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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Nice Chapter but I can't wait for Bella to finally ask for Edward and lets him into her room. Maybe a sweet reunion? As for the future? I'm forever the optimust and always hopeful of a happily ever after. With 4 kids of my own, I'm all for Edward and Bella to enjoy Elizabeth enough to want her to have siblings!! Fun! It's sweet that you will let your readers join in the story. You are a fantastic writer and I look forward to the rest of this story as well as others. : )
*hugs
Joan
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I want to try and give back a bit! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
wow I will totally be thinking thing up for you maybe a family picnic at the park? Awesome chapter, looking forward to the next
Author's Response: Good idea. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Bella should have told Charlie, yes - but she had no way of knowing where Edward WAS!
I just feel that Edward is... coddled by his family.
Author's Response: Well, she could have told him when she found out or gotten Charlie's help finding him. And you are right, Edward has been coddled. In this chapter, I feel Carlisle's actions were more support, though. Great points and I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
oh oh oh... i would soooo love to say baby elizabeth's first birthday... the family all together and celebrating it.. have flashbacks of important points in her life.. first bath, rolling over, crawling, saying dada or mama, first steps?... Of course i'd love to have edward and bella and elizabeth all together as a family.. maybe the cullens move back to forks and E/B/E live in a cottage on the property?! more of jasper & alice now that jasper has had some help.. emmett being the funny uncle everyone wants.. i want it all.. lol can't wait to read what you write.. i'm rooting for the b-day party scene
Author's Response: Very good idea! I am hearing so many wonderful ones, it will be hard to choose! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I would love for them to be together, and have a set of twins boys next...Elizabeth would be the personality of Alice- bossy, spunky and lovable all in one package, who has her daddy wrapped around her finger. What do you think?
Author's Response: Not bad! Very cute! Thanks so much for the idea!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I like epis. that are far in the future. How about Elizabeth's wedding or when she has a baby or something? I would like that.
Author's Response: Thank you for the idea and the review!
Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I lost it when he asked if Carlisle thought Bella would keep the baby from him. I know she wouldn't, but just the thought of it, was hard.
Author's Response: That has to be a huge and terrifying concern for him! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ecsc (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Sigh, poor Edward Atlas has the weight of the World on his shoulders!!! Can't wait for the Bella Edward talk.
Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for! Just remember I believe in Happy endings! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I would love to see Jasper forgive himself. I would love to see Angela, and what brings her in the future. Will she have finished college, married?
Lovely chapter as always! Very emotional, reading about Edward so broken kills big time. But this journey is so dear to me I can't help but enjoy each chapter as much as all the others. I'm nervous but excited at the same time.
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you. Your support is so dear to me! It is hard to read someone truly breaking down, but often one has to truly be broken to be fixed. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: xoxabby (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I know you had said it would be set in the future, but could you just do a one-shot or something of the meadow with them? Great chapter! Cant wait for them to talk, but that will come in time and it will be worth the wait.
Author's Response: You mean the event which brought us Elizabeth? I have definitely considered it! Do you think folks would like it?
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Brilliant as always, bb! I got a little teary-eyed with Edward's worry over never being able to see Elizabeth again... *happy ever afters, happy ever afters*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ok, so now for what I would like to see...
How about it's from Emmett's pov, where he gets to tease Bella afterwards about wanting another neice or nephew... then Rose and Bella look at each other and it turns out that Rose is pregnant...!?
Yeah? No? Not a chance in Hell?
Eh, I can probably come up with something better...
Author's Response: Lol! Good one! I like how you worked in other characters! Thanks so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I want to see them happy- and I'll brainstorm more on that after I get home from work. ;-)
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Brainstorm away! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I want a beach scene with baby (about 2 years old) in a pink frilly one piece and a big sun hat, sun glasses as well. She and Edward make a sand castle.
Author's Response: Cute! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
This was a GREAT chapter.. *sniff,sniff* Please update very soon. ;D
Author's Response: Poor Eddie! I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hydae (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
Oh my goodness!!! SOOOO GOOD!!!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: StefPhillips (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
i love this story! its amazing!! when will you be updating?!!? lol
Author's Response: The new chapter just went up! So glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
I love Elizabeth Grace Swan Cullen WAY more than Renesmee Carlie!! Good choice!
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
I can totally relate to Bella's statement of knowing what she wants but not sure what she needs.
Is her want of being happy with Edward and their child as a family what she really needs? Maybe. But maybe not right now. She really has been through so much and she really hasn't dealt with the loss she experienced. If she had, she would have taken better care of herself. She would have known that she needed some emotional support, that she should have "man'd" up and talked to Charlie that she was expecting. I know that hind sight is 20/20 but really she needs to work on herself and make sure that she is emotionally able to handle her life and that of Little Love's. Maybe she did know to an extent and depended on the support that Angela and Ben provided but at the same time all she really did was avoid the real issues she was needing to deal with.
Thanks for the update Ellie. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: You are spot on with your analysis. This is just what was running through my head when writing it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
I think she still wants to be with Edward but she does not know if its what's right for her or them. *sigh*
It seems she doesn't blame Jasper for anything. I think he should know that, do we get to see them having a talk.. I still don't think she's ready to face Edward but I think she can handle seeing Jazz. (or maybe I just want him back in the picture, lol)
I'm beyond glad she has Angela..she's a great friend. I adore that girl.
After watching Jackson as "Amanda" in criminal minds, I can't help but laugh at the image of cross dressing Jasper. After seeing hairspray and guffawing at John Travolta as a woman I would love to have fun with my potty mouth cross dressing Jasper, singing and dancing in a production on Hairspray.. :D hahaha..
Author's Response: I am dying laughing over your Cullen/movie choice! That's awesome! Yes, you will get to see a Jasper/Bella conversation. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Camba (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
i also think it is time for Bella to talk to Edward.........
It is stretching out toooo long LOL
Author's Response: I completely understand your anticipa(ion, but it just isn't realistic that she'd pop out of a coma and ask for the guy that broke her heart! It is coming, though! I promise!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
Wow he's getting better at pulling himself out of his funks instead of wallowing all the time.
Loved the interaction between Angela and Bella, she's such a good friend to her and I'm glad Bella realizes that.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Edward is definitely growing up quickly! Angela is such a good friend - just what Bella needs! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
Yay I'm glad Bella isn't a piece of furniture anymore hehe. I'm so glad she's back in the land of the living and can't wait to see how things start unfolding.
Author's Response: She is back! Now on with the healing! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullen Coven (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
Wow, awesome chapter and now I am caught up. Fantastic story. I'm hopeful that it will get a little easier on the heart from here. LOL
Author's Response: I am so very glad that you have enjoyed! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullen Coven (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
Awwww...at least she found some comfort in waking to Carlisle.
Author's Response: At least she didn't have to wake up to strangers or alone. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullen Coven (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Deals
Jasper is a win! Edward has a kick ass support system in place, he just needs to hear Bella's take on everything.
Author's Response: Jasper is awesome and just what Edward needs. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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