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Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter!!! i cant wait to see what crazy james is up to! and i think its hilarious that he works at seeker,inc. love the story, cant wait for more :)
-b
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
I liked the whole chapter. I do think Carlisle ought to have some reservations about the relationship; he voiced concerns before, why not now? I've really enjoyed your story! Also, the lemon was really nice, BTW!
Author's Response: I think Carlisle sees how happy she makes Edward and that's enough for him.
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
hehhehehhehe, you are awesome !!!
Author's Response: And so are you for reviewing! Thanks!
Glad you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 11
:D LOVE THAT!!!
ha. Write more fluff ;D
Author's Response: I will try to! I like writing fluff.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
Another hot chapter, well done! Off to take a cold shower now....
Oh, and I'm dying to see how this biz with James the Creep turns out, update soon please! I'm adding you to my favourites.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and rating! I will update soon, the chapter is all but finished.
Yay on going onto your favourites!
Reviewer: EdwardandBella2030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm loving the story so far - I'm so glad I found it!
Brilliantly written with very lovable characters - Alice & Rose! Bella and Edward go without saying... And of course Jasper and Esme and Carlisle and well, everyone (almost)! - and an interesting storyline.
I honestly don't know why, but I'm expecting James to rape Bella. This is going to sound absolutely horrible and disgusting, but I actually want that to happen so Edward beats the **** (couldn't decide which word to put there - your choice!) out of him. Plus, I love an angry Edward... ;)
Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us! =)
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Author's Response: I'm really happy you found my story and gave me such a nice review!
I fully intend to have Edward kick some a**. I won't say how it comes about though...
Thanks for the review! The next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
Lovely fluffy chapter. Enjoyed the interaction between Bella and Edward's parents. Loved the stories of Edward as a little boy. Really cute. Glad parents approve of her. Great Bella and Edward are together again. Hopefully James won't be able to cause any more trouble. Really like the story and looking for more. Take care and have a great week. Update when you can.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Edward's little boy stories were inspired by my husband, who actually did run away from school on his first day.
I will be updating very soon, the next chapter is pretty much done.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow!! That was HOT!! Really love your story and your writing. I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I shall be updating shortly!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 11
Love the dinner and the fluff!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you did!
Reviewer: sOo CrAzY sTaCy (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
That was pretty fluffy. I LOVED it!!!! It was worth the wait (for me, that is). I've been checking for updates multiple times per day :D. I can't wait to read more...I'm just too excited. This is getting a little suspenseful. lol. Thanks for sharing this story. I am dying to know what is going on with James. This is gonna be interesting...hmmm. I'll be waiting for the next update XD Oh...and I'm glad she gave in. It seemed like an eternity. lol.
Author's Response: Yes, it did seem like a long time but really, it was only a week! Ha ha!
I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. Sorry to make you wait so long, my job keeps me really busy!
Thanks so much for the review and rating! I will updating soon!
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh man.. can i have a nightcap with dear edward?!?! i could really use one ;) keep it coming b/c i just love this story, thanx for writing
chasity
Author's Response: I wouldn't mind one myself!
I'm so glad you like this story! It keeps me motivated to write it.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
I soooooo love DrunkBella!! Too funny! Great chappie!
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 10
Creepy!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Holy fucking God! What a hot chapter. I was actually panting along with them! I haven't reviewd up until now, 'cause I couldn't stop reading long enough. But I have to say, you have managed to ramp up the sexual tension quite beautifully! Great story so far! And now, back to it...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
Okay James is super slimy and uber creepy! I'm so glad that Alice talked Bella into telling Edward. Dinner with the parents was a lot of fun. Esme and Carlisle were a hoot, I hope you get to write more scenes with them! And the NIGHTCAP? So hot that they couldn't make it past the living room wall! That's the way I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks for a great review! I certainly enjoyed reading what you had to say!
I had a fun time writing Esme and Carlisle, I'm sure they'll figure in again.
Thanks again! An udpate should be coming soon.
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
A high degree of fluffiness. Yummy!
Author's Response: Fluffy like cotton candy! Mmmm...
Thanks for the review and rating!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
Loved the lemon....update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I will update shortly.
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
good fluff! Even better Lemon! awesome dinner with carlisle & esme & the embarrasing childhood eddie stories...
loved the update... update again sooN???
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had a good time writing the dinner scene!
I will be updating soon, but there was a pretty big break in between eh? *sigh* I can't get on a regular schedule!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Barakittie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
Brilliant, very well written as I said before,
The plotline is perfect and engaging,
Love it!!
xXx
Kittie
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you're enjoying it so far!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow up agaisnt the wall that was super yummy go girl i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Yes, that was fun to write!
Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up fairly soon.
Reviewer: spunkransom30 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
I need a cold shower!!! :) Love the whole story so far!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
love the story
Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy that you do!
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
I think Lauren will be causing some trouble in the near future-will she team up with James?? Oh, I love a man in glasses, too. Good update.
Author's Response: Mmm...glasses. As for Lauren...you will see!
Thanks so much fore reviewing and rating! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm so happy that your Bella has the good sense to tell Edward what's going on with James. I read so many stories where Bella refuses to let anyone in, and it's refreshing to read one where she does tell him and Alice. Awesome lemon, too!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Hi Sarah! You are one of my most consistent reviewers and I love you for it!
Yes, I have Bella tell all as I figure I would want my significant other to know everything too.
Thanks so much for the review and rating! A new chapter should be coming soon!
-Yuri-
Reviewer: jpoopy (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
loved this chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you did!
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