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Reviewer: oncebitten (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
I love wet shirtless Edward!!! Thank you so much for that little tid bit ;) You so rock , this story keeps getting better!!! You keep the story enteresting with just enough edge to keep us coming back for more.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it! Wet, shirtless Edward on his way!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Thank you!!She's finally waking up..Although it seems that Carlisle might have been wrong, I think Edward being in the room when she wakes up might actually help her.. Great chapter as always...Now I really can't wait for the next one. ;D
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. For her tenuous health, though, it is probably best he's not there. Not yet. Don't worry, he will be.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Oh, I loved it. I of course heeded your warning and knew I would be confused...which I was. But it did start to make sense and if her dream were to ever become a reality, she will be so lucky. it was a fantastic dream and at the end when Edward had to leave her, that was so sad, *tear* great chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it! I know it was horrid that Edward had to leave, but it honestly needed to be that way...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: juneforever (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Once again you delivered. It was perfect.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
The first part got a little confusing but I stop and went back and read the authors note and then started over. I think it turned out cool once I figured out what was going on. Now I am just ancy for the next chapter come on she is finally waking up don't leave us hanging that is what we have been waiting for!
Author's Response: I knew it would be difficult at first, but I'm glad you got it in the end. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Bella will resurface in chapter 35.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ken4life (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
For a minute I thought I missed a chapter or two it was so real.
Very good chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
I enjoyed this chapter. Glad to see Bella back. My heart broke for Edward with him having to leave. I hope he can come back soon. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
i only want edward...actually more specific rob but i'll take what i can get...lol i can't wait for bella to wake up.....how much longer????
Author's Response: Well, I can't give away real people! LOL!
She will resurface is chapter 35. Not long now!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Hey Mrs Potato, I don't know how I missed this update when it happened. I love the name - it's a hell of a lot better than Renesmee (WTF!!), not sure I like Lizzie though. I know Emoward is stressed but somebody needs to give that boy a chill pill and a massage (I volunteer for that of course). Interesting to see how Bella comes out of this.
Off to read the next one.
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve of the name! Lizzie is to Elizabeth as Nessie was to Reneesme. Just mirroring the story and irritating Edward and Bella:)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'll send poor Emoward over for his massage!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Even though it was a sad chapter, the way you told the story was beautiful.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
* A delicious shiver runs down my back* ANY damp, shirtless Cullen you say....What a delightful image............................. *snaps out of daydream*
Ok back to business...Bella is waking up and I so can't wait to read about the reunion between her and Edward and not to mention little Elizabeth. the anticipation is mounting and I couldn't be more thrilled! I understand the need for Edward not to be there in the beginning but dang it all my curiosity is getting the better of me...Love it!
Author's Response: Yup. ANY damp, shirtless Cullen:) YUM!
Yes, Bella is resurfacing and a whole world of questions and answers are about to come to light. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GracieGracie (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Wake up Bella! I love your story.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
so well done. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ecsc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Ok so first I was kind of lost but then I got that she was dreaming. And yay, Edward got the name right!!! She was dreaming of the baby as Elizabeth!!! Thanks for updating on Bella's condition can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up!!
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it! Yup, Edward got the name right...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Great chapter, i love hearing Bella's point of view!Poor Edward having to leave the room just when she was waking up!
Author's Response: It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Basically Bella is doing the "there's no place like home" spiel. As long as she doesn't wake up and call Edward the Tinman, Cowerdly lion and Scarecrow all rolled into one I think we're doing good.
Seriously though, I did enjoy this little piece of Bella's psyche. Thanks so much for sharing your writing. I look forward to every new chapter of this story.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
I got it and I thought you pulled it off really well. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
This chapter had great drive. Very nice.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Okay Ellie, I want a shirtless Edward but I will wait til he gets here to give him my command...hehehe.. That is for only for his ears only...LOL!!! Loved the chappie and loved the dream part...I know it is only best for Edward to be out of the room when she woke up because not knowing what would happen when she seen him in her room..The part where she is begging Edward to help her find their baby was just a tearjerker...The anger I fully understand wanting to know why he left...I know that it is gonna be tough when she does open her eyes to find not only Edward but the rest of the Cullens there...but I am so looking forward to it!!!
Author's Response: You can give said command in private! LOL!
Yes, it honestly *is* for the best he is not there when she awakens. It's going to be frightening and stressful for her without facing her fear and her love. She just needs to ... ease back in.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
ok, next chapter pronto please. That was a great way to do it but I need more.....now!!!! Or as soon as you can if you would rather I be polite. I know the Edward/Bella thing won't be easy but I do look forward to everything.
Author's Response: LOL! I didn't hold back on this one. I submitted it Monday, but our amazing validators have SO much to do at the moment. There will be more soon tho!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Awww Bella's gonna make it! Sweet! I love how she needs him but doesn't need him at the same time. Wholeness is always achieved after the chaos has calmed. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. I've been receiving update notices for, like, every other story that I've subscribed to, and I get all excited cause I think it's for this one and then I'm defeated when it says some other title... you made my day! (That and the fact that I just colored my hair, lol)
Author's Response: YAY for hair colour!
I submitted this chapter on Monday, there is just so many stories waiting for validation, sometimes it takes time!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
Really good job...can't wait for more
Author's Response: I hope it wasn't too confusing!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
hey not only do i want a shirtless and damp jasper hale, i want u 2 update!!! its been forever, where did u go!?!?! i lovethe toy, and i wanna find out what is gonna happen 2 Bella!!
Author's Response: I submitted last Monday! There must be a long line for validation! But it should be up soon!!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Great chapter, and love the name!! :):) Can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jengurl0413 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
UPDATE!!! I loved it when you use to update every other day or so! I need a fix from this story1
Author's Response: I submitted the update Monday so there was only 3 days, but validation is a bit slow at the moment. The poor validators are working hard!
Seriously, though, I am definitely not trying to make anyone wait!
Thanks for reviewing!
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