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Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
shebelievesinhappyendingsshebelievesinhappyendingsshebelievesinhappyendings
Author's Response: I do! I really do!
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
**sniff sniff**
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next chapter is a bit of a break. I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: The next chapter is a bit of a break. I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
It was the first thing to come to mind. Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: So much has yet to happen. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
WOW! That was AMAZING! I am so curious as to what Bella is thinking! I know she's out of it, but can she hear Edward? What is going through her head when he's talking to her? Can she hear him? Oh lordy! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You will get the answers to those questions in chp 25! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
oh, so sad. crying here now. looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for writing
Author's Response: There is much more to come! Sorry to have made you cry! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElSmith0809 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I love your Edward! He makes himself so hard to hate, and then all I want to do is go Esme on him and Bella and wrap them in a blanket and keep them safe! The poor dears.
Author's Response: They both are so young and made such terrible decisions and are so hurt from it. They need Esme....
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Bless him!
Author's Response: Poor thing has a LOT on his plate.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
im seriously crying right now! but the part when u said "she believes in happy endings" made me laugh a little!
Author's Response: I honestly do!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Heartbreaking, heartbreaking, heartbreaking. That's all I can say. I have to believe they will slowly work things out and the baby will live. I just have to...
Author's Response: Keep believing. It will be okay. It just takes a while.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Oh that chapter was reallly good I even felt like crying along with him!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseIsMyHero (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I love this story. It gets me all excited whenever I see it's updated. Please posr a new chapter soon!!!
Author's Response: That makes me so happy! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Omg way to make me bawl my eyes out! Yikes! UPDATE LIKE NOW PLEASE!
Author's Response: I am so sorry to make you cry! I hope that means I did my job.
I will get the next chapter out soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
That was awesome
Author's Response: I am glad you have enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
OK. that was fabulous. Edward's emotions were really out there. Time for Bella to wake up!
Author's Response: We have some time before Bella wakes up, but we will hear from her in Chapter 25.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ashboo713 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
oh man! I am in love with this story! i could feel edwars misery in your writing. I want to read the chapter after next, but at the same time, if its worse than this, I don't know if I can! can't wait for the update! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Try to just follow the story as it's written. It's like the tide rising and falling. It will all make sense in the end.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
OH god so many ppl love her...hope they find her soon. I am on the edge of my seat here girl!
Author's Response: Find her, they will, but it won't be pretty.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
WHOO HOO Gotta love Facebook!!!!
Author's Response: Facebook is the answer to everything!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
She believes in happy endings... and in updating soon I hope :D
Author's Response: I believe in both:)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Only I won't have an end to this withdraw. There is no end to purgatory
Wow...that was just...wow
Author's Response: Edward is having a HARD time with this.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
well i have to say that i feel bad for Edward and I am thinking it is only going to get worse when Bella wakes up... I am thinking she is not going to be so forgiving at first... but who knows.
And when Charlie gets there... oh my watch out I bet.
Cant wait for another chapter
Author's Response: Oh, there is so much hardship yet to come. But it will all be okay in the end.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I have cried every update so far...I am out of tissues, my nose is runny and red and my husband and kids think I am crazy...Thanks for that...really...
Author's Response: LOL! Thanking me for making you feel mental! Don't worry, I feel mental too writing this!
I'm glad it's making you feel...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
That's ok. Thanks for the warning. I think I wouldn't like this story as much as I do if Bella just opened her eyes and took him in her arms, forgiving him instantly. Too much pain and time has gone by for that routine. He has to earn his way back into her/their lives. I like making those boys work for it!
Author's Response: LOL! Much appreciated!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Wow some pretty powerful writing!
Author's Response: Thank you. This was a difficult chapter.
I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
OMG that was so profound...I love you. I mean i dont know you but i love you. Does that make sense? Probably not! LOL! Oh well...great job
I might need to go join Jasper...
Author's Response: LOL! I've had offers to have my virtual baby... is that the vibe? LOL!
Thanks so much for reading this angst fest and reviewing!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Oh, it wasn't that bad...you always get me worried at the beginning of the chapter that it's going to be so awful, and then it's not nearly what I had prepared myself for :) I'm hoping she pulls through without too much angst!
Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad for you! This is the *only* review I got that said that!
I'm going for realism rather than rooting for angst. Hopefully, it will work out!
Thanks for the review!
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