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Reviewer: uscfbfan (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm liking it. Let it lead you where you wherever.
Author's Response: I will! Thanks so much for reading.
Reviewer: Lyra56 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm hooked!! I love the way you portray Edward, very hot and a gentlemen at the same time. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm happy you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: greenfairy (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love it so far! I like your writing style...it's not too verbose like some others on here. And I like how you've characterized Bella and Edward. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
i've never been good at verbose, so I'm glad it fits for you!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is so HOT! I'm loving it... sure EPV would be very nice,
thanks and please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'll update as soon as I can!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
i like this
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 4
this shit is good cant wait to find outt more ............ in my favs now for sure . wished i worked in a office.... keep on writing ....i'll be waiting
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
I also wished I worked in an office!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
I think this is great! the tension between E&B is awesome ... I can't help but feel it ! I would love an EPOV but I dont want a recap of the previous chapters ... I would make a new chapter with EPOV. Sometimes it gets too repetative if you repeat the same chapter. just a suggestion. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it.
I'm glad the tension comes across, it's how I intended it! :)
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 4
We want to hear Edwards POV next chapter!! Or, um, well, wherever you can fit it in..
I am feeling so greedy over this story- I want to read a new chapter every day!!! Definitely going to get at least 5 stars from me!
Okay, now ready for next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I wish I could update everyday! Unfortunately, work calls!
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love it!!! You should do it in Edward's POV. I would love to know what Edward was thinking!! Great add! Any chapter you want, perhaps this one or the one of the dance.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yes... I love Edward.......
Author's Response: As do I! Who doesn't love Edward?
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: byoko23 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is so well written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's nice to hear!
Reviewer: sleepyhead91 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
OME! totally LOVE this!! ur great! tht kiss scene wasnt even tht racy and it still turned me on! lol!! ur writing in ewards POV? ahhh!! cant wait!! hehehe keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was my first real make-out scene!
Still not sure about EPOV, but I'm thinking about it.
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
Too YUMMY! I like how this Edward gives Bella an opportunity to turn him down before he tries to (deliciously) seduce her. Purrrrfect....and only five stars?!?!! You've got to be kidding!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
HOLY COCKBLOCK, DAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Indeed! Way to ruin it all Carlisle!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
That was unexpected...can't wait to see where you go with this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
No extra POV...Love the story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I appreciate you taking the time to review!
Reviewer: llamainucsb (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
HOT
I think an EPOV would be really nice :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm still mulling over an EPOV.
Reviewer: GGtwinmom06 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok this is the one thing I hate hate hate about this site.. you guys stop and the worst places..
I am going to throw my laptop at someone..
I can't wait to read more..
XOXOXOX
J
Author's Response: Ha ha! I've also wanted to throw my laptop numerous times! It's fun to be the one causing the reaction for once. :)
Thanks so much for reviewing! Sorry about making you wait but I'm working on it now!
Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
Haha, the dad had to ruin it all. It's so funny when people get caught when they're doing something bad. Edward better not fire Bella. He caused it and Bella simply continued. You can't blame her, really. I agree. Bella may be in some trouble. Can't wait for the next chap. Update. xoxo-Tay-Ush
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
I had a lot of fun writing the chapter, including getting caught!
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
gaaah! finally. i bet he almost jizzed his pants when he saw her. I love it when Workward loses control bwahahaha!
I honestly hope he doesn't know what hes doing & i hope bella hides under a desk at one of his meetings and tortures him : D!!
Update soon please?
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can!
Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it! Workward is one of my favourite kinds!
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Edward was cockblocked by his dad, too perfect. I am actually glad that he did interupt them though. Make them sweat a bit.
Author's Response: Ha ha! Yeah, can't let them get everything they want so quickly!
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
I would love an epov for this chapter, and we could get the whole entire carlisle/edward argument.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I was thinking that section would be good to EPOV, but I want to get the next chapter out first.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
This was a good chapter. I thought for a moment they were going to get busy, but, nope. Darn it. They should admit their feelings for one another.
Please update soon?
The EPOV would be awesome, although, I don't know what chapter...
Author's Response: I'm writing the 5th chapter now. Hopefully I'll be done soon.
Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
Uh oh...someone is in trouble...but I think it's more Edward than Bella!
That was....HOT....!!!!
Thanks for sharing...
Kathie
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kathie! I realized I didn't rate your fic this time! I'll go back and do that.
Flex your beta muscles! More coming at you soon.
Reviewer: kmap111 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was very Interesting....Are you updating any time soon
i can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: I'll in all likelihood update mid next week. Sorry for the wait and I hope you keep reading. Thanks for the review!
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