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Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Seriously gotta love Angela. Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Angela rocks! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Can't wait to hear from Bella again
Author's Response: You will. You will see her, if not hear from her, in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Am I 1800? That's just proof that you ROCK HARD!!! This story is so amazing! And this chap. is lovely.
Author's Response: Wahoo! Thanks for being my 1800th! Yay!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Yes! The Cullen clan to the rescue! Even as mere humans, something tells me they'll be the ones to reach her before Charlie... And Blushy Mc Clumsypants? Priceless :)
Author's Response: Emmett is so much fun! He has a chapter coming. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
such a sad chapter. i can't wait to see the reunion between edward and bella. i'm very anxious to see how things turn out between them.
Author's Response: It will be a long and ugly road, but it will be okay in the end! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Okay, the Bawling Blubber Bringade has arrived in force! Reading Bella write the letter and having Charlie read the letter are two TOTALLY different experiences. I just couldn't stop crying...and I tried...
Author's Response: Poor Charlie. At least the letter gives him hope! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I'm not kidding when I tell you I'm on the edge of my seat! I think the undisclosed email was brilliant! And Angela being engrossed in tracking down the Cullens is just great. Come on Emmett!!!!
Author's Response: Bella needed to tell her dad she was okayish. And Angela needs HELP!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Somebody just slap him! SNAP OUT OF IT EDDIE!!!
Author's Response: Someone really does need to step in. I just think they are all at a complete loss.
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
ANGELA, yay! Bella is so incredibly lucky to have Angela find her. She is such a great character and I'm loving her POV. These women are pillars of strength and I enjoy reading your take on them.
Author's Response: I really loved developing Angela's character. Warm and loving but tough.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Well at least Angela knows the truth now. She is such a good person to have atround.
Author's Response: She does and she is really listening. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Waiting for everyone to go crazy... Alice is not good at. Thank you Alice! Keep searching.... don't stop searching! Seriously on the edge of my seat. And, although they won't participate, my family knows everything going on in this story.
Author's Response: Lol! Wow, the family even knows the plot? Impressive!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
NOOOOOOOOO! Reading it again DOESN'T make it better.... tears falling now.... shit. shit. shit. Poor Bella, indeed.
Author's Response: The beginning of the spiral into the abyss. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I'm starting over so I can tell you how much I love that we got a full glimpse into the story with this chap. From the word go, you gave me goosebumps and this won't be the last time (by far) that I tell you I'm on the verge of tears...GAH!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! A second read? Wow, I a honoured. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
*cries at Edward being such a tortured yet amazing person*...and angela rocks too...your story is pure WIN. next chapter please :D
Author's Response: Edward still has lots of changes to make, but he is on the path now. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: foxishot (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Well, I hope Edward gets to see Bella before Charlie comes barreling in. How many more chapters till the baby's born? I want to know. Please!!!! :)
Author's Response: It is somewhere around chapter 30, but Edward will get to Bella first. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Aww. Great pace and overall tone. The sense of urgency is really great.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
LMAO I thought when I read Bitchslaping it was going to be a metaphor! I love Ang POV, but I think I still like the style of Edward POV the best, ... you get in some kind of mindset and it just flows LOL I don;t know I'm a fan though can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you feel better *Slips you a can of Redi Whip*
Author's Response: Oh this was a very real slap! Lol! There is some more Edward coming, although is is mighty painful. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I have been so patient with you. Now you're just dragging it out just to spite me, aren't you? Hehe, to answer your question to my last review, yes I am mad and happy with you right now. I'll be much happier once she has the freaking baby! It's killing me not to know what it is and what she ends up naming it! GRR! Hehe. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Bella doesn't name it at all... Try that one! Lol! So much more to come! Please keep reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: fallenangel126 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
aww... you made me cry.. i love this story and i definately squeal like a teenager who just saw rob bend over at an airport when you update :) cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Lol! Amazing analogy! So glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Ooh, I'll take my nekky Edward with Cool Whip and brownies crumbled on top. ;) Angela has been so amazing throughout the story. I'm glad she's such a sensible gal. And hearing the description of Edward from her perspective was heartbreaking. I cannot wait to find out Bella's reaction to all this!
Author's Response: We will see Bella in the next chapter, but it is a tough one! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
ahhhh man gosh darn you!!!!! This story is just awesome...after every chapter i'm on the edge of my seat wanting more!
Poor Edward!
Author's Response: Well, I guess that means I am doing something right! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
My heart breaks for those two...
Love the chapter, Edward seems to be proving his regret to Angela, and if she can forgive him we can only hope Bella will somehow too. Angela is so protective of Bella. And she slapped our man Edward, that was just... well wow...
omg, I need to go read me some happy fan fic now :)
LOVE your story!
Author's Response: I know on the happy fic! It takes the sting out! Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
First things first "glorious sex hair"? LOL
Okay so I loved this chapter I managed to beat the tears back with a stick but it was close. It was a good insight into Angela and Edwards minds. And...look it was just awesome okay? And now I shall wait "patiently" for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Come on! It is glorious sex hair! The next chapter is tough, so hang on to that tear stick! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
JUST, STOP IT! THAT WAS AMAIZNG. I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES.
YOU ARE AMAZING. AND GAH, I JUST. LOVE. THIS.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE! I CAN NOT WAIT!!!!!!
yayayayay
Author's Response: Your enthusiasm is awesome! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Another fabulous chapter! (I Love Angela too, esp in your story!)
This was a good balance, I think, between raking Edward over the coals & not kicking a man when he's down. ...His speech to Angela about what he wishes for was just beautiful. ...But when Angela slapped him before...that was just perfect!!
Author's Response: I think he needed to be smacked and then forgiven. Let's just hope Bella takes it as well. Thanks for the review!
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