Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Not Like This
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Picturing "Shirtless Daddyward" is mouthwatering! Just yummy... Best part of this chapter!



Author's Response:

I don't think you were alone in this sentiment:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

LOL - Jasper is so crude....  I loved this chapter

"... the moronic, overly moral, pussy of a douche nozzle, that I call my brother...”



Author's Response:

What catharsis for ME!  I get to write all the things I'd like to say to folks that tick me off in RL that I cannot because decorum will not allow it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I LUV grandpa Charlie.... poor guy- his unconditional love for B, his remorse, his grief, his forgiveness... he suffered a lot in NM too



Author's Response:

Charlie did suffer.  Other than maybe Angela, he's as close to an innocent as one can get in this tale....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

I liked this chapter.. all Carlisle POV . I am kind of tired of whinning E. Like Carlisle said, leave the past in the past.. E is dwelling too much- he's got to move on and fix what he's ruined.



Author's Response:

Yes, he does.  But keep in mind, this is all happening in a matter of days.  E is struggling and it may take him a while.  But he will overcome.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

LOL - so many lovely names for E in this chappy: Daddyward; Fuckward; Emoward; Depressoward.... and all seem to fit him for sure...



Author's Response:

LOL! Fun to come up with too!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

E's first visit with the baby was heartbreaking... sounds like he's matured overnight- Charlie finally accepting/forgiving E was epic!



Author's Response:

It's strange how some events do that.  Some realizations change us from children to adults, immature to mature, in the blink of an eye.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Poor E... too much drama - I think he would need psychiatric help once this ordeal is over



Author's Response:

To be honest, they could ALL use some counseling, I think.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

another failed part of Carlisle's plan- not letting Charlie know beforehand and not preparing him - His outburst in ICU was unnecessary and caused nothing but jeopardizing B's condition.



Author's Response:

Methinks that Charlie would have exploded on seeing Edward regardless of whether or not he knew ahead of time.  But being prepared may have helped...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

these last few chapters were very hard to read...it hurts to read - they are so beautifully written that I have to remind myself that I am reading a story ... and try not to fall apart...



Author's Response:

I am so honoured that you feel that way.  I really tried to dig deep to make this, the crux of the emotional story, real.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

another heartbreaking chapter with E in B's hospital room... Seeing her like that is the biggest punishment he could ever get for leaving her - he would never forget that even if B - by some miracle - forgives him



Author's Response:

No, he will never, ever, be able to purge that vision.  Let's just hope that he uses it for good in the end - the consequences of losing someone.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

I wish I had a friend like Angela. She is a true friend- heartbreaking chapter



Author's Response:

We all should be so lucky to have an Angela...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

now I feel sorry for E.... he needs a hug...

loved Esme here... she is very strong and loving



Author's Response:

This is about the time where Edward begins to become symathetic again.  Not that he is "redeemed" by any means, but he's a person, a kid, who made a msitake...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Finally---- Jeez.... the Cullen army is on the move... Carlisle’s rescue plan really sucked... Alice's rocks!



Author's Response:

It's the difference between patience and impulsivity.  Sometimes, one just has to go with the gut and get moving.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

.. I hope she doesn't lose the baby. She willl never ever forgive E if she does...



Author's Response:

I don't know that she'd ever forgive herself....  That's just who Bella is.  However, that was not a route I was prepared to go in this story.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

this Bella-rescue-mission is bigger than I thought... don't know if E can handle the news...



Author's Response:

This, you will soon find out.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

wish Alice would go to B sooner than what Carlisle’s planned to do- chartering a plane and dragging E out of his hole may take a while.



Author's Response:

By now, you've found out that was not quite the case....:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

great chapter... not much of B or E's POV in the last few chapters but all is good... love this story



Author's Response:

The lack of voice from B/E was a purposeful choice.  They are being spoken for by Angela and Alice at this point, as neither can find their voice.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Thank God to Angela and Emmett's facebook accounts! in as much as love Charlie, I must admit he's been really useless in finding his daughter... she didn't go that far from the nest!



Author's Response:

She did hide herself quite well, tho.  But yes, Charlie didn't have much luck....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

some sexy time with E&B - even if it's just a dream...



Author's Response:

Also, they are, despite their separation, very much in love and very much on the same page.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Wished Charlie had called Carlisle sooner... the Cullens could have helped sooner.

... again I am not worried about E. Life goes on much easier for him (with family money, private tutor, etc) whereas B lives alone and has to work to support herself and her unborn child. Not fair... E had as much fun as her in making that baby!



Author's Response:

Very true, but give E this... he didn' t know and I doubt very much he would have forced her to do that alone with no financial or emotional support.

 

That being said, I think you make very good points!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

love the Charlie-Carlisle duo...  cheers to hottie dads of Twilight....



Author's Response:

I love me some DILF's!  Can you tell?  LOL!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Angela teaming up with Emmett is very promising.. hopefully B gets some much needed support before and after the baby is born. The email she sent Charlie was a great touch. Loved it



Author's Response:

Yeah, she *needed* to put Charlie out of his misery... in a good way.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

... very sad and angsty chapter for E but I still don't have any sympathy for him.. B is in much worst shape...



Author's Response:

I don't know that I intended sympathy at this point.  I didn't have much.  More just... insight.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

Poor Bella. She is so broken and alone. I hate Edward even more now than I hated him in NM.



Author's Response:

It definitely adds a new layer into that particular parting.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Good old Alice..... loved her POV. I can't say I feel sorry for Edward.. I am just mad at him.



Author's Response:

I would say most would agree at this point in regard to Edward.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.