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Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yay!  Take her away Charlie!  String that bitch up!  LOL!  Go get her Edward!  Crap.  He better take Emmett with him!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh crap!  Lauren better go to Edward!  Loved the whole Charlie thing!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 11

Gotta love Esme!  Loved the school story!  Great lemon too!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh no!  I smell a set-up!  LOL!  ...and Bella is soooo going to give it up!  I'm with Alice on this one! LOL!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9

AH!  Lightweight!!  ROLFLMAO!  Poor Edward!  Highly enjoyed that one!  10 is the right rating, right?  Well, I hope so!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hmmmm....I feel some baiting here.  This does not bode well.

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

Finally!  That was intense!  Well Done!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

Getting closer!  Well, unless Carlisle blows it.  LOL!  Finally!  On to Alice and Jasper!  *squeal*

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

I see trouble coming!  LOL!  I do wish Bella would just smack Lauren though.  *sigh*  Maybe next time.

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ooohhhh...BUSTED!  Poor Bella.  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ooooohhhhhh it is getting goooooddddd!  LOL!

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

Tease.  LOL!  Whom do I want to smack more?  Lauren or Edward?  Hmmmm...

Reviewer: Katherine Rosile Hale (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start...can't wait to see where it leads!  I hope that elevator gets stuck a little longer next time though.  LOL!

Reviewer: MegsD (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

I started reading this story yesterday, and finally finished it just a few minutes ago... I loved it!!

I really thought it was going to be a sweet love story, but then James came around and totally threw me for a loop!  Thankfully everything turned out Ok, and the epilogue made for the perfect HEA!

Thank you for this awesome story!

Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 11

Wohoo!! This story just keeps being wonderful. I really want to hear more about Alice and Jasper. You've done such a great job with both their characters, especially Alice, she's hilarious!

Reviewer: _StayC (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 16

I liked loved your story (:

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

Thank you so much for writing this story!

Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow.. SOOOOO well written. That was beautiful.

Now for the relationship. :D

Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

Awh too sweet! i loved it. as well as everything. cant wait to read ur next story!! (:

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was great story. I LOVED it. James got what he deserved. And I thoroughly enjoyed ch. 16. I loved how you summed it up. Great job on this. I'm sad to have finally reached the end, *wipes at lone tear* but I loved how it all turned out.

---------------Twi Lover 21

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 16

This story was bomb. You did very well writing your lemons. I wouldn't have know it was only your 1st time it you wouldn't have said anything.

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great 1st lemon. Please let their be many more.

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

THAT WAS A GREAT LIME!

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

A short but good 1st chapter

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

loved every word

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