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Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
"He could name her Amoxicillin and Bella would go along with it. "
have i told you lately that i love angela!
"Fuck, it was what Edward would have come up with given several months and a fucking stack of research the size of a pony before generating a name. And it was a fuckload better than Milan or some Alice Noveaux shit. "
and jasper is awesome too!
Author's Response: I love both of them so much. They really play mirror image roles. Angela is to Bella what Jasper is to Edward. The truthtellers.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
"He could name her Amoxicillin and Bella would go along with it."
the first thing that made me laugh out loud so far!
Author's Response: LOL! So true though. There definitely more comic moments as things start to resolve.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
i love that edward calls her "my little love" that is too sweet. i am glad to see that charlie came around...glad he heard what edward had to say.
Author's Response: I usually am against eavesdropping, but in this instance, it did so much more than any conversation they could have had. And Little Love is what I call my son:)
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
oh god...is she gonna be a renesme?
“I’m no help,” she whimpered. What the fuck? The way Alice tells it, she’s the only one that helped at all. Luckily, mom agreed. “Hush now, Angela. You’ve been invaluable.”
now i see why this was a suggestion-and angela really is intergral to this story. i can see why you probably didn't use a jessica or another chararacter. loves it! looking forward to rec-ing it to the masses!
Author's Response: I needed someone outside the Cullens who could be relied on. In canon, Jessica is unreliable as a friend. But Angela was always there - even in the worst of it. She truly is intergral to the story.
You like it enough to pimp it? Wow. Thank you!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
glad to see rose isn't a raging bitch lol...
Author's Response: Nope. I think Rose is just misunderstood. Where Jasper exploded at the death of their parents, Rose imploded. She's just as damaged, but she doesn't let it show.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
How did he think she could live without him? Him without her?
-so true angela
It was like, even now, even in this hell, they were in their own private little bubble where no one else could enter, even if they were allowed; like a force field or some shit erected around them whenever they were near.
I’d watched way too much Star Trek with Ben.
-awesome comic relief
i have faith bella and baby will be okay, but poor edward....
Author's Response: Yeah, Edward has definitely paid for his sins, but Bella doesn't know the price...
Angela is definitely wise. A straight shooter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
that went better than it could have. charlie is upset and understandably so. i hope bella wakes up soon.
Author's Response: I think Charlie actually handled that quite well, personally!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Edward, no one deserves forgiveness. We’re all granted it. All of us.
true...but will he believe that.
Author's Response: ::: sigh :::: Probably not.
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
i love some emmett.... poor charlie. i definitely like how you write him. he's not so standoffish.
Author's Response: I never thought of Charlie as standoffish. I kinda saw him as the adult male version of Bella - a little shy but opens up when he gets to know a person. He knows the Cullens a bit better in this story...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
i really hate to quote in my reviews but this has to be one of the most spectacular things i have read
The fact that my entire future, my eternity, my heart, my soul, my world relied on the next few ticks of the clock. The possible penance for my sins, however undeserved, was in that room, those hands, that heart. Only she could grant my contrition. Only she could forgive me my transgressions.
Only she could forgive me.
Only it was possible she would not even survive.
Her end would bring my own.
If anything, I had realized that I was nothing without her. Nothing. I was a shell of a man with an empty heart and a blackened soul. I was without light.
She was my light.
She was my act of contrition.
Author's Response: Really? Wow. I really try to get into the character's heads and Edward has such a poetic voice. I can only hope I can capture it as beautifully as I hear it (I know I don't but I try).
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
i like jasper...he's hilarious
Author's Response: I never meant to write Jasper, but he's stays in this story for the haul. I had WAY too much fun writing him!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
poor bella. i can't stop reading lol....going on 7 hours off and on lol
Author's Response: 7 hours!? And you haven't had to get a Prozac IV? LOL
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
yay angela is awesome! i am soooo glad hmonster4 & ginnyw31 sent me your way!
Author's Response: Wow! They read this fic? I knew Ginny did, but hmonster too?
Wow.
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
ugh...i have been battling...read, watch vma's twitter...reading keeps winning!
Author's Response: Wow - even over Rob sightings? I'm honoured!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
that was beautiful. glad to see esme put edward in his place while giving him one last chance to be a child.
Author's Response: Esme definitely gave him tough love and comfort in equal doses.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
gahhhhhhhhhhhh!
Author's Response: Not an easy chapter, that one.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
ahhhhh good boy edward!
Author's Response: He's finally waking up!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
thank god for angela!!! i really hope the baby is okay.
Author's Response: Angela is a saint. Thank goodness she had the thought to go look!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
I think it is awesome that you have put your trust in your readers to help you write the epilogue! I am invested in this story, and I am looking forward to reading what you come up with. Great chapter. I love the slow pace of this story.
Author's Response: The ideas have been amazing. I can't wait to write some of them up!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
dun dun dun....thank god i am reading this late in the game...so i don't have to wait for the next chapter...at least right now!
Author's Response: LOL! I don't know that you'll like where you will have to leave it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
i like the alice/carlisle moment when she calls him daddy. shit is about to hit the fan!!! woooo!
Author's Response: They tend to call him dad or daddy only when they need help. I didn't notice until I'd read several scenes like that...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
My God, I am so behind on my reading. The only saving grace I have is that I can press the next button after leaving this review. You wrote this chapter beautifully. I am anxious to read another chapter.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I am so glad you liked the chapter! And there's still more!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
AHHHHHHHHH! so alice knows! about time! now lets see what happens when bella sees her.
Author's Response: Alice will get this parade on the march!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
all i see in my head is alice bouncing lmao
and i love emmett clearing the browser so carlisle doesn't see his facebook lmao
Author's Response: There's no way he wants Dr. Daddy to read his wall!
Alice is such a bundle of energy!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
i love emmett and angela! glad the facebook thing worked out!
Author's Response: Emmett is so wonderful! YAY for Facebook!
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