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Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

I wasn't supposed to worship at her altar at the age of seventeen.

mmmm interesting comment. despite convincing himself he left for her sake, was it more about him? did he feel trapped?...



Author's Response:

Not quite.  I think the intensity of his love, almost obsession, with her was part of it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

awwwww angela is a doll. but poor bella.



Author's Response:

Angela is so wonderful, and such an integral part of the story.  Bella is definitely living half a life...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Angela is the best. She's just so great at saying everything Bella needs to hear!!!

 I love this story. (I've said this so many ties, but its really true! 



Author's Response:

Angela is wonderful!  We all need a friend like that.

I truly am so glad you're still enjoying the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

oh alice, you should have told him she disappeared!!!.. but i suspect this would be a much shorter story.  Why did he leave her - must have been a secret reason, those he shares aren't good enough.



Author's Response:

He leaves because he thinks he'll hurt her.  It's not what Jasper did as much as his reaction.  He didn't just move her out of the way, he over-reacted (as usual) and shoved her through a table, injuring her.  To us, this was an accident.  To him and his completely overly dramatic ways, it was tantamount to beating her.  To him, she is much to precious to ever take the chance of something like that happening again...

Also because I needed the launching point of the story!  LOL!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Ellie, of course you have my support! You'll have to beat me with a stick, or something to get me to leave you alone.

Okay, that was kinda creepy. Oh, and Edward Castle...just super hot. Yeah.

Bella's probably really concerned that Edward feels obligated because of Elizabeth. As if. He's Daddyward and he loves them both. I should set up interviews for both of them, and they can answer questions. That'd be sweet.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, love!  I am glad to have all the help and the support!  Thank you for our BtS flashy too!

I think that you're right about part of Bella's concern.  Also, he left her once.  What if he does it again?  And what if he does it when Elizabeth is 7 and knows what's going on?  I'd be thinking that, were I her. 

But you're right.  As if.  Thing is, we've all gotten to see Edward's penance and his growth and what *he* went through.  She hasn't.  She's bound to be much more skeptical than the reader...

Interview away! 

Again, SO many thanks!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

just started this story on a rec, really enjoying it so far... thankpou!



Author's Response:

Welcome!  I hope you enjoy it!  It's an angst fest, but I'll set things right!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Awwww! I'm still thinking of my HEA moment.... it'll be good...

Author's Response:

Keep in in your head!  You'll need it after the next few!

Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

Lol, should I mention the passionfruit again?


And Elizabeth Grace is very pretty! You could even call her Eliza

Author's Response:

LOL!  Passionfruit it is.

Glad you like the name!  I prefer Little Love personally!

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Awesome.  I like that Angela got a chance to throw her two cents in.  And yeah, Bella has a lot to think about, and I can't wait for her to see Edward and all.  *sigh* 

Okay, hmm, let me think..... I'm going to go with Edward (of course) to be my Shakespeare in the movie "Shakespeare in Love," except without that whole getting separated thing at the end.  He and Viola had such a hot romance in that movie!  :o)  Thanks!  (and update again soon!)



Author's Response:

Angela definitely said her peace and gave Bella something to think about...

Whoa.  Now THAT is a GREAT Cullen/movie combo.  One of my faves so far!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Do we ever get to see Ben's POV? Just wondering... cause ya know, he's there and all and I don't recall hearing his POV before...

Author's Response: Not in the 40 some chapters that are written. But ya never know!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

This is the second time I'm reading this and I still ended up sobbing... maybe my face will turn back to white before I have to go to work...

Nothing says professional like splotchy-red-cry-face...

Author's Response: Aw! Not the best chapter to read before... Well, anything except maybe a drinking binge...

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

With low-slung pyjama pants? Pretty pretty please?

Author's Response: I would just say forget the PJ's all together!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Rosalie is da bomb diggity too...

Author's Response: She is the shizzle!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I think I was screaming along with him... in my mind of course...

Author's Response: I think I screamed aloud wriring it!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

You do this well, sweets...


You should be given a prize or something

Author's Response: Alas, no prizes for me. Just your reviews, which are better anyway!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I think my eyes hurt from all the tearing up I'm doing...


Can't really feel them anymore...

Author's Response: Ah yes. The broken lovers duet. That is a tear jerker...

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Lol, I always knew that my Emmy bear had manners!

Author's Response: He is every inch the gentleman. Take that as you will!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

I'd like Edward and Dirty Dancing, please.

Maybe she mean she wants things to work with the Cullens, including Edward, but she doesn't know how to get there. Trust would be very hard given the incident.

I dunno, but I feel so bad for all of them.



Author's Response: You are pretty close in regard to Bella's quotation! Great Cullen/Movie combo! Thanks so much for your support!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

*Sob*

Author's Response: He definitely pours his wee heart out! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

I think Bella should have a talk with Edward and Charlie soon.



Author's Response: We are still working up to Edward, but we're getting there! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

And I do lub me some Jasper as well...

Author's Response: I puffy heart me some Jasper! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Awwww, Angelas such a sweety, she knows that he needs to see her and that they need to be together while they can.

Marvelous, absolutely marvelous how you pull this all together!

Author's Response: I am so glad you feel that I did it justice. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Such a tough read! But now Angela knows that Edward's ready to be in it for the long-haul and that he really didn't know...


You're fantabulous, Sweets!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks! Angela so rocks though. The smack heard round the world! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Ohhhh, what was Alice singing?

Author's Response: You know, I am not sure. What do you think?

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Childhood... I'm not so sure that our dear Edward was a child when he said goodbye to it.

He made adult decisions and was living with adult regret...

Author's Response: He was definitely caught between the two, but he needed to finish that transformation in a moment's time! Thank you for reviewing!

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