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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Amoxicillan, that's funny. :) Another great chapter! I like that Angela is there with Ben and Edward is doing better. I hate when people write him whinny. You're in my Favorites so I'll watch when you update!!

Joan

 

I hate that rating system. It takes forever for it to register. :(



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Great chapter!  I was missing this story for sure but knew you wouldn't leave us hanging for long.  :-)



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Aww...poor Edward.  What a horrible situation!  At least we know Bella won't die...right?!?!  :)



Author's Response:

That we do!

And poor Edward.  He doesn't want to take this from Bella, but he has no choice.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: cjngrls (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I have been waiting for you to update.. I love this story!!! So much is going on.. I know that you have metioned that you believe in happy endings... so I can't wait to see where this goes...=)



Author's Response:

Just hang in there and have faith!  I hope it will be worth it in the end!

Thanks for being patient and reviewing!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

i feel so bad for bella she went through all of this by her self and everyone gets to name her child and see her before bella. i think she should wake up. i hope bella and edward get to take her home together not edward alone. great job.

oh and by the way people need to lay off, you deserve a break! your story is great everyone will keep reading i'm sure.



Author's Response:

It is so sad.  She should be able to name her child, but Edward will do *everything* he can to make her proud.

Thanks for the support.  I wsan't at all offended.  I just felt so bad for disappointing!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

that has to be tough to name your daughter when you have no clue what the mother wants.... poor edward...but it looks like things are looking up for bella.....

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Edward is at a total loss.  He doesn't want to, but he has to.  He doesn't feel he has the right, but he has to.  He doesn't want to overstep Bella, but he has to.  So much to deal with.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Hooray for good news! I can't wait to see what Edward comes up w/.

Now to get Bella healthy again.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Awwww, poor Edward! Love Alice shopping for pink baby clothes! Please, Please, PLEASE do not name her Renesme, and if you do at least don't have them give her that stupid nickname Nessie! I can't wait to see what happens next! Awesome as always!



Author's Response:

Poor Edward is right!  So much on his plate.

And no worries.  No Reneesme! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovnsomecullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

This chapter is so great!  So glad you updated and no, I would never, ever leave this story!!!!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

No...I'm NOT leaving this story..NEVER!!!Can't wait for Edward to name his baby.. ;D Please update again soon, and please, don't leave us hanging for much longer.. Great chapter!! ;D



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: GoodyGoody23 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

It's very, very good. I'm glad this story is getting a little bit happier. Not that I don't like angst, but happy endings are the best kind of endings. I cannot wait to read more. :)



Author's Response:

There will definitely be a thread of hope that grows from here on out, although I'm definitely NOT done with the angst.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

i know how you can make it up to us... lol give more, ASAP ;) that would make me feel much better.. lol thanx for writing, i think its a great story and i can't wait to read what they gonna come up with..



Author's Response:

I will update MUCH faster this time!

Thanks so much for sticking with me and reviewing!

Reviewer: melbourne-cullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

im not going anywhere!

:D

can't wait to see what he names little love!! that has to be the most gorgeous nickname i've ever heard!



Author's Response:

That nickname came partially from his pet name for Bella, and partially from me.  I've called my son that since he was born!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Awww, the chapter was way too short. After all that waiting it was such a little taste. Tho probably good to have a break from the emotional roller coaster of the last chapter but still ME WANT MORE!!!

And now i have Rob images holding a sweet little baby and giving one of those drop dead gorgeous smiles.

*sighs*

Sweet dream material :)



Author's Response:

It is so funny.  All of the chapters are almost all about the same size!  Just some seem shorter than others.  It works better when I'm posting quickly.

I have a photoshop of that very image, if you want it.  Just email me at the_effulgent_one@yahoo.com.  It's worth framing!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: HaleyDK (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Ah!!!!! I'm really excited to hear the name.  Although Bella would die when she awoke, I think it'd be really nice if the baby's middle name were Bella.  A fitting tribute to the girl who fought so hard to keep her alive.  As well as the center of Edward's world, obviously :)

I really like the different POVs.  It rounds out the plot in a way that not enough stories utilize. 

I'm so excited for the story to continue! And for Bella to wake up.  All in good time, right? Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

And yes, all in good time.  I will do my best to make it worth it.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I was wondering what happened to this story!  No worries, I'm still here.  So, I am guardedly optimistic about Bella, but it sounds like she's going to be out of commission for a long while.  I have every faith in Edward to pick out the right name for his Little Love (and let's hope it's not Amoxicillin, LOL).  Great update!



Author's Response:

::: sigh ::: Just trying to post another little story.  But I'll wait until this is over.

Yup, Bella is going to be down for a while, but at least there is hope.

As for the name, you'll find out in the next chapter!  And no, it's not Amoxicilling (or Reneesme)!  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

so nice to have an update :) 

while it can't be fun and all happy, a medically induced coma is better than death :/ so it's a good news :) 

Can't wait for the baby name :) Please NOT Renesme LOL...or some crazy baby naming website name :/ I'm sure Edward will chose wisely though :)



Author's Response:

There is definitely hope for Bella now:)

As for the name... You'll actually get some crazy baby naming website action which our narrator for the chapter has choice words about!  But yes, Edward will chose wisely.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Don't stress over the wait.  We're here.  Well, at least I know I AM!  I wouldn't leave poor Edward and his brand new baby's side for nothing!  Very sweet chapter.  Again, you're doing a great job dealing with all the pain but also the business side of things.  Unfortunately, that's how hospitals work.  They have their jobs to do.  Anyway, great chapter and since Edward's a little on the angsty side right now, I'll take shirtless Emmett cooking my dinner!  Yum!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your patience!  I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story!

Shirtless Emmett!  Good choice.  Yum!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Haha, considering how brilliant this story is, no patience was required, it was so worth it!! Is he going to name her Renesme?? (spellings terrible, i know lolz)

Cant wait 'til next chapter! Keep it up!!

 

Le Grá Róisín =) Xx



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve! (and it won't be Reneesme)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

so good. more. ASAP!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: oncebitten (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

This story is a very differnt take on the new moon spin. It's interesting,and I enjoy reading it!:) patiently awaiting next update!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking a chance on my story!  I really appreciate you reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

yahhhhhh you updated...  I was getting worried..

I am sure Edward will pick a beautiful name that Bella will love.

Now I just want Bella to get better..

Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  So sorry for the delay!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

love it, couldn't leave ths story unfinished if i tried.  keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: rohan (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

That was a really good chapter from Angela's point of view. I wonder what name Edward will choose for their baby.  I hope it's not Renesme.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve! (and it's not Reneesme)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

well, it is only 7:45 as i read this and i sit her crying!  it is so beautiful.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you felt I did it justice.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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