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Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Come on Edward! He's starting to come back to us... I can't wait until they're together again... I'm sure it will be pretty explosive but still, it needs to happen soon! 



Author's Response: They will see each other again in 23, but it is not what you expect. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! This is so damn hard to read again.... Just reading this situation hurts... it's so real and it happens all the time to expecting mother's... Alright I'm following your advice

She believes in happy endings.....



Author's Response: Keep repeating! It will be ok! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TheIsabellaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Another wonderful chapter!  Can't wait for the next.  I read the teaser on the thread, and I must say, I'm on the edge of my seat. :)



Author's Response: Carlisle's reaction is hard to read. Just hang in there! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

I can't wait for the plan to be put into action!



Author's Response: Alas, plans must always change! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

Alice can bring this shit storm together...right? At least everyone's starting to get the story.



Author's Response: Let's hope she can! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Loved it!



Author's Response: I am so glad! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Alice and Angela are the Bella's own personal dream team... Can't wait for these girls to get back together.



Author's Response:

You know they can do it!  Power duo that they are!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Huge sigh of relief! (again!) Sooo glad they're making progress!



Author's Response: There are many ups and downs! Thanks so much for the review! 5 away from 1900!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

love



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

wow.  wonderful chapter.  I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.  Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your compliment and your review!

Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Do we get to see Bella next? the angst is getting to me. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

We will see her, but not hear from her.

Thanks SO much for reviewing!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

yay!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Great chapter!!  It was fantastic!!  I'm so glad Edward is finally at the hospital I hope we hear from Big Daddy C next so we know how Bella and the baby are doing!!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I think, then, you wil be pleased ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Another great chapter.  Love the fact that Angela is such an important part of this.  I always loved her and wished her character would have had the chance to be more developed in the originals. 

Although Edward is still visibly shaken by everything that he's put himself through, and everything that has happened to those he loves as a result, he does seem like he's truly turned a corner.  Maybe there's a light at the end of the tunnel for him?  We can only hope Bella will someday be able to forgive him, because without that he will never be completely whole again.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Another great chapter.  Love the fact that Angela is such an important part of this.  I always loved her and wished her character would have had the chance to be more developed in the originals. 

Although Edward is still visibly shaken by everything that he's put himself through, and everything that has happened to those he loves as a result, he does seem like he's truly turned a corner.  Maybe there's a light at the end of the tunnel for him?  We can only hope Bella will someday be able to forgive him, because without that he will never be completely whole again.

Thanks again!



Author's Response:

Edward has a *long* way to go, but he's definitely started onto the right path.  He will only improve as a person from here.  As for Bella, we shall see...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

woot!

guess what?

I logged on today and saw that you've updated 3 chapters since my last review! Totally made my day.

 

I'm glad they're making progress...and I hope Bella is conscious by now.



Author's Response:

You will find out more about Bella in 21.  There is a teaser on the thread.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

aww...this chapter made me cry...please update soon...i'll be waiting...



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sorry!

Thank you soo much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MariePattin (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

I got to this chapter and went to hit the Next button but....there wasn't one and I got sad. T___T I really really really want to know what happens. Cool Whip covered Edwards? No, I don't like Cool Whip, but brownies! Hell yea! (I sound like Emmett there. hehe) Update soon!

Yours truly,

Marie Pattin



Author's Response:

LOL!  On the forum thread, we all get our inner Emmett on!

I try to update quickly, so you will hopefully have more soon!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Wow...this was great, I mean I'm sad for Edward and Bella..But everything will be ok...Right?? ;D Please update soon, don't leave us hanging here..



Author's Response:

I always do!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Go Angela!  Put him in his place!  Oh man, chapter 23 is coming...ugh...i loved/hated that chapter!  Break my heart!

Love you girly and your amazing story!!! :)

XOXO

-Whitney

Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Go Angela!  Put him in his place!  Oh man, chapter 23 is coming...ugh...i loved/hated that chapter!  Break my heart!

Love you girly and your amazing story!!! :)

XOXO

-Whitney



Author's Response:

Yup.  21 to warm up your angstiness, then 23 to cap it off.  And there's even worse after.  Gah!

Thank you for all of your support, girlie.  Me lurves you!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Wow. Can you find a little happiness somewhere for these poor. God your sadistic.LOL!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Um... a little sadistic!  And, being what I go through getting into their heads, a little masochistic as well!  Happiness will come... eventually.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Well you've done it again...this was another amazing chapter...I love Angela too...she's been a great friend to Bella and even though she's mad as hell at Edward she saw that he's suffered too, that this was not an easy decision that he has lived with and that he has been through hell as well. I also love that even with everything going on Angela had the guts to ask Edward the questions that needed to be asked and wasn't afraid to make it clear that he had created a mess, that he had a lot to fix...great chapter. Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter...I know the shit storm is coming when Charlie reaches the hospital and when Bella is awake and realizes that Edward is there...can't wait.

 



Author's Response:

Oh, there is so much shit in this shit storm I almost feel bad!  Thanks so much for the kind words about the chapter and the review.  There is a teaser for 21 on the thread...

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Awwwwwwww! That was so sweet! Sad, but still sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :) Oh and I'm sorry that you're sick. I hope you start to feel better soon (That way you'll feel like writing ;).



Author's Response: Thanks for the well wishes and the great review!

Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

i'm fighting tears right now. great chapter. update soon pleeeease.



Author's Response: I always do! Thanks for the review!

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