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Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Great chapter! So was Bella thinking Elizabeth anyways? Just wondering! I cant wait for the update!



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the chapter!  Your question about the name will be answered.  Promise!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nephilim15 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Update!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll submit the next one tonight!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy birthday! I hope you got an Emmett wrapped in a bow and a smile(and nothing else)! I also hope you got a Jasper so you could spend your B-day completely blissed-out. This Chapter kicked my arse. I teared up the moment Charlie opened the door and pretty much didn't stop. You did GOOD! Can't wait for THE CONVERSATION. I hope you update soon and don't leave us poor crying souls hangin. :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

I will be submitting the next chapter tonight:)

Now *thud* that's a hell of a birthday present!   YAHOOO!!!

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awww.



Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

 I had heard about this from friends of mine and honestly I wasnt to hopeful about it as I started reading it, All though the chapters are short, its Damn fine writing. Specially for someone so young to use events that sadly alot of kids are going thru these days. I comend you on your talents and cant wait to see the rest. Best of luck.



Author's Response:

I am glad you gave the story a chance!

There is some confusion about my age.  My birthday was on the 18th, but I'm quite a bit older than that.

I'm grateful that you have read and thought enough of my story to review.

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

happy birthday! well belated.. the story is coming along nicely... hahah give you a cullen?... i adore jasper... iono maybe a monkey that does the switcheroo =) rocking out



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. 

LOL!  I'll take that virtual gift!  YAY!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday! I'm giving you naked Jasper with a New York Style Cherry covered Cheesecake, because thats what I would want for myself. He also has emeralds set in platinum.

 

I've been thinking about Bella. Is she putting off seeing Edwards because she is afraid of being rejected again, or because she is angry, or maybe both? I've also been thinking about the epilogue. I still think them not getting back together immediately is the right thing, but I'm changing the reason I think that. From What I've learned of the character, I think Bella will want to be with him but will have a hard time accepting that he actually wants to be with her. I think she'd go through a period of firmly believing the only reason that he wants to be with is her for the baby and not because he really loves her. She is just so self sacrificing. Sorry if I'm imposing too much. As you can tell, I have no life.



Author's Response:

No, you're making very very good points and you're definitely following the same wavelength I am.  Not to say that what you've said above is exactly how things will go, but you're definitely reading Bella correctly.  Bella is putting off seeing Edward for a variety of reasons.  Some of it is hurt.  Some is trust.  Some is worry.  Some is the fact that her heart and her mind are in direct opposition and she wants to be more... clear... before she speaks with him

Thanks so much for the AMAZING virtual birthday gift and for the review.

Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Yey! She finally realized that she hadn't been told the baby's name yet! So, did she want her named Elizabeth the whole time??? That's awesome.

This is ending soon, isn't it?? uber, epic sadness coming from me.

Author's Response:

I am thinking there will be about 50 chapters in the main story and then the 8-10 chp epilogue.  So we have a way to go yet:)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Hope you had a great brithday!

Loved this chapter! Poor Bella needs to be reunited with Elizabeth soon, it's breaking my heart as a mother. Looking forward to some Edward/Bella interatcion too! :) MORE PLEASE!! :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B/Eliz now!  Chapter 41, here we come…  At least they will all see each other again.

It hurts my heart as a mum as well...

Thanks so much for the birthday wishes and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Belated Birthday BB!!!!!   I liked the chapter, a lot!

Manda



Author's Response:

 

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

 

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awwww, loved this chapter.  So glad she loved the name.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  I'm glad he was the one who got to tell her the name.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Great chapter!  It was really nice to see Charlie and Bella chat about things.  In an indirect way I think Charlie helped prepare Bella for 'THE TALK'.  Happy Birthday!! :)



Author's Response:

 

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  He thinks Elizabeth should have both parents, so he's doing a good job trying to pave the way for THE talk.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

ahhh.. i'm going insane over here.. i need more.. lol



Author's Response:

More is coming!  I should be submitting tonight!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Good conversation.  You are still killin' me with the anticipation though.  Such sweet torture.  Bring on Edward!! :) :)

I pick Alice.  She would give you a beautiful designer outfit complete with killer shoes and bag, and a gift to a spa for a massage, mani and pedi.

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…  It's not THE talk, but they will see each other for the first time.

AWESOME birthday gift!  So much fun! 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

happy belated birthday.... i give you jasper, lying on ur bed covered in whipped cream, strawberries, and that magic shell chocolate stuff:))



Author's Response:

DAYUM!  Now that's a birthday present!

Thanks for the well wishes and the review!

Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Great story. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to talk and makeup. I know it will take time for them to heal but I want them back together.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

okay seriously get to the edward and bella talk, you cant drag it out anymore.



Author's Response:

You have to understand that we've seen everything Edward has been through and how much he's paid, but she hasn't.  It's unlikley she'd pop out of the coma and ask for the guy who broke her heart and who may have alterior motives (the baby) for being there.  Bella has to work up to it.  So I'm not dragging it out, I'm trying to keep the realism.  I am so sorry that it's frustrating.

I will tell you that it's coming.  They will see each other in Chapter 41.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Oh sweet tourment, you write it so well. Again i had tears in my eyes reading this (and i never usually cry reading fanfics) You do a wonderful job getting the emotion across and i especially love all the things you have done with Charlie in particular. I think you really capture his spirit.

I can feel the heart ache coming already as THE conversation draws near. I can imagin Bella's heart pounding in her chest as she realises that she cannot hold this off forever. And i can feel her pain as her arms ache to hold her little girl. I could not imagine not being able to see my child after such a roller coaster ride. Dont leave us waiting too much longer for that reunion ok.

Awesome work and I cant wait to have the time to go back and read it all over again :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Bella definitely has so much on her plate and she has to be dreading THE conversation.  So many emotions she has to face.

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

okay, I'm crying here. Your fault, too.
Lovely moment between Charlie and Bella. Thanks for writing.
Happy Birthday!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  He adores his daughter, even if he doesn't always show it in a traditional way.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awww.. I am so glad there are a few happy moments with Charlie and I am sooooo glad she loved the name.  I think this is one of the best stories I have read in a while.  Love it :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  I am so glad you're enjoying the story.

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

So sweet! I'm glad Charlie told her the name.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I'm glad Charlie was able to tell her the name if Edward could not...

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Wow!  This is a tender father-daughter moment.  Love it.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday for the 18th!  For your present I will send you Alice for the day.  She told me that she will take you shopping and buy you an entire new wardrobe!  Complete with shoes, bags and all of the bling that your heart desires.  I have also asked her to look a little into your future, just to give you a heads up on anything coming your way................ 

Ps - Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

A shopping day with Alice would ROCK!  Thank you for the virtual gift!

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Aww I loved this chapter. It was so sweet with how they are kind of awkward together, but yet, you can tell that they love each other and she is his little girl and always will be.

This part made me laugh :“Look, Bells.  I know how babies are made, but let’s just skip that part, okay?  I’m going with the immaculate conception theory right now.” 

When Bella was happy that at least Elizabeth had a mommy with her (Esme), that made me kinda sad but it was cute...and when Bella said that she wanted Elizabeth with her so she would know that her mommy didn't abandon her made my heart break! Bella needs her baby! Dammit! Why aren't they taking her to Bella yet? I would be freaking out and demanding I get her. haha

I am definitely getting excited for the Edward/Bella reunion! I'm sure there will be lots of heartache with it and apologies and all that..but I'm so excited.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  And they really do sort through a lot in this chapter.

Elizabeth isn't quite stable enough to be moved from the ICU yet, nor is Bella stable enough to go see her, but you're right, I'd be screaming bloody murder as well.

Bella/Edward/Elizabeth - Chapter 41.  Nuff said.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Good Job and Happy Birthday!! Since I'm a little possessive of Edward, how about naked Jasper wrapped in a red bow?



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

Any of them will do for me:)

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

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