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Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
OMG! was just reading some of the reviews and I just thought of poor Charlie..... My heart is breaking (sniff!) He is going to see her like that, I just can't even imagine.
Author's Response: Oh it is not an easy Chapter. But Charlie is going to impress you. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
:(
Sad Face.
Author's Response: It is sad! So much to come. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
oh my god. this is heartbreaking. edward is going to be so devastated when he sees bella. i want her to wake up and see him there with her! i can't wait to see what you have for us next :] love the story <3
Author's Response: Edward and Bella will be back in Chp 23, so hang on! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I'm at a loss for words but it's a be reaction. :)
Author's Response: Fun stuff, right? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Ah, the wrinkle. Can't wait to see what it is. :)
Author's Response: After you find out, you may wish you hadn't! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Ah, the action just keeps on coming!
Author's Response: That it does. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
Ah, I'm glad at least one Cullen knows the truth now. And it's okay that there's going to be some angst in the future - that's what makes for an interesting story. :)
Author's Response: Well, if you appreciate angst, you came to the right place! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Oh man...this is just so sad. I can feel all the pain coming through your story. Great job. Love it so far. Can't wait for more!!! Thanks for sharing your story!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Thank God for Facebook, eh? ;) Good chapter. And I heart Emmett too.
Author's Response: Facebook saves the day! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
ALRIGHT WOMAN -- COME OUTTA THAT HIDING PLACE & QUIT TORMENTING US!! ;-)
DON'T MAKE ME COME IN THERE AFTER YOU!! (AREN'T I SCARY?)
Author's Response: Lol! Very scary! There will be B/E in 23 but enjoy the break while you can!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Oh man, that was awesome!!....! (you got a third ! in there b/c it was so awesome!)
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying and even more grateful that you are reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I thought that added to the story nicely. I wouldn't change it at all. :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
It's not necessary, but I think it adds to the story. Particularly the connection between Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Yay, good chapter. :)
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I think this was probably my favorite chapter so far. I enjoyed the daddy POV's - they added more depth to the story. :)
Author's Response: The daddy's speak a lot in this story, particularly Carlisle (mostly because I like writing him!). I am glad you liked their chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
You just don't make it easy to read, do you? I wouldn't have it any other way though ;0) Thanks for the update...I LOVE this story
~Susan
Author's Response: LOL. Nope! It's NOT an easy story. There will be light points (like the next chapter) and there will be a happy ending, but there will be PAIN in betweeen.
Thanks so much for your review.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Oh, I just love Emmett. I'm glad you captured his character. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Emmett will have more chapters in the future.
I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
I do agree with the post on the thread. As much as we want Edward and Bella together and resolution....I do believe that you just can't rush a quick resolution. I, for one, would like a slower pace, and more chapters...than a shorter story where it feels that Bella was just left with accepting apologies quickly in order to get them together. I definetely want them dealing with all the hurt, I want to see them heal her and the work that they will have to put into that. This, I believe makes a far better read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I know it's so hard to wait for them to be together. But when they fix it, the story is over. And it's *not*. Something like this doesn't fix overnight.
Also, there is the fact that, although Bella and Edward are the eye of the storm, they are not the only clouds in the sky. This story is about *all* of them, therefore *all* of them need to be heard.
Thanks for your support, understanding, and review.
Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Ok, I caught up with the whole story. It took me a little longer than expected becuase family would not cooperate with my need for quiet time (kids!). As for all the healing that is going to have to take place, and the restoration of Bella's trust in Edward....My concern is, interestingly enough, with her acceptance of Carlisle and Esme. I say this because time and time again they state they regard her and love her as one of their own (child). No matter what Edward' reasons for leaving Bella, would you leave one of your own children abandoned? , and as smart or brilliant as Edward is, would you let a teenager maked decisions for the family that way? Forgive me, but as they love her so...It is rather negligent and unforgivable. I just hope that neither Carlisle or Esme approach her with telling her that they love her as if she were...because there is just no excuse. They will need to be very careful with this...trust would not be reached otherwise.
Author's Response: You know, I think in real life, it would have *never* gone this way. I know of no parent (and I'm one of them) that would go along with this decision. So, I do agree with you there, but, for the sake of the starting point of the story (New Moon), I had to go this route.
You're right. Esme and Carlisle have almost as much healing to do with Bella as Edward. It's not going to be easy. And there is going to be a conversation much like you describe.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: freckles9399 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
ouch your right that was tough!!!man i am stealing myself for the next chapter with Edward coming face to face with her even if she is asleep
Author's Response: You get a little break before Edward sees Bella in chapter 23. There is someone who needs to speak first.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
I have know a few elderly people that have died from BHS it's sad... great Chapter!
Author's Response: It's terribly sad. I just thought it... fit.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
If only Alice would just go looking for Bella...!
Author's Response: I know!
But hang in there!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Still enjoying this story.
Author's Response: That's a good thing!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Nice. Wonder how this'll progress.
Author's Response: There is a lot more to come.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Man, he's going to go see her and you left us with that! >| Mean, I tell you, mean!
I can't believe she's so bad off, hopefully her subconcious will let Edward help her.
Author's Response: He will see her in chapter 23 and you *won't* be disappointed.
There is someone else who needs to speak first.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: RealityRedefined (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
More- please hurry!!!!!
Author's Response: That I will.
Thank you for reviewing.
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