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Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Poor E... too much drama - I think he would need psychiatric help once this ordeal is over



Author's Response:

To be honest, they could ALL use some counseling, I think.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

another failed part of Carlisle's plan- not letting Charlie know beforehand and not preparing him - His outburst in ICU was unnecessary and caused nothing but jeopardizing B's condition.



Author's Response:

Methinks that Charlie would have exploded on seeing Edward regardless of whether or not he knew ahead of time.  But being prepared may have helped...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

these last few chapters were very hard to read...it hurts to read - they are so beautifully written that I have to remind myself that I am reading a story ... and try not to fall apart...



Author's Response:

I am so honoured that you feel that way.  I really tried to dig deep to make this, the crux of the emotional story, real.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

another heartbreaking chapter with E in B's hospital room... Seeing her like that is the biggest punishment he could ever get for leaving her - he would never forget that even if B - by some miracle - forgives him



Author's Response:

No, he will never, ever, be able to purge that vision.  Let's just hope that he uses it for good in the end - the consequences of losing someone.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

I wish I had a friend like Angela. She is a true friend- heartbreaking chapter



Author's Response:

We all should be so lucky to have an Angela...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

now I feel sorry for E.... he needs a hug...

loved Esme here... she is very strong and loving



Author's Response:

This is about the time where Edward begins to become symathetic again.  Not that he is "redeemed" by any means, but he's a person, a kid, who made a msitake...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Finally---- Jeez.... the Cullen army is on the move... Carlisle’s rescue plan really sucked... Alice's rocks!



Author's Response:

It's the difference between patience and impulsivity.  Sometimes, one just has to go with the gut and get moving.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

.. I hope she doesn't lose the baby. She willl never ever forgive E if she does...



Author's Response:

I don't know that she'd ever forgive herself....  That's just who Bella is.  However, that was not a route I was prepared to go in this story.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

this Bella-rescue-mission is bigger than I thought... don't know if E can handle the news...



Author's Response:

This, you will soon find out.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

wish Alice would go to B sooner than what Carlisle’s planned to do- chartering a plane and dragging E out of his hole may take a while.



Author's Response:

By now, you've found out that was not quite the case....:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

great chapter... not much of B or E's POV in the last few chapters but all is good... love this story



Author's Response:

The lack of voice from B/E was a purposeful choice.  They are being spoken for by Angela and Alice at this point, as neither can find their voice.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Thank God to Angela and Emmett's facebook accounts! in as much as love Charlie, I must admit he's been really useless in finding his daughter... she didn't go that far from the nest!



Author's Response:

She did hide herself quite well, tho.  But yes, Charlie didn't have much luck....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

some sexy time with E&B - even if it's just a dream...



Author's Response:

Also, they are, despite their separation, very much in love and very much on the same page.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Wished Charlie had called Carlisle sooner... the Cullens could have helped sooner.

... again I am not worried about E. Life goes on much easier for him (with family money, private tutor, etc) whereas B lives alone and has to work to support herself and her unborn child. Not fair... E had as much fun as her in making that baby!



Author's Response:

Very true, but give E this... he didn' t know and I doubt very much he would have forced her to do that alone with no financial or emotional support.

 

That being said, I think you make very good points!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

love the Charlie-Carlisle duo...  cheers to hottie dads of Twilight....



Author's Response:

I love me some DILF's!  Can you tell?  LOL!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Angela teaming up with Emmett is very promising.. hopefully B gets some much needed support before and after the baby is born. The email she sent Charlie was a great touch. Loved it



Author's Response:

Yeah, she *needed* to put Charlie out of his misery... in a good way.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

... very sad and angsty chapter for E but I still don't have any sympathy for him.. B is in much worst shape...



Author's Response:

I don't know that I intended sympathy at this point.  I didn't have much.  More just... insight.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

Poor Bella. She is so broken and alone. I hate Edward even more now than I hated him in NM.



Author's Response:

It definitely adds a new layer into that particular parting.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Good old Alice..... loved her POV. I can't say I feel sorry for Edward.. I am just mad at him.



Author's Response:

I would say most would agree at this point in regard to Edward.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

I still don't understand why E left her... Jasper wasn't the only reason- The breakup here was worst than the one in NM. At least B wasn't pregnant in NM. Great story



Author's Response:

Fear was the main reason.  Edward was afraid.

 

So glad you're enjoying the story.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Poor little Bella- she is too young to have a baby...

Love the story- great writing.



Author's Response:

Alas, the story is as old as time.  Poor thing is terrified. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

Great start... very HAWT first time lovin' between these two... can't imagaine how or why he would leave...



Author's Response:

Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews! 

 

Keep in mind that this story is launching from the NM story, so the reasons aren't going to be any better than they were in the book.  But I hope that the rest of the story sets it apart.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: moondancemama (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

omg....I don't usually cry when I read. This was simplay amazing.



Author's Response:

Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!

 

That was a tough chapter to write.  I'm so glad you felt it.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

Thank you for the journey it was worth all the tears and laughter.

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Author's Response:

I am so glad you gave the story a chance and that you enjoyed the winding road on which you traveled with our characters.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Guruvamp (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

Have just read the whole story over the last day and a bit and I think that your ending was absolutely perfect for the journey that you took us on.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Sorry I am so behind in answering reviews!

 

I am so glad you enjoyed the story and thought the ending was appropriate for the journey:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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