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Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Oh my god.
OH MY GOD.
I am new to your story. And it's heartbreaking. Absolutely heartbreaking and making me sob. And making me respect Bella so much. And making me love Angela for being there. And making me forgive Edward because he is truly suffering. And making me feel so bad for the Cullen's and Charlie because they love Bella so much and want her and the baby to be safe.
I feel like I might go on a rampage right now because I. Need. To. Know. What. Happens. I need to know! Gah! I will go insane I think. I'm sitting here sobbing and I don't know what will happen. But I read your A/N's and I know that you believe in HEA's and that Bella will not have a miscarriage.
I was wondering though, she is already about 8 months pregnant, so the baby would have a good chance at survival if the did an emergency c-section. Are they not doing that because of Bella's bad health and they think the stress of it might kill her or the baby? Just wondering :)
Pretty pretty please update soon. I love this so far. Oh and I also love your different p.o.v.'s. Quite often I get very annoyed with that, but I absolutely love it in this story. It really conveys how everyone is feeling and it doesn't repeat same events in each p.o.v., so that is great!
Author's Response: There is a chapter just waiting to be validated, so you should have an update soon! A lot of the answers you seek will be in there.
I am so glad you found us and are enjoying the story! I truly appreciate your review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I love Emmett so much. He made a very hard and awkward conversation much more relaxed. I even found myself laughing at his inner thoughts. I specially love the one about Charlie leaving his weapons. It made me happy.
Author's Response: Emmett has a very clear view of the situation, but manages to maintain his wit.
Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Dame..Now I'm depressed. And you are right this journey will not be easy. I can feel the pain. So that is a good thing. I love it all. Thanks for not making this story an easy resolve because its not. The journey begins. Thanks.
Author's Response: It really is just beginning. It's a tough story and there are no easy answers. None at all.
Thanks so much for your awesome reviews!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
God I love Jasper.
Author's Response: I completely love potty mouth Jasper. He's so much fun to write!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Wow..this is heart breaking. Poor Bella. I hope she chooses to fight. Thanks.
Author's Response: Even if she feels she lost everything else, she has a reason left to fight.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I love Angela too. Specially when she slapped Edward. That was priceless. He deserved it. Sorry Edward, I still love you.
Author's Response: He did deserve it. Hell, even he agreed with that!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
I think we will hear from Angela. And I'm so glad Edward has chosen to be strong. Having hope will help him a lot.
Author's Response: He made his choice, now he just has to live up to it.
Edward will surprise you, in the end.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
O.k Edward its on NOW..And you are so right it does hurt to read. I love Edward as a character over all, but here I'm not to happy with him. So now his next actions in the next chapters are going to make the difference in all their life's. I know Bella is going to be pissed and very angry. And that makes me really sad. I also kow Bella will not be forgiving Edward so easily. Its going to be a long and painful process. Let the healing begin *sigh*
Thank you. I love this story a lot.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are connecting with the story.
Edward really isn't that bad, he just is a kid that made mistakes and now he has to be a man that fixes them. Or tries to.
Bella is *not* going to make this easy for him.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Wow...This was the dreaded chapter. Edward knows, and I ask you Edward...What are you to do bout it.
It breaks my heart to read how he describes the venow inside him. How he feels like its pulling him under. It better not put him under. Its time for Edward to act like a man and choose to fight or give up. He needs to fix all this. Not only did he hurt Bella almost to beyond repair. He also hurt his whole family and Bellas family. Dame Edward!!..Get your act together. Please.
Thanks for an AMAZING story. I would have love to reviewall the other chapters like this one, but I read the others from my BlackBerry. And as we all know it is not the same. Well and also I really need to read the other chapter and it drives me crazy not to know.
I also really love the way its written. It is the firts time I read a story in this format. I love it. I don't feel like i'm missing anything. The characters manage to say enough of what we need. That to me is incredible.
And thank you for all the replys. It feels good to know you read all of our reviews. I wish I could have said more in them, Thank you.
Author's Response: I do read and answer every one. Sometimes I answer from my Blackberry too, so I know how limiting it can be. Short answers are indicative that I'm on my BB.
Yes, the venom in the chapter, like with Vampires, symbolizes transformation. The change from boy to man. He has a long road ahead of him, but I think you'll be impressed with him, in the end.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
To excited.. Need to read next chapter. I love this story.*sigh*
Author's Response: Well, there is still more for you to read!
Thanks so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
*tear*...this was the saddest chapter so far. Not even Emmett could have helped. Please let them both be alright...please.
Author's Response: In the end, everyone will be all right, but not anytime soon.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
So excited. I can't wait till they tell Edward.
Author's Response: It won't be pretty!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Emmett and Jasper. God I love this story. I'm excited and sad, all at the same time.
Author's Response: It is a very tragic tale, that's for sure.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
Alice.....God I love this story.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you're connecting to the story!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Bella. God Emmett makes me all sorts of happy. I love it all.
Author's Response: Emmett is the bee's knees!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Alice...I'm excited too. I was trying not to jump up and down. I love it all.
Author's Response: I know! Such a relief!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Emmett, I think.. And I was not offended at all by this chapter. I did feel sad that it was just a dream.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it and understood why I chose to include it. Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I love it. I'm so glad they are getting ready to find Bella. I hope its not to late.
Author's Response: And what will she do when she is found?!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Esme...Thank god Charlie called Carlisle. Now I hope they find her. I don't think Edward should know yet. It would kill him *sigh*
Author's Response: Oh, he won't know for a while. I think Carlisle realizes the extent of Edward's depression.
Aren't Charlie and Carlisle wonderful?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Yes!..Emmett..I love this story.
Author's Response: I love me some Emmett! Wait until you meet Jasper!
Thank you again for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
If he is hurting now, I can't even imagine how he will hurt when he finds out. The amount of guilt will blow him away. Poor Edward.
Author's Response: Oh dear. Edward finding out will indeed be a tragedy.
Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Thank God..Someone..Angela is the right person to help Bella. I do hope Angela finds Alice. I know she can.
Author's Response: Angela is an angel in this story. None of this could have happened without her.
Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Well it good to know Edward is suffering. I do hope Alice can help Bella. I feel so sad knowing Bella is all alone.
Author's Response: Edward is definitely suffer and he will continue to do so for a long time to come.
Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Awww..This makes me so sad. I feel bad that she ran away and now is alone and pregnant.
Author's Response: Yup. There are so many mistakes, so many tragic errors in this story.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I love this human version of New Moon. Poor Bella.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
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