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Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Nice juicy lemon! You did good!
Love the chemistry between them. Wonder if they are going to make it to the rest of the conference?
Like the touch about the tie...nice detail.
Regular updates make this reader happy...I like being happy!!!!
Author's Response: I'm all for regular updates! But life tends to crop up once in a while...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great Lemon! Now let's see how the next day goes!
Author's Response: Yes indeed! I'm starting to write it now!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
Of course Edward can't resist Bella prancing around in her undies, lol! Good lemon, too, especially for your first one. It's okay to be a little more graphic, though :-) And I'm excited that Alice and Jasper really hit it off! Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
With it being my first lemon, I was shy. :) I may get braver as I write more.
I personally love the idea of Edward being teased beyond his limit!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
uh.oh. heat of passion... is edward going to retreat
Author's Response: Hmm, good question. I usually have one plan for characters and then they sometimes don't listen. So we'll see!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
What an interesting story! I'm really enjoying it, and looking forward to its continuation.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter (it's up now!)
Reviewer: jasjosjaim069 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
FINISH your story is awesome
Author's Response: I fully intend to finish it! I've got my students' report cards to finish at the moment though so I have to ask you to be patient.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 6
great chapter.i can't wait to read what happens next.do we get to know what was said between edward and his father???post something soon.
Author's Response: Yes, eventually we'll see what Carlisle and Edward were saying to each other. If not through Bella than through an EPOV.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jkhjc1019 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very much enjoying your story. I love the fact that Alice and Jasper aren't together yet. And that Edward just glances over Rosalie even though that is canon it is great to read again. Look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so happy that you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
I am definately intrigued by this trip to seattle. I will be disappointed if Edward sticks to his word and behaves himself
Author's Response: As will I! I don't think you'll be disappointed. :)
Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love your fic!! And Jacob I will just say...YESSS SHE DON'T WANT TO STAY WITH HIM!! Lol (non I don't like jacob lol)
I wonder what Carlisle is gonna say to Edward?!?
I look forward to read the next chapter, I'm sure it's gonna be really great with the business trip;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Carlisle is looking out for Edward's best interests. He just wants him to be happy.
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
i love that you already got rid of the possibility of bella being with jacob. that's not what anyone wants unless yoru on team jacob and i'm definetly on team edward. lol does carlisle know edward is in love with her? bet he does. lol
Author's Response: I am team Edward as well!
I think Carlisle is a pretty perceptive person. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: What_The_Hale (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
Of course I want to show you some love! This was freaking awesome! Arghhhh I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I will update as soon as I can!
Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh I can't wait for the Alice and Jasper meet and greet. Awesome story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh I can't wait for the Alice and Jasper meet and greet. Awesome story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 6
OHHHH whats gonna happen in Seattle? Can't wait
Author's Response: Wait and see! I think people will be pleased!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JustFantasy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is such a fun story to follow please write more chapters!!!
you have such a good idea, i can't wait until seattle!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will write !more chapters, not to worry!
Reviewer: unwrittenkimber (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. True to form Bella, falling and hurting herself. I really want to hear Carlisle and Edward. Carlisle seems a little disappointed in Edward though, hope I am wrong. Looking forward to more soon. ~ Unwrittenkimber
Author's Response: I wouldn't say Carlisle is disappointed in Edward. At least I don't think so. :)
Thanks so much for the love! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMG!!! i can't wait till the next chapter comes out!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: hg20 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great as always. Bring on Seattle and Alice/Jasper!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yeah on Seattle!
Reviewer: hannahbeth96 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
i lLOVE it but could you pretty please write a EPOV? please???
Author's Response: I will write an EPOV, you have my word! Just not quite yet. Please don't hate me! :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh dear... poor Bella. On the upside, she has Edward care for her. *swoon*
I enjoyed your story so far, please do go on!
Author's Response: Edward is the best isn't he? :)
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Ellie is a freak name (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
ooh. this is getting pretty intense. can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love what you've written so far! I can't wait to read next chapter, hope you'll update soon!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: ullrix (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
just finished reading the whole story in a couple of hours and i must say i reeeeeeeally like it! please update soon, i can't wait :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
I'll update as soon as I can!
Reviewer: ullrix (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
love the story! really well written :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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