I'm really enjoying all of these chapters, even though I think it's maybe dragging on a little bit, the time with Jasper and Elizabeth is really great. I'm just so ready for the big reunion!! I'm getting a little impatient, but can't get mad because it's still so good!

Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for! Bella is back in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

OMG wet naked Edward... I think that image just broke my brain a little bit!

Out of everything Edward did, this is probably the simplest to fix and I'm glad Jasper had the balls to come up and start the conversation.  It helped relieve them both of some guilt and kept Edward from slipping too far into emo land.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wet, nekky Edward is definitely a happy place! This conversation definitely needed to occur to start the healing process. I am so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Isn't this story posted on another site?  I can't seem to find it, but I thought it was further ahead in the story than this version.  Thanks

Author's Response: Nope! This is the only place the story is posted! I sometimes post sneak peaks on the forum, but the story itself is only posted here. If someone else is posting it elsewhere, please let me know! Thanks for reviewing!

Lovely. I'm glad that Edward is realising what he did wrong. Totally needed this piece. :)

Author's Response: I think the boys needed to talk in order for healing to begin. Thank you so much for your support and review!

.....I just love Edward....

I am so glad that he and jasper had their heart-to-heart.....

I know people want Bella to tear into Edward, but I don't I hope they can discuss their situation like to mature adults....

Did you say something about Edward in the shower - damn, I wish Edward was my baby-daddy!!

Author's Response: Edward and Jasper needed to have this conversation to start to heal. The camps are split on what Bella's reaction should be, but I guess we will just have to wait and see! Enjoy happy thoughts courtesy of Edward in the shower! Thank you for reviewing!

Ok Ellie that is just so wrong...having full access to the lockeroom shower with a very naked Edward....MY GOD, things that I could do....hehehehe but that is for Edward and myself to know....LOL!!!!  I really enjoyed E/J talking things over and I am glad to see them on the same page...They are best friends/brothers and they need each other...Jasper is absolutely right that Bella should not make it easy for Edward and I know she won't...But like he said that she would not keep Elizabeth away from him...She will forgive him because that is B/E and they belong together....Looking forward to the next chappie...

Author's Response: Edward in the locker room shower is a happy place indeed... Edward and Jasper needed to work it out in order for Edward to gain strength and start to heal. I am so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Ellie...it's only been a few days...and I was going through withdrawls...lol! Not normal...lol!

I puffy heart this chapter...the talk with Jasper and Edward...especially Jasper being so damn direct...and telling it like it is...perfection!

Oooh, Edward...in the shower...hello....hot damn...le sigh...and YES! :P

You know I loved it! I mean DUH! :P

Author's Response: Edward in the shower - a haappy place indeed! I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter and I am so grateful for all of your support both here and on the thread!

Such a wonderful chapter. I love how Edward is so eloquent with his words while Jasper is just a potty mouth. Glad things are patched up and I love the description of the connection Edward feels for Bella.

 

Now where's my view of that shower? LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully some more of Little Love?

Author's Response: The brothers are par opposites but they balance each other perfectly. As for the shower... Thanks so much for reviewing!

This is a great bro-to-bro chapter. I appreciate Jasper's willingness to take the step necessary to initiate it.  He's terrific, his colorful expressions notwithstanding. ;-)

It is a dreadful burden to have made a heinous mistake in judgment and live through the results of it.  To know the pain you caused someone and have to face it squarely. But I have faith in your  Edward. 

 

And in his family. :)

 

 

Author's Response: Edward is a work in progress. There is so much damage to heal and he has only just begun. Thanks for reviewing!

i like the best friend to friend bonding time that they just had....they both needed it...it helped Emoward to direct his thoughts away from the situation at hand with Bella if only a little while...

 

i can't wait to read your next project!

Author's Response: They needed to sort themselves out to heal too. I am glad you enjoyed it and that tou are willing to give the new story a chance! Thanks so much for reviewing!

ahhhh Edward....always regretting the past instead of forging ahead with the future...and if we know our girl Bella....she's all too forgiving of Edward....but alas, I hope you don't make it too easy for the fucker!

 

LOVING this story but you know that!

p.s. LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea for the new story!

Author's Response: She absolutely won't be. I just wrote THE chapter tonight! Thanks for reviewing and I am so glad you are willing to give ...Becomes the Swan a chance!

Poor Emoward. I would much rather have Jasper as my baby-daddy! Thanks for a great chapter.

Author's Response: Ah, Emoward will prove his worth! Thanks for reviewing!

Lol, can he wash up with passionfruit soap? Great chapter, I like how you got Jasper to say all those lovely words to him and make at least one piece of Edward ok again...

Author's Response: Jasper will truly end up being an anchor at the times you least expect him. Passionfruit all the way, bb! Thanks for reviewing!