You got to love Jasper!

Author's Response: Jasper has a whole different take on this. I hope you enjoyed it!

This story is just getting better and better!  I liked Jaspers POV! Of course I am looking forward to feeling my heart break when Edward and Bella reunite.  It doesn't sound like it is going to go well....

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed Jasper.  He is fun to write.

The next chapter should be up soon.  Thanks for reviewing!

AMAZING AGAIN,

I love jasper, I FREAKING LOVE HIM.

he's just so, lovely.

haha i don't know. i always get excited for his chapter in people's stories. they're always so good, and this one was fabulous.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Jasper needed to be heard.  He grew on me, so he has chapters to come.

Thanks for reviewing!

Jasper's POV was fun and interesting.

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.  It was definitely a different POV!

Thanks for reviewing!

I love Jasper!! And your take on him was remarkable, as usual!! :D Great chapter, I love to get a look into all of their minds, so thanks!!! Love it all, please update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it!

23 should be up soon!

Yes, I did like hearing Jasper's story.  I really like how you made their issues human.  Very interesting!  Love the story. Can't wait for more.  And yes, that was the longest A/N ever!!!

Author's Response:

I promise - no more long A/N!  Thanks for reading and reviewing anyway.

Short chapter, but a nice relief.  It seems like Jasper and Emmett would be fun to write.

Author's Response:

They absolutely are.  Emmett comes up in 24.  Not as much as a comic relief, but still, better than heavy angst.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

After that AN I don't know if i want to read more lol. Too bad you've got me totally hooked. Thanks for sharing. This story is great!

Author's Response:

The next chapter is bad, but there are worse to come.

But it will be worth it in the end...

Thanks for the review!

I'm happy Rose & Jasper are going to be there for Bella:)
I have to admit, I'm a little scared about reading the next chapter!
I hope Bella doesn't just welcome him back with open arms
That would piss me off :| He needs a good ass kicking.

I agree with Jasper, Edward is a "stupid, fucking, overly moral pussy."

Author's Response:

Bella will *not* do that.  I promise.

I love that line of Jasper's.  That and the dragging his junk back to Forks.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

I love Jasper. And Rose. And...well all of them really.
let's get everybody to the hospital. Can't wait to see what Charlie has to say. To Bella. But mainly to Edward.

Author's Response:

Oh, it gets so ugly from here.  I'm glad I could give you respite.

Thank you for reviewing.

Jasper's mind was...interesting...

Author's Response:

That it is.

He definitely is a different POV.

This chapter was great, it feels a bit like a filler chapter but I'm ok with that.  I understand we need to know how Jasper feels guilt, and that he and Rose are headed to be with the family.  I do enjoy this story, and it fills its purpose, it breaks my heart.  Has from chapter 1 and continues even now. 

 

So in response to the authors note in the beginning of the chapter:  Anyone who has read even 1 chapter of this story KNOWS how sad it is.  We know its not unicorns and rainbows.  That doesnt mean we cant hope for some kind of happy ending.  Its human nature to want to see characters we love so much be happy.  Are we going to get it?  I dont know, and dont give a fuck.  The story at hand is gripping and extremely ooc, which is the point of fanfiction right?  I am content with seeing how it goes.  I love this story, as I said, and dont want to piss off any author with my review.  So please understand that we love your writing, and this unique plot.  But I almost wish chapter 23 and beyond could just be allowed to show itself to us instead of being given a warning about it.  I dont really want to have the B/E chapter be something to dread before its even posted, I want to read it and feel what comes from it,  but dont want to be pre-warned about it ripping my heart out, and the dread that is sure to come.   Am I making sense? 

Author's Response:

I completely respect your opinion.  You made perfect sense.

The snip from the forum thread was a little out of context, as it was responding to specific complaints.  I am completely *fine* with leaving my warnings as the Code System.  That particular post was a reaction to something in particular.

You *won't* piss me off with your review.  You are respectful and well spoken and therefore how *could* I be pissed?  We are all entitled to our thoughts.  I am grateful you chose to share yours.

I will continue with the Code system at the *mass* request of readers, but I won't be telling you much about what's coming from here on in.  The A/N's will be shorter.  So, I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds.

Thank you so much for your review!