See, I was about to dazzle you with a brilliantly worded review about how enamored I am with Jasper's delicious vocabulary, and how glad I was that the fellas patched their shit up, and you HAD to go distract me with the idea of Edward.. in the shower... needing comfort.....

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*wipes chin* sorry, what?  I forgot what I was saying again...

 

*ahem*

Anyway.

 

Time to go wake Bella up! :)

 

~Jessa

 

Author's Response: Lol! He needs some comfort! So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!

How is it even possible for me to feel sorry for Edward? He's screwed up so bad and yet he's so sad and broken. Sigh.

Glad he and J have worked through some stuff. Very curious to see how Bella will react when she finally wakes up. Hoping she'll stick up for herself. But also hoping love will find a way.

Very concerned about the extent to which she'll think he's there out of obligation instead of love. And where exactly is the line between the two? So much going on in this lovely sad little story.

Author's Response: You have truly hit the nail on the head with Bella's thoughts. How much is love and how much is obligation? I just wrote these chapters and they address this directly. Thanks for reviewing!

I love your Jasper.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love him too!

I love your writing style, its very unique and enticing! Congrats on creating such a wonderful story and thank you for updating so quickly and for posting this for everyone to read.

Author's Response: I am so very glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!

Ooooooh boy. 

I got through EPOV with tears.  But the tears held hope and love.  I was overwhelmed with his words to his duaghter.

Enter CPOV and damn it if I didn't lose it.  I lost it real big and I am having trouble reining it in.  My dad and I have always had a very close bond as I do with each of my sons.  I can not begin to imagine the pain a parent would feel in this situatution.

I do love how Edward calls his daughter "little love".  It made me smile through my tears.

Sandra

Author's Response:

This was such an important chapter.  I'm so glad you felt I did it justice. 

It's a hard chapter, but there is so much hope here.

Thanks for reviewing!

Glad to see she is waking up.  I hope that she will be a little understanding when she does (towards edward) and makes a full recovery.  ;)  A girl can wish, right?  LOL

Author's Response: Keep the faith! Thank you for reviewing!

This story has made me cry throughout. Beautiful.

I apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but in this case, I really wanted to. You see, I just read the A/N for the next chapter and before I started reading that, I wanted to mention this:

Thank you very much for the tactful way you handled this. 

After my brother was born, my mother miscarried a year later - had an ectopic and lost a tube. Broke my mother's heart since she was five months along (learned it would have been a girl). Said she wouldn't have another baby.

I was their miracle child - born six years later after five years of attempts. I'm not a bad kid, if I do say so myself (haha, even though I'm 21 now, and have driven my parents crazy growing up).

Then, a year after my birth, my mother lost another child to miscarriage. Needless to say, broke her heart all over again.

It's easy for people to write on fanfiction and imagine these types of scenarios. It's easy to feel the emotions of the characters and write about hardcore subjects. However, you've tastefully addressed that you will not exploit such a sensitive subject and I genuinely would like to thank you for that.

I honestly don't mind if people write it, as long as it doesn't get offensive and ignorant. The fact that you've taken a stance, I think, has just impressed me.

Off to read some more.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for sharing this story. I had no intent, from the beginning, to go down that road. I just felt it unnecessary to take people into that nightmare when it wasn't necessary to the story. I am glad you felt that I handled this section of the arc with sensitivity and am so blown away by your review! Thanks so much for writing!

wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Oh how dreadfully sad that they made him leave!!

 

LOVE her dream/vision sequence. It was perfectly beautiful.

Author's Response: I am so glad it made sense in the end. It was a hard call Carlisle had to make in regard to Edward, but the right decision. Thanks so much for the review!

awesome chapter...i didn't really find it that hard to follow once i got into it...

i can't wait to find out what will happen once she wakes up!!

Author's Response: I am glad it made sense in the end! She will be back with us in Chapter 35! Thanks so much for reviewing!

oh please let angela know what is going on with bella, for chief swan to not totally rip edward's head off only half way lol can't wait to see how you work this 

Author's Response: Both Angela and I wishe she knew! And Charlie... How would you take it? Thanks for reviewing!

ahhh run from the emoward, at least the only thing saving him is the fact that he truly didn't know. can't wait to see how he handles being a dad 

Author's Response: He definitely didn't know and the guilt will crush him. But the quwstion is, can he stand back up? Thanks for reviewing!

damn this wrinkle, please let both bella and the baby be ok, oh where is the power of telportation when you need it. ahhhhhhh it had better be a good happy ending 

Author's Response: There will be! I promise! Thanks for reviewing!