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Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
ok, so i just found this story yesterday - so i don't know how long ago you wrote this - but i just wanted to let you know that this chapter was simply beautiful. i have no idea why you would be nervous to post it, and honestly i think it is an important part of the plot, because it shows that they are still mentally linked together even though they are physically apart. thank you for posting it - now, back to the story for me!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it and understood the purpose of including it. Thanks so much for the support and review!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
You are a rockstar! A new chapter so quickly?! I love you (big smile). And thanks for always answering each and every review. Very few fanfic authors do, so its much appreciated and I always read your reply (winks).
A WONDERFUL chapter! Heartbreaking, sad, tragic, poignant - I'm running out of adjectives. I am awed by your writing. Reading Esme's point of view was incredible. It was nice for her to have an understanding of what Bella went through when she was missing, that she didn't just run away. That she had a difficult time, was in poverty (something I doubt the Cullens know about from experience - lol) and alone BUT most importantly that she did not give up and that she did want the baby (the white crib in the apartment).
Rosalie - often the forgotten Cullen. It was nice to see her get her moment in the spotlight trying to make sense of what happened. Really loved that her compassionate side was shown when she thought that Charlie should have a chance to say goodbye, like she never had. And I don't think any of us appreciated the fact that she does love Edward and Bella, she just isn't as vocal and demonstrative about it as the rest of the Cullens are.
Really hope that you do write Charlie's POV of the trip to where Bella was living. Would love to know his thoughts about where his pregnant, alone, baby girl was living.
As always, amazing writing and so seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. Post chapter 29 soon ok, while in the mean time I chant "she believes in happy endings" over and over to myself (grins).
AliciaZA
Author's Response: You so completely blow me away! Thank you so much for reading, enjoying and telling me what you think. These two ladies deserved to have their voices heard and I am blown away by the number of folks that loved to hear them. Again many many thanks for your wonderful words!
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Cliffy much????
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Cliffy much????
Author's Response: Not intentionally! Just where the character's story ended for the time being.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: twimom2-4 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Wow! You are really good. Enough said.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Emmett!!!!! Funny!!!!! You did a great job of depicting his lovable personality.-TheHarper
Author's Response: He has a very clear pictue of how dire things are, but manages to maintain his wit. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: ftloc (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
you know what, i love this story. it's so heartfelt and unlike other stories with similar plots, it doesn't end with he coming back and they live happily ever after right away. It shows the pain, the grief, and the vulnerability of losing someone. i'm a sucker for angsty, halftragic love stories and i cry like every chapter. please continue, soon
Author's Response: Such an amazing review. Thank you. I was disappointed in how easily everything was resolved in New Moon. I wanted this to be more... Real.
Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Okay finally had some free time so I have read and shall now review this brilliant chapter.
I can't decide what part hurt me more. Esme getting the image of Bella bleeding on the floor when she's cleaning up her blood or when Rosalie describes Edward lying there muttering what he'd been saying to Bella for the past few days. It was heartwrenching!
Author's Response: There is some tough stuff in this chapter, I know. I thought these two ladies needed to be heard.
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Blushy McClumsypants.. That so rocketh!!!!!
Author's Response: Em sure loves his nicknames! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: thornrose (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
thank you thank you so much i jumped for joy when i saw you up dated thank you for ever
Author's Response: Lol! I try to do it quite often.
Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Rosalie. *sobs* Oh, I am speechless.
I can only call you brilliant. Cause you are.
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the kind words and the review!
Reviewer: Kordula (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
this is the most heartbreaking and awesome stories! i don't think i've cried so much from one story. Ever. You are The Win. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for the kind words and the review!
Reviewer: BellaAnne (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
OH my god.... I can't even imagine, the pain the Cullen's are feeling. Well yeah I can. You write so beautifully that I have tears streaming down my face, and my heart is still clenching as I write now.. I'm so glad you believe in happy endings, cuz the journey there is heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Aw! Hugs you! It will be ok, just hang in there.
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I hope that you're going to have Edward pull it together so he can make the necessary decisions regarding Bella and their baby's health. It should be Edward NOT the Chief who calls the shots. I'm having a hard time feeling bad for Charlie. I can understand why Bella didn't want to bother Edward with the baby, he rejected her, so why would he want anything to do with her? But running away from her parents for fear of rejection? I think that speaks volumes about her relationship with Charlie. I'm very close to my parents and even though they would have been EXTREMELY DISAPPOINTED/ANGRY if I'd gotten knocked up in high school, I know they would have supported me, regardless of the situation w/ the father. Although Bella did have extreme self esteem issues in the book... Still if her true love rejecting her is so catastrophic that she doubts her parents love for her, well it just seems like they messed up. Any parent who fails in letting their child know that it doesn't matter what they do, they will always love them, is seriously lacking in parental skills. Edward messed up have Edward fix it! It's Edward and Bella's baby, regardless of how young they are, the docs should consult withe the parents not the grandparents.
Author's Response: Interesting POV. I am not sure if I completely agree (I think Bella may have been so overwhelmed she didn't know what she was doing) but I certainly respect your comment!
As for Edward making decisions, I think you will be pleasantly surprised.
Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
"Apron Strings" playing in the background. Loving this. Chapters are too short. Need more ASAP. OK you can tell what I want from the Cullen boys by reading my name. O
Author's Response: Lol. Love the name! Snd the chapters are this length for a reason. I am glad you are enjoying the story and am grateful for your review!
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
still heartbreaking. when are we going to hear bella?
Author's Response: We have a way to go, yet, alas. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: sabrina55 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
This is a great story.. I check everyday for the next chapter.. I cant wait to read more!! GREAT JOB!!!
Author's Response: If you add the story to favourites, you will get an email update every time I post!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
ah!
too short!:P
I'm glad this made the most reviewed list though :D
Author's Response: I am STUNNED about making that list! Thank you for helping us get there!
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Enjoying this flick.
Author's Response: Jasper is a hoot! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Such a great chapter. The part with Esme scrubbing the floor was so touching. Thank you.
Author's Response: There were some tough moments, that's for sure!
Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: There were some tough moments, that's for sure!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: hbedell (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I swear...even with the warnings, I still end up crying...
*scrubs face* but I trust you on the happy endings...
Such a real story. You truely are an exceptional writer. Mass kudos.
*continues sobbing*
Author's Response: There is hope in the next chapter! Have faith!
Thanks so much for your kind words and your review.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Loving this story so far
Author's Response: I am so glad! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lotusblossom (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Wow, thanks for the quick update! Beautiful, haunting chapter, as always. I can't get enough of this story even though I always wind up crying! As hard as it was to read it was good to get some more insight into Edward's reaction at the hospital and hearing it from an outside perspective. Thank you for writing this, for real. It's incredible.
For my Nekky Cullen dinner I request lobster tails prepared by Edward, please! :)
Author's Response: I am so grateful for your kind words and your review! Sending Edward in nothing but a bow tie and carrying a tray of lobster!
Reviewer: shead (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Ok I just started the story today and loving it!!! Although I wish I would have waited to read it till it was done, lol! It stopped at a bad spot. I want......no need more! Hurry!
Author's Response: Lol! It seems every spot will be a bad spot until the end!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Bella can't die! Please don't make her die!!!!
Author's Response: She will be okay. Hang in there!
Thank you for reviewing!
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