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Reviewer: nurselisa (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Wow. Great begining to what I hope is an excellent read.

Author's Response: I truly hope yoi enjoy it. Thank you for giving it, and me, a chance!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

A wrinkle coming?...mmm  Angela tells Bella the Cullens are coming and Bella runs...or hit by the shock that they've found her - the baby comes early? I close?

Author's Response:

Oh God, were I to wish it was that easy.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

wanna washboard sundae. Never too old. Pleased Alice told Carlisle about the baby,(not a fan of all these secrets - too much miscommunication) but didn't she promise Ange to keep this a secret for now? Angela should be pissed I would be and I don't think Bella's going to be picking  them and the baby clothes up at the airport somehow... 

Author's Response:

Well, Angela promised to keep Bella's secret too.  I think Angela felt she needed help and talked to Alice.  I think Alice thought *she* needed help and told her father.  And then it was in the hands of someone who could make a coherent decision.  I agree, all of them should be pissed at each other, technically.  But, in the end, they were all right to do what they did.

Uh, no.  Bella will not be there to pick them up...

Thank you so much for your interest in my story.

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

“Angela, what are you talking about?” Alice asked desperately, her breathing hitching on the opposite side of the connection.  “Please, Angela.  I don't know what you're talking about.”

OK you've got my tearducts flooding...

Author's Response:

Oh, it gets FAR harder than this.  But still, Angela HAS to know at this point how little the Cullens *do* know...

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

“This situation calls for a 'fuck' or two,” I answered, then thought about what I just said.  “Fuck,” I mumbled.

Ha ha ha Emmett is the goods but Angela is a gem. I don't think pixie knows what she's up against...this call may not be that easy...


Author's Response:

Emmett is hilarious.  Wait until you meet Jasper, though!

And Angela... yeah, Alice is going to have a hard time following up on that!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

OMG this was unreal, my heart is pounding!!!!! if they only knew...

Author's Response:

I know, right?  If they knew what was really going on!

BTW, thanks for being my 5500th review!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

You are too hard on yourself. That was unbelievably beautiful. I love how their dreams are connected, both thinking of the other...

Author's Response:

I almost never posted this story because I thought it was awful!  My beta talked me into it!  So yup, I'm my worst critic...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

MMM the way carlisle puts forward the idea of keeping edward out of it, for now...seems a good plan. Considering noone knows about her 'state'.  Wanna hear about angela and Emmett on facebook!...maybe next?

Author's Response:

You'll definitely hear soon!

As for Carlisle, his decisions are always well thought out, but there are definitely some you'll disagree with at first...  Still, he's usually correct!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

best fanfic carlisle yet, i looouve him, pleeeeese someone tell Edward what's going on, it would shake him out of this depression... or would he just beat himself up more? love Chief charlie and Daddy C working together, this plot is really gaining momentum!

Author's Response:

I absolutely ADORE Carlisle and he's actually the voice that comes the most naturally to me.  He's just such the role model of father and man....

You'll see why and how they tell Edward.... There are definitely reasons.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

I wasn't supposed to worship at her altar at the age of seventeen.

mmmm interesting comment. despite convincing himself he left for her sake, was it more about him? did he feel trapped?...

Author's Response:

Not quite.  I think the intensity of his love, almost obsession, with her was part of it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

awwwww angela is a doll. but poor bella.

Author's Response:

Angela is so wonderful, and such an integral part of the story.  Bella is definitely living half a life...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Angela is the best. She's just so great at saying everything Bella needs to hear!!!

 I love this story. (I've said this so many ties, but its really true! 

Author's Response:

Angela is wonderful!  We all need a friend like that.

I truly am so glad you're still enjoying the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

oh alice, you should have told him she disappeared!!!.. but i suspect this would be a much shorter story.  Why did he leave her - must have been a secret reason, those he shares aren't good enough.

Author's Response:

He leaves because he thinks he'll hurt her.  It's not what Jasper did as much as his reaction.  He didn't just move her out of the way, he over-reacted (as usual) and shoved her through a table, injuring her.  To us, this was an accident.  To him and his completely overly dramatic ways, it was tantamount to beating her.  To him, she is much to precious to ever take the chance of something like that happening again...

Also because I needed the launching point of the story!  LOL!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Ellie, of course you have my support! You'll have to beat me with a stick, or something to get me to leave you alone.

Okay, that was kinda creepy. Oh, and Edward Castle...just super hot. Yeah.

Bella's probably really concerned that Edward feels obligated because of Elizabeth. As if. He's Daddyward and he loves them both. I should set up interviews for both of them, and they can answer questions. That'd be sweet.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, love!  I am glad to have all the help and the support!  Thank you for our BtS flashy too!

I think that you're right about part of Bella's concern.  Also, he left her once.  What if he does it again?  And what if he does it when Elizabeth is 7 and knows what's going on?  I'd be thinking that, were I her. 

But you're right.  As if.  Thing is, we've all gotten to see Edward's penance and his growth and what *he* went through.  She hasn't.  She's bound to be much more skeptical than the reader...

Interview away! 

Again, SO many thanks!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

just started this story on a rec, really enjoying it so far... thankpou!

Author's Response:

Welcome!  I hope you enjoy it!  It's an angst fest, but I'll set things right!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Awwww! I'm still thinking of my HEA moment.... it'll be good...

Author's Response:

Keep in in your head!  You'll need it after the next few!

Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

Lol, should I mention the passionfruit again?

And Elizabeth Grace is very pretty! You could even call her Eliza

Author's Response:

LOL!  Passionfruit it is.

Glad you like the name!  I prefer Little Love personally!

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Awesome.  I like that Angela got a chance to throw her two cents in.  And yeah, Bella has a lot to think about, and I can't wait for her to see Edward and all.  *sigh* 

Okay, hmm, let me think..... I'm going to go with Edward (of course) to be my Shakespeare in the movie "Shakespeare in Love," except without that whole getting separated thing at the end.  He and Viola had such a hot romance in that movie!  :o)  Thanks!  (and update again soon!)

Author's Response:

Angela definitely said her peace and gave Bella something to think about...

Whoa.  Now THAT is a GREAT Cullen/movie combo.  One of my faves so far!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Do we ever get to see Ben's POV? Just wondering... cause ya know, he's there and all and I don't recall hearing his POV before...

Author's Response: Not in the 40 some chapters that are written. But ya never know!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

This is the second time I'm reading this and I still ended up sobbing... maybe my face will turn back to white before I have to go to work...

Nothing says professional like splotchy-red-cry-face...

Author's Response: Aw! Not the best chapter to read before... Well, anything except maybe a drinking binge...

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

With low-slung pyjama pants? Pretty pretty please?

Author's Response: I would just say forget the PJ's all together!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Rosalie is da bomb diggity too...

Author's Response: She is the shizzle!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I think I was screaming along with him... in my mind of course...

Author's Response: I think I screamed aloud wriring it!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

You do this well, sweets...

You should be given a prize or something

Author's Response: Alas, no prizes for me. Just your reviews, which are better anyway!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I think my eyes hurt from all the tearing up I'm doing...

Can't really feel them anymore...

Author's Response: Ah yes. The broken lovers duet. That is a tear jerker...

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