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Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
"Edward, no one deserves forgiveness. We’re all granted it. All of us." ~ This was Beautiful.... and true....
This chapter was gut wrenching... what am I saying, all these chapters have been gut wrenching, but it's beautiful and I can't wait for you to make it all better...please make it all better...
Author's Response: I promise I will. Just not for a while, alas.
I'm so grateful that you are enjoying the story and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
ahhhh your driven me nuts please update soon
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry!
I'm sure the next chapter will be up soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Oh my god. You just get better and better. I know you get hundreds of reviews per chapter, and you replied to all of mine. That makes me feel so great like you actually care about what I am saying. While reading this story I have seen your writing change. I thought you were amazing to begin with, well look at you now. Every chapter is simply mind blowing. I look forward to getting you chapters all the time, and when i see that you updated in my email sometimes I squeal in joy. You are a truly amazing writer and you really inspire me to work harder and improve my own writing. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Ok, now I'm in complete tears over this review. I'm gobsmacked. Thank you. Really. Thank you.
I work really hard to write this story in such a way that you can feel every chapter. I'm so glad that you feel I'm succeding conveying my story.
Again, so many thanks for the review and your amazingly kind words.
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Ellie...don't worry...you wrote this JUST fine...by the end of it I was a big baby of a mess. First the scene ALice walked in on...Edwards forehead resting against Bellas and whispering to her...ugh! Killed me! Alice talking to her while fixing her hair...yep, that got to me too! But the end....that was my favorite...beautifully put...a duet between the two...broke my damn already fragile I have from this fic...lol!
Adored it as always!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you love! I am so grateful you thought I got it right and for all of your amazing support!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
~Sniff~ Aww. so she is starting to come out of it just very slowly? I loved the chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
~sneaks off an Edward and the vanila icing~
hehehehe
Author's Response: Sigh... There is another wrinkle...
Might want to keep Edward around for comfort!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Does that last part mean she's coming around? ...hope so:)
Author's Response: Sigh... There is another wrinkle...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Gah. Painful, but I really liked it. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you. I know it was tough to read, but I hope I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Ah, what is it about reading angst and getting all teary eyed that's so great? Of course I'm the biggest sap there is, that might have something to do with it. Can't wait for the next tear jerker.
Author's Response: Lol! I think it is just cathartic to *feel* that strongly.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Is it wrong that I hope Bella bitch slaps Edward when she wakes up? ...No? Oh GOOD!
Author's Response: No. I am sure a lot of people feel that way.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
i love alice!!!!always feels the need for a makeover!!!make bella wake up soon!!
Author's Response: I wish I could grant your wish, but some upcoming events will put a damper on that. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
thanks for the tissue alert, I needed it.
Author's Response: My pleasure! Keep them handy as there are no more breaks for a while. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
So glad I left on my big girl panties, they were desperatly needed. This chapter, though incredibly sad, and made tears flow, gives me some glimmer of hope. A hope that in the end your BxE will somehow make it through this together. They both still love each other, there is no doubt about that. But they have such a long road ahead of them. Loved it, as always
Author's Response: That is the only thing they have left is their love and their connection. Still it is enough to give them a start. I am grateful for your review!
Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
You've done it too me again young lady.... *sniffs* mascara is running down my face and my heart has broken that little bit more... *sniffs*
You write so beautifully.... this truly is amazing...
I guess I've never said it before... but thank you for sharing this with us...
Cant wait for the next update...
x
Author's Response: Wow, what an amazing review. I am so grateful that you have stuck with me through this!
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Damn.
Author's Response: I hope that is a good damn! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
No words.
Throats in flames.
Brillian.
xoxo -- Cherolyn
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Yeah, the eyes started to mist up. Thanks, I just did my eye makeup for the day ad thought I would see if anything had updated. LOL!
Author's Response: Oh no! Sorry to mess up the make up! Thank you reviewing despite it!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Hang on!!!!! *sniffs* *grabs on to shower curtain* I'M HOLDING ON!!!!
Shit, it's not helping! I'm still crying! This chapter still tears me up so bad!
AHHHH!!!!!!! Costco sixed tissue box, meet my hosepipe like eyes! LMAO!
Love you!!!! This chapter is AHMAZING, even though it makes me cry!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: And how many times have you read it??
Lol! Thank you so much for everything you have done for me! I SO puffy heart you.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Funny! Go Emmett. He's such a big fuzzy teddy bear that I want to devour with my bare hands...oops. Sorry. That chapter just put him in such a sensitive light that I couldn't help myself!
Author's Response: He is such a teddy bear. How can one not love him? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Okay, that wasn't so bad. I'm guessing it was just the calm before the storm though. I love how you write Emmett by the way. He really is a man's man trying to be a gentleman when necessary.
Thanks for sharing your story. Oh, and I really appreciate the warning in advance about the next chapter. I'm out of kleenex and this will give me a chance to get some more before it is needed. :)
Author's Response: I love writing Emmett. He's such a good guy and manages to keep his good humour despite the storm swirling around them. The next chapter is in queue for validation, so make sure to re-up your tissue supply soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hugsandkisses1320 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon! ♥.♥.♥
P.S. On my Cullen sundae, I would like Emmett ice cream, Jasper sauce, and Edward sprinkles please!
Author's Response: Now that is quite a sundae! I will get the next chapter up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I love Emmett :)
I'm so happy Edward finally saw Bella. You really brought out his emotions and everything amazingly well. It was worth the wait :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Only Emmett would ask Charlie if he could leave the weapons at home. LOL :) That was awesome.
Author's Response: Well, Emmett is nothing if not pragmatic! Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Excellent as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: bella2k9 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Ha i love emmett he is cool! please update like super fast!
thanks as always
x
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: eclipse_me (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I really hope you update soon...i really love this story!!
Author's Response: I am sure I will. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
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