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Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

FINALLY!  That went a lot better than I thought it would.  So glad that she's already okay with Carlisle.  And silly girl, worried about her dad being mad at her!  I think he's over the moon about his granddaughter.  Sure, it's not ideal timing, but life is what happens when you're busy making other plans.

And now to be greedy--just hoping that you don't make us wait forever for that initial Bella/Edward reunion, or for their reconciliation.  I know she's completely conflicted, but she loves him, she clearly knows it, and I think that a few  minutes of Edward prostrate before her groveling could make everything okay.  I just want them to be happy and love their baby together.  Little Elizabeth deserves two happy parents who love each other.  

Great update!



Author's Response:

YAY!  She's back!  And she tolerated Carlisle well, which bodes well for the rest of them.  Still, there's so much to heal and so many fences to rebuild.

It won't be forever for the reunion, but it isn't right away either.  It's coming, but other things need to be dealt with first.  She needs to work up to that.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jadsmama (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

awww she is wake. im to anxious at this point for her & edward to chat. i know its a process but can you get up there quick PLEASE LOL i hope angela tells her somewhat to be open and listen to Edward that he made a mistake. All the details should come need to come from him but angela is the perfect person to get Bella to realize( or at least open up some) that she can have a new start on life at this point and that ALL the cullens love her and want to be around her and the baby.

 

 



Author's Response:

I think you're REALLY going to like the next chapter, then!  That's all I'm saying!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: sassy_yvy27 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

OMG....... i love ur story i have tears rolling down, especially with the last moment between Bella and Carlisle



Author's Response:

I am so glad I did this chapter justice!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

OMG!   Bella is back, full conscious and specting to see Elizabeth and……Edward  on the shore ( although his  shore  seems to be farther away).   You make my day!



Author's Response:

She's back!  And although she can't see them on the shore, at least she knows they are there.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Finally! That was such a Bella reaction

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  I am glad I got it right!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

oh yeah, i just remembered, ive been checking out these songs by the veronicas (they're awesome!!) and i heard one of them called heavily broken-its erfect for tis story! not these last few chapters, but in the months before angela appeared...its also really awesome :D i just remembered. plus ive been trying to find songs for some of my faves fics :) check it out-i would sendn u a link on youtube, but itrobably wont be available in america-im in england so yeah...anyways, check it out :D



Author's Response:

Give it a shot!  Maybe I can access it!  A lot of folks post songs for the story on the forum thread as well!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Perfect!!!  I can't wait for her to meet Elizabeth!!! Hopefully Edward can see her reaction...**Pouting Lip*** I know I know...It will take time. **Pained Sigh** :0)



Author's Response:

It will take time, but I have already written that chapter and I think you will ::: squee ::: when you read it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay!  She's awake!  

I'm so glad that Carlilse was able to be there with her when she woke up.  He's such a soothing presence.  Can' t wait for more.  Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!



Author's Response:

She's really back!  YAY!  Now we can start on the healing!

Yes, she was able to get through being with Carlisle.  Hopefully this bodes well for Edward!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mnmtwilight (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Love love love it!

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay, an update. I love that this is going to take some time. But please not another 11 days for the next chapter. I cannot wait that long for Bella to meet her baby...and confront Edward.



Author's Response:

Aw, hun!  I'm so sorry.  I actually submitted the chapter a week ago, but the validators are really overwhelmed and it took them this long to get the chapter approved.  They do a great job, but it's a LOT of work.  So we just have to be patient!  I will submit the next chapter tonight tho, okay!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Great chapter! I'm looking forward for Bella's meeting with Charlie, Elizabeth and Edward. :)



Author's Response:

And they are all coming, one by one....  Well, almost.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay shes awake!!Is she gona get to see her baby soon??

Author's Response:

She's awake!  ::: happy dance :::  We're still a ways off from seeing her baby, but we're getting there!

I'll get the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

God your chapter's aren't long enough!
Im so glad Bella is back in the land of the living!
I cannot wait till she lays eyes on her baby and what she will think of the name!

I just hope she doesnt forgive Edward to quickly!



Author's Response:

This was the longest one thus far!  LOL!

Yup, Bella's back.  Now we just need to fix this...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

omg im crying lmao .. that was so sad ... you have to asap the next chapter faster faster lol i dying her you cant leave a girl hanging .. oh and i love love ur story



Author's Response:

LOL!  I love the enthusiasm!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story!

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

So glad that she's finally awake.  Thanks, Jennifer

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Author's Response:

Yup!  She's back!  Now we have to heal everything!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Good for her!



Author's Response:

It's about time, right? 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

OMG!! I can't wait until she sees Elizabeth! Maybe Edward can walk into the room holding her...swoon...Love this story. I am so glad that she is awake and not so angry that she can't keep Carlisle by her side as her Doc. YAY!!!

Author's Response:

I have already written the chapter where she meets Elizabeth for the first time and I think you're going to :::squee::: when you read it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yippee!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: -brunettemommy- (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

LOVE IT! I'm so happy she wasn't angry with Carlisle. =D

Hurry and update so she can meet Elizabeth and reconcile with Edward!

:)



Author's Response:

She's cautious with Carlisle, but not upset with him.  She feels if she can deal with him, as well, she'll eventually be able to deal with Edward.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jend (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

yay! i was so excited to see this updated! great chapter, i'm glad she's finally awake!



Author's Response:

LOL!  She's back!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

she's finally awake! woo hoo!



Author's Response:

About time, right?

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

How exciting, Bella has finally reawakened.  I'm sure the reaction from the rest of the family will be overjoyed when they learn that she has returned, and seems to be in good health (all things considered) and remembers what happened.

I'm glad you didn't cause her to truly freak out when she saw Carlisle and having something else terrible happen to her.  It would just be so unfortunate for another series of terrible events to happen.  Not sure how much more the Cullens, Charlie, Angela, or Ben would be able to take.  Not to mention we all really want to see Bella and her daughter get to know one another.  That should be a lot of fun!

Thank you once again for sharing your story with us.  It's wonderful!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

How exciting, Bella has finally reawakened.  I'm sure the reaction from the rest of the family will be overjoyed when they learn that she has returned, and seems to be in good health (all things considered) and remembers what happened.

I'm glad you didn't cause her to truly freak out when she saw Carlisle and having something else terrible happen to her.  It would just be so unfortunate for another series of terrible events to happen.  Not sure how much more the Cullens, Charlie, Angela, or Ben would be able to take.  Not to mention we all really want to see Bella and her daughter get to know one another.  That should be a lot of fun!

Thank you once again for sharing your story with us.  It's wonderful!



Author's Response:

Surprised I didn't put her through more?  LOL!  Nah, it's time for the healing to begin.  I know she's cautious of Carlisle, but she also recognizes him for what he is - a second father to her.  She's got a long road ahead of her, but it will be okay in the end.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Aww you are making me cry! That was so sad but sweet at the same time.

I think it's perfectly natural that Bella doesn't want to see Edward yet, and I'll admit, I'm kind of glad that she didn't just welcome him back with open arms. That might sound mean because we know how sorry he is and how much he suffered..but Bella doesnt know that. And she suffered a lot. Much more than Edward did...so I do hope she takes a bit of time to recover physically and emotionally before making up with Edward.

Great chapter! I can't wait for her to meet her little love!



Author's Response:

I am *so* glad you agree with this decision.  She wouldn't be up to that yet, I don't think.  I wouldn't be, were I her.  She needs to get back to some stability first.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Awwwwwww! Yay!! I didn't cry this time!!! (I think I wanted to, but it's all happy!!!)

Great job! I'll be moving from here to the forum and telling you again so *sticks tongue out* deal with it!

Oooooh I'm sooooooo excited!!!

Hmmm, any Cullen, eh? What about allllllll of them (you've gotten me to like daddy C) annnnnnd Sir Mix-A-Lot's "Baby Got Back"????!!


And rubbing passionfruit lotion on me... :)


Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

LOL!  Even Daddy C?  We've changed youo!

Love the song choice!  TEE HEE!

Glad you're enjoying the chapter!  Teaser for the next is up on the forum!

 

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