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Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Wow, he's like, completely broken isn't he? Poor Edward:*( (I forgot to mention that I love that you've made them twins.)
Author's Response: Unfortunately, Edward broke himself. I like them being twins as well! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Eek! You have me on pins and needles...good thing the next chapter is only a click away. I really hope Edward finds out soon. And I really hope the baby is okay...that really would kill Bella :(
Author's Response: Make sure to read the A/N in the next chapter. It will be okay! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Awesome Emmet POV! At first I questioned why we were seeing the same events, just through someone else's eyes, until I realized you were giving us everyone's reactions to the Facebook messages.
Author's Response: This is one of the only scenes I retell from both sides, but in this case I thought it important. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: HalTwilighty (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
What an amazing way to write this chapter.
Going from her dream, to Edward speaking to her, to her own thoughts, and then to her waking up.
That was so creative. Wonderful chapter as always! Can't wait until the next one.
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Blushy McClumsypants? You had a riot with that moniker didn't you? :)
Author's Response: I did! It comes back up later! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Hallelujah! Carlisle's on board! Honestly, I always wondered why he - sensible, compassionate, rational, Carlisle - allowed the shenanigans in New Moon to progress as far as they did.
Author's Response: Artistic license, I'd wager. In this story, in reality, he would never have let Edward leave, but I needed to invoke the same license to parallel the book! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Ha, everwhere I turn lately it seems Facebook is inviting back to the fold...I think I may give in soon.
You have some very clever ideas! Thank you for incorporating modest technology into the story. It was lacking in the canon.
Author's Response: I felt that social networking is so much a part of everyday life now, why wouldn't a tennager turn to that avenue! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Ahh Alice, please don't listen to him! Stubborn has always been his middle name.
Author's Response: Ah, but stubborn and independent are big parts of Alice as well! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Aww, so glad to see Angela as the caretaker for once. I love that you made her older and mature.
Author's Response: I always liked her character and wanted her to have a bigger role. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I adore Alice. Thank you for her POV. Her paragraph about the way E and B complete each other...that they 'were love' was lovely.
Author's Response: Alice is definitely a force in this story. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Ugh! This was almost more depressing than the real scene! Love the idea btw. Will definitely keep reading. :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It is a bit of an angst fest! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
I BROKE THE 4700 CHERRY FOR YA ELLIE. WAS IT GOOD.....DO YOU NEED A CIGARETTE?
LOVE YA AND THIS FIC. YOU ROCK!
Author's Response: Oh. My. God! My Cherry was popped by my FIC SISTA! Are there not laws against this! LOL! Thank you bb! I heart you hard! :::takes long drag:::
Reviewer: bloomingdale (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
wow oh wow. please! i need more!!
this is amazing by the way :)
Author's Response: Submitting the next chapter right.... now!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
This was excellent! I cant wait for another update! I hope Bella wakes up in the net chapter!
Author's Response: Not the next chp but the one right after! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: chinaberry (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
LOVE the choice of Elizabeth Grace. When Bella named Renesmee in Breaking Dawn, I really felt like Elizabeth would have made a more appropriate middle name than Carlie. Then there would have been some connection to Edward's biological mom. (Not to mention the name Renesmee was awful all 'round -- I think River would have been a lot better!)
So, yeah, kudos to the choice. I like it. BTW, Jasper is awesome. " ...the FUCK was my future child being named Milan."
Author's Response: Actually, River was my choice for a girl when I was pregnant! So I love the name! Just not a Bella name, in my opinion.. I am glad you like the final decision though! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
good thing you warned us on your A/N. I was totally confused. hahah.. I would've been "wtf? is this even the right chapter? did I skip something?".
I love this chapter.. totes reminded me on the transformation, only better.
Part of me wanted her to wake up right then and there... and hug Edward, and be happy..
lol, I know its a process and it's not gonna happen that easily..(means more chapters right? yay!)
I commend you on your writing, your warm and inviting personality, and your effort to interact with us.. your a/n's are great, your talking to us with those and your replies, and I totes appreciate an author who does that. So thanks, and you're awesome.
Author's Response: Aw! Now that is a high compliment! If you can take the time to review, I can do my best to aanswer. As for the story, nope! Not that easy! But never say never! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
I like chis chapter, it was good hearing a bit from Bella, I hope her dreams do come true, I have a feeling they just might :)
Author's Response: Not too much longer before we find out! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Yay, such a great name, and I love Jasper's pov with all his little opinions, great great
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve of the name! I love writing Jasper! Such a break!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
OH MY FREAKING GOD! lol That was really great!! :)
Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
but...but...no!the NEXT button is missing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cliffie when she wakes up?you devil.you....UPDATE?for elizabeth.please. ;D
Author's Response: Lol! Submitting the next chapter as soon as I get home from work! Thank you so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
oh.so.much better than the Loch Ness Monster.and i LIKE the idea of Alice taking out that nurse
Author's Response: Lol! Alice was about to step to her! Glad you approve of the name! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
:'(
you do realize ive never cried for the notebook...or a walk to remember...or my sister's keeper?
but this////this is too much.
god job :' ) (see?its happyish crying)
Author's Response: Wow! That is quite a compliment! Thank you so much for your kind words and review!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
made sense to me, very emotional and moving chapter!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
oh god.i need tissues.oh so many tissues.
you did well...to say the last *tearful smirk
Author's Response: I am glad you felt I did it justice. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
im...not used to your A/N's being so...chipper.
the story though,it just catches it.that immeasurable wait in a room.'effin hate waiting rooms.one of the saddest places in the world,truthfully.waiting in that pristine white room to find out if someone you love is even alive?no feeling even comes close.
Author's Response: I am not fond of them either. The last bus stop away from insanity! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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