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Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I love you. I will not throw anything at you.

The only thing I ask is that you update sooner than normal. Please.

 I don't ask for anything. So could you please do this for me?

I won't ask for anything else. PLEASE?

thank you nessiebells 



Author's Response: I basically submit the next chapter as soon as the last one goes up, but sometimes it takes a little longer to validate. I will do my best though! Thanks for not throwing things!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Dear god...I'm gonna need another therapy session I think...my heart...ouch! But the way you wrote...damn! Soooo crazy good! The way you did it...reading it I could feel his pain...that probably makes no sense! So, just know you did amazing! As always. :)



Author's Response: Aw, hun! Thank you! I know how hard that chapter is to read. Thanks so much for all of your support both here and on the thread.

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Holy hell, that was so flipping intense.  GAH!  I have trust in ya.  I will keep up an optimistic approach to it.

So emotional and good.



Author's Response: Keep the faith! It will be okay! I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Aw...crap...I hope the baby and Bella survives..Please update again soon. ;D I'm hanging onto my seat here.



Author's Response: Everyone will be fine in the end, we just haven't made it there yet. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

come out come out wherever you are!! I need the next chapter please!

I'm guessing, and I could be wrong, but I'm guessing that her placenta errupted or something along those lines?  Wrong? I know, just guessing.



Author's Response: You know, I am going to stay vague on the medical side, although there will be an explanation! I will get the next chapter up shortly! Thanks fort the review!

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

You know I love you and your heart-wrenching story, but I might scream if you continue giving us these little teaser chapters before the big event we've been waiting for.

LORD!  I think I read this chapter in less than 2 minutes and was like, wha?  WTF? It's over??  Damn it!!  I. Need. More. NOW!!

This is your fault!! Why did you make it so addicting and then continue to never fully satisfy?!?  AAARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!

Ok, I'm sorry.  That was kinda mean, right?  It's just I really, really, really, REALLY want to get to the part where B's awake and E's forced to face her, fer reals...and all that anger and hurt and pain she's had to live with these past months.  OH GAWD!!  Hurry with updates...please?  PLEASE?!?



Author's Response: It will come. I promise. You wil get your confrontation. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

amazing job! I feel soo terrible for charlie...but worse for bella. i hope it is more of bella and edward next!



Author's Response: Sigh, there is, but not in a good way. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

now I'm practically sobbing... and I am studying for a test (yes...summer school stinks) and now my paper is all blurry. But this is wayyyy better than sociology =]



Author's Response: In a way, it is sociology! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Great, great, great chapter! I love emmett...he makes me laugh even when it's a non-laughing moment :)



Author's Response: Emmett has a very clear picture of how bad things are but manages to keep his wit. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

mmk...crying right now...this was a phenomenal chapter!!



Author's Response: Wow, thank you for your kind words and review!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

Jasper is fun to read as well...his potty mouth fits him and I would expect nothing else. Great chapter!!



Author's Response: Jasper is a joy to write! Gives me a break from the angst as well! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: sstreger (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Aww this story has dragged me in!  I can't wait to see what is going to happen next but I'm scared at the same time!  



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

OME, OME, OME!  I don't blame Charlie for being pisses, but I am glad he let Edward back into the room! 



Author's Response:

Charlie will surprise you so hang on!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

awww.. i can't get enough of this story.. keep it coming... i love the quick updates! thanx for writing..

chasity



Author's Response:

It should be up soon.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Great chapter....Poor charlie!



Author's Response:

i am glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Oh dear. I am just catching up with my updates - and this one is a doozy. I literally have tears slipping down my face. Charlie is so devastated and angry and maybe guilty ... but most of all I think he is afraid. Terrified. My heart broke for Edward then too. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It is definitely a difficult chapter, and it only gets more difficult from here.

The next one?  Oh, lawd.

Thanks fo much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

You know you don't have to urge me to comment with all those 'Cullens incentives' - the story is just too good to need them. I mean it.

As for the chapter, if I were in Charlie's place, Edward wouldn't survive, I swear. I have a daughter, and I know I would murder anybody who dared do anything like that to her. Yeah, I'm one of those crazy overprotective moms and I don't give a shit 'cause my child has only me to protect her from this world and all bastards in it (no, I'm not talking about your Edward here)

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I appreciate them so much!

Charlie restrained himself nicely, I think.  I mean, that's a lot to absorb for a dad with NO prior knowledge of what was going on with his daughter.  Hell, I'd have been rabid.  But, I think he'll come along nicely and pleasantly surprise you.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

*CRY* Don't Shout at Edward!!!!!!
Charlie made Edward CRY!!! *bawl*

I get the rage and everything BUT he HAD to understand that bella NEEDED Edward there, he helped to keep her stabilized.

Thank goodness Emmett got him to leave his weapons at home!!

*sigh* I just need to say how sweet it is that Edward and bella's hands are were on her stomach *aww*



Author's Response:

Charlie's reaction was completely knee-jerk and I think the majority of dad's would have reacted that way upon stumbling in on *that* particular scene.  He'll come round and surprise you.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

this chapter did pull at my heart.  Poor Charlie, but I'm sure he will eventually realize Bella needs Edward.



Author's Response:

This was just Charlie's knee jerk reaction to what had to have been a completely overwhelming situation for him.  I think his actions through the rest of the story might surprise you.

Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

***sniff, sniff*** (thx Ellie for the warning cuz totally needed the kleenex)

Yikees, could my heart break any more at Charlie's talk with Bella???  I so love him, not that I didn't, being a daddy's girl myself I know how much I look up to my daddy and what he thinks of what I do.  So when Charlie tells her about how they would have worked things through, and why did she not just tell him???  My heart was breaking and my eyes were crying a river!

Edward, I know you aren't a douche but it is gonna take a lot of work for you to get any where NEAR Charlie's good graces. This is gonna be a worse Charlie than the one after the Volturri stand off in New Moon. 

Carlisle we love you!!! Only you would have been able to handle Charlie at the hospital. 

Awesome chapter!  Love the angst, I can tell that we are headed for a lot more of this angsty angst! 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter (and heeded the tissue warning)!  I heart Charlie.  I think he's a good man, so that is what I'll play up in this story.  His actions through the rest of the story might surprise folks, but, I hope, plesantly.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

I can understand Charlie's rage but he don't know all the facts.

Despite everything that happened and how  badly it was handled, Edward did leave to protect Bella.  And being what he is, he wouldn't have known that he could get her pregnant.  Everything that has happened was not only his fault, Bella reacted too strongly, and in some cases foolishly, and part of the blame for how she is now is hers.  And knowing everything, his family should support him, afterall, they left too, regardless of what he told her, they could have stayed - but family comes first and they also wanted to protect Bella.

If I were the Cullens, I would just let Charlie break his hand on Edward's marble skin, and just tell him everything, afterwards.  Everything is not black and white.

I know that this may be heartless but sometimes this type of wake up call is needed.

Update soon.



Author's Response:

I agree whole heartedly that Bella also overreacted and is partially to blame for this situation and I do think you will be surprised by how Charlie handles this in the end.  This was just Charlie's knee jerk reaction to an overwhelming situation.

I did want to mention, though, that this is an all human story, alas, so there Edward and Bella did know he could get her pregnant and there's no rock hard skin to break hands on!  But the rest of the points you make are excellent!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: giada marsielle (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

gah. This is seriously good shit... can't wait to see what Carlisle's explaination to Charlie will be...

 

get on it, girl! I call Carlisle for the next POV...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Wonderful chapter. Poor Charlie, he's such a sweetheart, I love him. I think Stephanie should have created aome gourgeous girlfriend for him, I mean, why can Bella's mum get Bill and Charlie is all alone and still in love with his ex wife (though that makes him even more of a sweetheart). Anyway, you rock, you know it :)



Author's Response:

I totally agree.  I love Charlie.  And he will deserve your love in this story.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

you nailed Charlie perfectly.  what a tough chapter!  great job.  i did smile though at how Charlie keeps commenting on Edward's pretty face!



Author's Response:

I am glad you feel I got Charlie right.  He's so different from the Cullens to write. 

Yeah, Charlie isn't impressed with the pretty boy at the moment.  In fact, I'm amazed he restrained himself this much!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tarebear015 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

OMG...I am so addicted to this story! I just read all 26 chapters and I'm DYING to know what happens next. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!



Author's Response:

I am submitting Chapter 27 as we speak, so you should have it soon.

Thank you for reviewing!

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