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Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Well, all I can say right now is THANK GOODNESS you have always reassured us of that (seemingly impossible) HEA. :(

(Beautifully written, as always.)



Author's Response:

*Seemingly*!  But I will make it happen.

Thanks so much for your kind words and your review!

Reviewer: SuperMassiveBlackMole (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I was just surfing around this forum and found your story! I read all the chapters today and the story ended in most interesting part! Like some evil magic. I am falling this story deeply. Usually I don't like switching all the POV's (it quite annoys me), but in this story I found it necessary, explaining and it makes easier to read (not so sad). It's really fascinating how you can write such a good sad heartbreaking story - not many people can, I really admire you. I hope you have energy to continue - we all believe in happy ends, don't we.

Love,

Mole.



Author's Response:

Wow.  Thank you so much for your amazing review!  I'm so glad you found us and are enjoying it!

Reviewer: giada marsielle (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

*sigh* always so short.... :P

 

 



Author's Response:

That is the way this story is written.  Short bursts of the inside of the character's minds.  But I do update often

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

This is going to be hard to resolve. But I'm thinking that Bella will be fine. You believe in happy endings. You BETTER believe in happy ending. ( kidding... mostly ;) ) Edward, why did you leave?

There better be more soon. I'm serious. This is a gruesome cliffhanger. Really good in suspense but not so good for impatient people.

PS ON YOUR WRITING AND AWESOMENESS- I really love this story and I'm so glad you're almost on the most comented list (you might be on it now.) You really deserve it. So great job! Oh and awesome on the razzledazzle. Again, it really is deserved.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! We did make the top 10 so yay!! As for happy endings, I do believe. Keep the faith. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow I wasn't waiting for that.  Poor Edward he is so distrait over all this.  Well I love your story and pray Bella and the baby make it through this placental abruption (I am only assuming that is what happened  being an OB nurse)  Great story!  Update soon please!



Author's Response: I stay vague with the diagnosis since I am not a medical professional and don't want to insult those who are! Poor Edward has reached the bottom, I think. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

that was heartbreaking....



Author's Response: Definitely a difficult chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: jenzmac (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

SOOO Good!!  I'm not much of a fan of the "un-vampire" but this truly is a good alternative.  Hurry up and write more!!!  :D



Author's Response: And I usually write supernatural stories! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

im at my firehouse cryin right now over a story. my captain just told me to shut the hell up. im lovin this story it is awesome



Author's Response:

That just makes me think of my lovely venomousgal's EMTward.  I'm so sorry to make you cry at work, but I am glad you are connecting to the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Ok, true to my word I've just read it all... WOAH. I'm crying too much at this fictional world you've played with. Please, update soon and often. For my sanity!



Author's Response:

I always do!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I spent the afternoon reading this and pretty much cried the entire time.  I think my family is going to put me in a padded room now.   This story is incredible and I can't wait to read more.  You have a wonderful talent.



Author's Response:

I am so amazingly honoured you're connecting with the story on that level.

Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: xNOMx (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

please tell me she doesn't die...she cant die!

 



Author's Response:

She won't.  Edward just believes she will, and this chapter was his.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Amazing start to this story! I fully intend to stay up as late as is needed to finish the rest!



Author's Response:

::: claps in happiness ::: I hope you enjoy it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

This is an interesting and intriguing story. I like it a lot.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ThereWasBrilliancy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh this was a mean chapter!



Author's Response:

It was tough, yes, but necessary.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

WITH AN ENDING LIKE THAT, YOU NEED TO UPDATE QUICKLY...oops...sorry for the caps



Author's Response:

LOL!  No worries.  Next chapter is already submitted.


Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

k..um not to be rude cause I understand wanting to draw out the angst, but this has gone on too entirely freaking long (pardon my language). please don't be mad at me! I am just trying to be honest cause I love your story and only want the best for  Bella, Edward and the baby. I'm really worried right now and this chapter is not reassuring in the least! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

You know, I am not actually trying to draw it out.  I am just writing it as it comes to my head and letting everyone be heard.  Don't apologize to me.  I curse like a sailor when the occasion allows.  I know you've been a devote reader so I will tell you THIS.  Bella lives.  It's a long road.  She wakes up in chapter 35.  And everyone lives.  In the end, everyone will be reconciled.  I'm just not to the end yet.

Please stay with me.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh my god so sad  and arg you totally leave us hang again you little devil, I am dieing for more!!!



Author's Response:

There will be more soon.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Omg..my heart is clenching! Damn Negativeward!! He makes me sad, although his pov is my favorite and I hope to see more from him soon! You know what doesn't make me sad, though??? Your super quick updates :) U are doing ah-mazing things with this story! Loving it!



Author's Response:

I am glad I can make you happy in one regard!

This is a tough chapter, but it needed to happen.  Hang in there.  It will be okay.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh Mrs Potato you are killing me here.  The thing that I think is hardest about this is that it's not a book where you can just turn the page and keep reading - we have to be patient and wait for you to update.  That's just cruel.  I know that you believe in happy endings and that is what keeps me going.  I understand that you have to go through the bad stuff to make the good stuff worthwhile but that doesn't make it any easier.

I get so excited when I get an email that you have updated - it makes my day.  I love your writing and your story.  By the way, why is your pen name "potato"?



Author's Response:

LOL!  Potato... um, well, I was trying to just pick something totally random so people would read, if they chose, my story for what it was and not for some snazzy pen name.  Also because it's just fun to say:)

It's a hard hard story, but it will be worth it in the end.  I promise.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Having been a labor and delivery nurse that just broke my heart. However I too believe in happy endings please don't let me down : )



Author's Response:

I won't.  I promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

What an amazing chapter!!! You know I will follow you and this story into the end of time...but DAMN let's get crackin on that next chappie :)

 

You and your darn cliffies!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Already submitted.

Thanks for all of your help!  I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

good story. please add more soon.



Author's Response:

I always do!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh please get the next chapter out soon!!! I dont know how long I can wait!



Author's Response:

Already submitted.  Hang in there.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Thanks for your kind words.  Yes, not fun stuff, especially when your ta ta's are ready to explode and your hormones are all over the place.  I couldn't eat or drink anything until I could touch her again.  Then seeing her with tubes coming from everywhere, you just shut down.  I felt a strange sense of guilt that I had created an imperfect baby.  Silly, I know, but weird things run through your mind when you're in that state.  Leaving her room to get a quick bite in the cafeteria was torture.  My husband would have to physically hold me in the chair to finish a sandwich.  Plus, I had a 17 month old son at home with grandparents that desperately needed mommy and had no idea what was going on.  So, long story short (or not so short), having unexpected medical emergencies is a roller coaster ride of emotions.  I can totally understand the reaction that Edward had to Bella being taken away.  You lose control of your mind momentarily and only act on the basest of instincts.  Hopefully the rest of the readers understand that, too.  Keep writing - I'll be waiting somewhat patiently! :)



Author's Response:

Oh. My. God.  You are the bravest, most wonderful person.  Thank you for sharing this.  I can picture the pain and longing you felt.  I am a mom too and I can seriously feel what you were going through.  My sincerest apologies for what you suffered.  I am *so* glad you had your own HEA.

I'm gobsmacked by the bravery of the readers of this story.  I'm so honoured.

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I am so damnproud of you Ellie!  The top ten most reviewed list was your goal and you made it there!

You have such talent in you!  Keep up the great, amazing work.  I for one will always be cheering in your corner!



Author's Response:

My dearest,

What would I do without you???  I know you will be there with me shortly with your (much better) story Rescue Me and I will be a proud mama bear!

Thanks for everything you do.

Ellie

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