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Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Finally---- Jeez.... the Cullen army is on the move... Carlisle’s rescue plan really sucked... Alice's rocks!
Author's Response: It's the difference between patience and impulsivity. Sometimes, one just has to go with the gut and get moving.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
.. I hope she doesn't lose the baby. She willl never ever forgive E if she does...
Author's Response: I don't know that she'd ever forgive herself.... That's just who Bella is. However, that was not a route I was prepared to go in this story.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
this Bella-rescue-mission is bigger than I thought... don't know if E can handle the news...
Author's Response: This, you will soon find out.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
wish Alice would go to B sooner than what Carlisle’s planned to do- chartering a plane and dragging E out of his hole may take a while.
Author's Response: By now, you've found out that was not quite the case....:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
great chapter... not much of B or E's POV in the last few chapters but all is good... love this story
Author's Response: The lack of voice from B/E was a purposeful choice. They are being spoken for by Angela and Alice at this point, as neither can find their voice.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Thank God to Angela and Emmett's facebook accounts! in as much as love Charlie, I must admit he's been really useless in finding his daughter... she didn't go that far from the nest!
Author's Response: She did hide herself quite well, tho. But yes, Charlie didn't have much luck....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
some sexy time with E&B - even if it's just a dream...
Author's Response: Also, they are, despite their separation, very much in love and very much on the same page.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Wished Charlie had called Carlisle sooner... the Cullens could have helped sooner.
... again I am not worried about E. Life goes on much easier for him (with family money, private tutor, etc) whereas B lives alone and has to work to support herself and her unborn child. Not fair... E had as much fun as her in making that baby!
Author's Response: Very true, but give E this... he didn' t know and I doubt very much he would have forced her to do that alone with no financial or emotional support.
That being said, I think you make very good points!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
love the Charlie-Carlisle duo... cheers to hottie dads of Twilight....
Author's Response: I love me some DILF's! Can you tell? LOL!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Angela teaming up with Emmett is very promising.. hopefully B gets some much needed support before and after the baby is born. The email she sent Charlie was a great touch. Loved it
Author's Response: Yeah, she *needed* to put Charlie out of his misery... in a good way.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
... very sad and angsty chapter for E but I still don't have any sympathy for him.. B is in much worst shape...
Author's Response: I don't know that I intended sympathy at this point. I didn't have much. More just... insight.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Poor Bella. She is so broken and alone. I hate Edward even more now than I hated him in NM.
Author's Response: It definitely adds a new layer into that particular parting.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Good old Alice..... loved her POV. I can't say I feel sorry for Edward.. I am just mad at him.
Author's Response: I would say most would agree at this point in regard to Edward.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I still don't understand why E left her... Jasper wasn't the only reason- The breakup here was worst than the one in NM. At least B wasn't pregnant in NM. Great story
Author's Response: Fear was the main reason. Edward was afraid.
So glad you're enjoying the story.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Poor little Bella- she is too young to have a baby...
Love the story- great writing.
Author's Response: Alas, the story is as old as time. Poor thing is terrified.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Great start... very HAWT first time lovin' between these two... can't imagaine how or why he would leave...
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
Keep in mind that this story is launching from the NM story, so the reasons aren't going to be any better than they were in the book. But I hope that the rest of the story sets it apart.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: moondancemama (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
omg....I don't usually cry when I read. This was simplay amazing.
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
That was a tough chapter to write. I'm so glad you felt it.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle
Thank you for the journey it was worth all the tears and laughter.
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Author's Response: I am so glad you gave the story a chance and that you enjoyed the winding road on which you traveled with our characters.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Guruvamp (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Have just read the whole story over the last day and a bit and I think that your ending was absolutely perfect for the journey that you took us on. Thank you.
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
I am so glad you enjoyed the story and thought the ending was appropriate for the journey:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
“That being said, I’m not going to argue the fact that he’s a twat waffle of fucking Roman Dynasty proportions, but he does love the hell out of you, sweet cheeks, and he fucking adores that little ragamuffin in the crystal palace. So, before you go all avoid-o-rama, or worse yet, psycho banshee, and don’t think I don’t know you have it in your ass, think."
The best line I have ever read, period!!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
Potty Mouth Jasper was *so* much fun to write! I'm glad you liked his words of wisdom...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EdwardxJacob (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle
Good stuff! I always wanted to see what became at the end of stories and these epilogues surely did satisfy! :D
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
I am glad you enjoyed the epilogues! Barring the first one, they were all written for the readers!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Your one of the few writers to actually get a physical response from me. Being that I was once a teen mom your story really hits home. You've got me hooked let's see if you can reel me in.
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Author's Response: As a teen mom, I hope that, in your eyes, I did this story justice.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
OMG she's pregnant. I just got that. I'm so stupid!
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Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
No you aren't! That's about the time you should have gotten it:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
I like the way you captured teen love and passion. The banter was perfect :)
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!
It's been a LONG time since I was a teen, so I'm glad I got that right!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: tricklem (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle
really enjoyed the story.
Author's Response: Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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