of the family while Bella was gone. It makes her seem like such a true part of the family.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel like Jasper's often misunderstood or considered brooding and sullen. I really feel like this conversation was needed. Edward needed to be told what the family suffered when Edward made them all leave, and why Jasper (and the rest of the family) wouldn't allow that to happen. I'm glad you liked it. As always I deeply appreciate your continued dedication to reading and reviewing this story. It makes my day. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: lacyangel32 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
I love this story line! Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for giving this story a chance and letting me know you're enjoying it. I appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: FanFic4SANITY32 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen
Rose's shoes, God that was freaking great. She should have hit her with the hammer since she didn't have the boxing gloves. Love this story, Bella should have been this pissed in the original.
Author's Response: Haha - I doubt the hammer would've Rose's hard head much either, but it would've been funny as hell. I'm glad you found this story and that you're enjoying it so much. Thank you for reading and for reviewing. I deeply appreciate it. : )
~Lisa
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
I'm assuming there would be lemons next chapter noe that Edward let go of his inhibitions.
Author's Response: Well, now that he's had the eye opening chat with Jasper I think he's certainly going to try to um...go forward with Bella. ;) Sorry if I mislead you into thinking this chapter would have the lemons, but we know that Edward has quite the mental issues to work through. We can't expect him to rush into it all at once. :) Thank you for continuing to read and review - I always appreciate it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
I love this story I laughted my ass of at some of the stuff bella does and that makes this story great................good job and keep it up........I read the first 20 chapters the other day and 21 today glad i didnt start this story to soon i would have been nuts to have to have waited but now it is worth the wait.....
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad that you gave my story a chance and that you like it. Bella is quite an entertaining little thing. She has surprised me on numerous occasions with her tricks. ;) I can't believe you read 20 chapters in one day. Please accept some virtual eye drops as a token of my gratitude. Thank you so much for reading, for reviewing and for laughing. I aim to entertain and I appreciate each of my readers so much. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks
Was a bit unsure about this fic first but now I can't stop reading! I totally agree that in SM's version Bella really forgave the Cullens way too easily. They shouldn't have abandoned her regardless of Edward's demands, it was a cruel thing to do.
Bella's revenge on Edward was sweet, looking forward to seeing what she has planned for the others!
Author's Response: Wow -thank you so much for giving this story a chance even if you weren't sure about it. I'm thrilled that I managed to make you a fan along the way. I can't wait to hear your reactions throughout the rest of the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I deeply appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Finally, Sorry about all that but I wanted to be number 1300 and since I wasn't I had to wait for 1313. So, I waited and waited now I have to go to sleep and by the time I woke up I would've missed it and had to wait until 13,000. I know it will not be long but I grew tired of waiting.
As for this chapter sounds like Jasper did something good. I'm just happy to have our bed back to just us. Bella and Alice I'm ok with especially when it's so hot out. Snuggling to you my heat rock and then the two of them like Ice cubes on both sides. Speaking of ice (O never mind I guess we should keep that between us) but it's melted, Thank you...
As for the rest of this story I'm very happy you have something your so passionate about and to motivate you to work on your original story.
Keep up the outstanding work and know I'm always here for you. I can't help you write but I can rub your back and feet.
Forever ~ AJ
Author's Response: Oh my love - you did it. 1313. Such a lucky number for us. You never fail to surprise me. Your support for this little project has been unbelievable. Your encouragement for me to write and get published is what gives me the wings to just fly. I adore you so much that I often feel as if my heart will burst. I never believed in happily ever afters before the day you walked into my life. In a moment my entire outlook changed. It was like I had been sleepwalking through life, just going through the motions and getting by. But then we met and became friends and it was like for the first time - I was awake. There was color and life and so much love that I understood what people meant by true love. Because of you. Always because of you. You are the inspiriation for any and every love story that I ever write. Forever will not be long enough.
Always only yours,
~Lisa
Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Four
Author's Response: Four makes up our little family. You, me, the kids. The bond of friendship and love we share with extended friends and family always starts at home. The foundation of our little foursome grows stronger everyday.
Forever,
~Lisa
Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Three
Author's Response: Three ways that I love you. Physical, emotional, and spiritual. Everything that I am shines brighter because of you.
Forever,
~Lisa
Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Two
Author's Response: Two hearts that beat as one. My heart belongs to you, your heart belongs to me. Together we share one life - and one love.
Forever,
~Lisa
Reviewer: cfdad (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
Hey
Author's Response: Hey my love. I thought you were going to come to bed to snuggle, but I love that you wanted to leave me a review.
Forever,
~Lisa
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: Payback
love jasper's speech. i feel jasper stays quiet far too much. it was good to hear his voice.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the read and review. I always appreciate it.
~Lisa
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