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Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
umm .... Wow god it was so sad. but so well writen! I perfer storys with longer chapters but I love this story. please update soon!
Author's Response: This story lends itself to longer chapters but more of them. I am glad you enjoy it anyway! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I'm feeling so bad for Edward right now! Hope you'll update soon!!
Author's Response: Edward is having a rough time right now. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Bella needs to wake up!!!!
Author's Response: We have a way to go before that time, but there is a lot going on in between! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*tear*
Author's Response: This one is a heart string puller. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Poor, poor Edward and Bella. I really hope that she gets better and that they will be fine. Thanks, Jennifer
Author's Response: It will be a long road, but everything will be ok. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I was seriously holding my breath the entire time I read this chapter...cause I knew 23 was going to be hard to read...and damn you were right! :( He was breaking my heart begging her to forgive him and asking for Bella and the baby to both be fine...ugh!
Good thing I had my big girl panties on today!
Ellie...in case you forgot....YOU ROCK! :)
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much for your support with everything. I hope I did this one justice.
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
le sigh. so much pain from him. He is right, though. It will take a lot for her to trust him again.
And gah, with him calming her and helping her. Even in her altered state she needs him.
So good.
Author's Response: I am really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*sniffs* OMG that was heart wrenching! But I loved how her heart rate picked up when he talked to her! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Next up will be be a bit less tissue needing, but the one after, hold onto the big girl panties! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I'm sobbing hysterically..... I'm really glad I know my key strokes because I can't see anything right now! The fact that he's stablizing her is wonderful but I really hope something horrible doesn't happen when she wakes..... OMG I just can't stop... the mantra isn't helping... this scene is just too realistic... holly hell PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: Support groups forming on the thread! Thanks for the kind review!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Awww. *wipes away tear* That was terrible. How sad for Edward. I hope she wakes up soon.
Author's Response: It was a bit sad, I know. I will try to get the next chapter up soon! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
wow - a short chapter, but a good one!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
beautifully done. I always get excited when I see you have updated!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Aww I loved Jasper's POV. Now I have to admit to being a bit nervous about the upcoming chapters, but I know it has to happen before the good, happy stuff can finally occur. But being patient isn't my strong suit. LOLOL
Anyway, great chapter and I'll be with you every step of the way on this rollercoaster ride you have prepared for us!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I submitted the next chapter last Saturday, it is just awaiting validation. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
*cough cough* the next chapter is already written
which means you should update already!
you're making me angsty with all this waiting.
Author's Response: It was submitted last Saturday and is just awaiting validation. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Holy mother of great fanfics Batman! This is AWESOME!!! I've read it all in one sitting, just wanted to read a few chapters before I went to bed. It is now way past my bedtime but I would have been reading all night if there was more. Write more woman!
It's truly great, you capture the characters well, I especially like the whole Carlisle/Esme relationship it's clear they are only strong because of the other. Well done.
Can't wait to read more, I'm really hoping I don't have to wait long here.
What can I say, you had me at "Emoward".
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! There is so much more to come and I update pretty often! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I love Emmett, he makes me laugh. Really great story, just discovered it tonight, thumbs up!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Glad Jasper is out! Didn't expect him to go meet Edward and family, this will be an interesting twist, love this story and as an OB/GYN nurse can't wait to see what becomes of Bella's current situation. Melissa
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story and reviewed! Please know, although I have an anatomy degree and have some concept of the human body, I am not a doctor or nurse, so there will, I am sure, be technical problems with the story. Still, I hope, it is plausible and you enjoy it!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
That was great! I totally loved it. Jasper is so entertaining! I have a feelng that next chapter is going to be sad.
Author's Response: Oh yes. The next chapter is very tough. Just hang in there and come back to Jasper when you need a pick me up! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
I love Jasper! I love his dedication to his family. More please! More!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, girl! I heart ya!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Update, update, uuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe
PLease update soon, you know how much we all love your story and I can't wait to see what comes of the reunion of E & B :D
P.S.: I don't know if you knew but you've got international fans, me being one of them (yeiiii). I'm from Argentina but thank God I learned English so I can read stories like this one. You rock! Keep writing.
Author's Response: That is so exciting! I am so grateful that you are reading and enjoying! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
wow jasper's POV! i didn't expect that one.. but i welcome it nonetheless. i heart jasper!! and dirty talking jasper... damn!! hot! haha.. this is seriously a kick-ass story! i'm glad i stumbled upon it earlier. i can't wait to see what happens. and i agree with you when you say that it wouldn't be right when everything would suddenly be right and okay between e and b when they see each other. i actually would like to see the struggle.. the process. what bella went through, that was really hell. and i think charlie wouldn't be as kind to edward also. i'd love to see how this would all play out. but i love dark/sad themes because in the end, it makes the happy ending so much better because you know they went through a lot before getting to that point. i'm not sure how often you update, but please update soon!!! thanks!
Author's Response: I truly appreciate all of your remarks! I update often, though not on a specific schedule. Thanks so muc for reviewing!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
i love hearing carlisle's POV. he's such a compassionate man. i would love to have him as my father. i wish! in that note.. happy father's day to all the daddies out there. omg... i hope it's edward's POV next.
Author's Response: My dad is a lot like him, so it is easy to write. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
i didn't know i was holding my breath until i saw the chapter end notes! omg!
Author's Response: Edward is always tough to hear from. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
ok i read your author's notes.. thank God it's not a miscarriage. i have a 16mos old baby too and had a high risked pregnancy from the start. thank God i didn't lose her but i know it would be heartbraking. so thank God that the baby will not be lost.
Author's Response: I wouldn't put people through that unneccessarily. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
omg!!! please.don't.tell.me.that.bella.lost.the.baby????????
Author's Response: No babies are harmed in this fic. You have my word. Thanks for reviewing!
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