yeah so bella know edward loves her

Author's Response:

I think she knew that.  But she's still not so sure on the trust.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

OMG I freakin love Jasper like this!  Hilarious and yet not pointless in his comedy! 

BTW did you know you're the only author who replies to every review that I know of and considering how many reviews you have that's quite an accomplishment! 

Tell Alice to find me something that makes me look 50lbs lighter and puts my boobs back to where they were pre-kids! LOL

Author's Response:

I am so glad you like Jasper like this.  He's a blast to write, but always has something to say.

I really try to answer all reviews.  If you take the time to read and review, I can thank you for it.  It's a little slower with ...Becomes the Swan, but we get to them all eventually!

LOL - Wouldn't we all like that gift from Alice!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Definitely my fave POV so far. Crazy Jasper is so win.

Author's Response:

Jasper really does know how to get his point across and he's one of my favourite to write.

Thank you so much for your review!

 

Wow I think I've learnt some new words lol.

Jasper getting straight to the punch and laying it all out for Bella is exactly what she needed. Everyone else was trying to "protect" her from her feelings and letting her ignore all the big important things going on. Jasper has laid it all out for her and now she has to start making descisions because soon shes going to run out of excuses to not talk to Edward and start making the descisions.

Esme's quite understanding with Charlie was very well done. She knows what caused everything to fall apart to begin with and knows that for anything to be fixed that the opposite is what needs to happen.

Author's Response:

Jasper really does know how to get his point across!  He pulls no punches and doesn't allow her any excuses.

The conversation with Charlie and Esme needed to happen - they both are feeling helpless just about now...

Thank you so much for your review!

oh.my.god... seriously?  this is was fucking brilliant!  i figured that you would have alice tell her what went down, but jasper?! so much better!!  and i love jasper too, he's the perfect little foul mouthed creature - some of those combo's were epic! i heart you so hard :)

i would like to have seen some more of how esme was feeling rather than just basically seeing charlie through her.  but, it's not really that important i guess, plus there is a lot more time for that later.  i liked how charlie was so perceptive to the possible complications with bella and edward though... very cool.

oh honey... only ONE thing... geez, this is a hard one.  part of me wants to say a leopard print snuggie, just because it is HOT, haha.  no, i'd definitely have to go for a great pair of shoes... i'd sit on edward's piano and wait for him with only the shoes and my guitar... we'd play some music and sing together and then have serious fun afterwards with/on said piano :)  you are too much fun with this whole sparking my imagination thing!

Author's Response:

LOL!  Jasper is the best.  I couldn't think of a better person to tell the real story of what happened.  Glad you appreciated his word vomit!

There will DEFINITELY be more of how Esme is feeling.  She actually has a large, pivotal chapter coming up later.  She and Charlie really accomplished a lot.

LOVING your use of my incentive!  Go you with your vixen mind!

Thanks for reviewing!

I love your jasper.  he's just honest and doens't seem to give a shit what he says.  Love it.

I'll take a beautiful silk scarf to wear in front of Carlisle... I get to use it on him, right?  If not, I wantme a Coach purse.  A big one.

Author's Response:

Jasper is so to the point and pulls no punches, but he's got a huge heart.

Nice choices!

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Ha.  I love dirty speak Jasper.  His creative use of the word waffle gets me every time.  And I love that he was straight with her.  She definitely needs that.  Can't wait for more.  Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!

Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across!  She did need to hear it all.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Yes, I'm just as anxious as everyone else to get to Edward, but it's good that Charlie has Esme to talk to. Charlie's concerns are valid and Esme is worried but understanding.

I am glad Bella wants to talk to Jasper. He could tell her the truth and not bs around.  He did give her a lot to think about, and that may be what makes it easier for her to talk to Edward. Baby steps, right?

Hmmm, although I am an Edward girl all the way, maybe Alice can get me some new boots - after that last chapter, I feel like going dancing with Jasper.  Surely Alice won't mind...

Liz

 

Author's Response:

Esme is such a wonderful mother.  She and Charlie really needed to have a meeting of the minds as I feel they both are feeling helpless at the moment.

As for Jasper – You know I love me some Jasper!  He gets straight to the point in his ever eloquent way and doesn’t pull any punches!  He also seems to be gaining his own fan club!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

I LOVE Jasper!  Who else would have called Fuckward a Twat Waffle?  Great job there!

Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

I'm w ya til the end girl!  rock on!

Author's Response:

Thank you, sweet!

Your support means the world!

Sorry I missed your B-day!  To make up for it I'll give you Edward and Jasper singing Dick In A Box, Their packages are wrapped in silver paper Edward's with a green bow and Jasper's bow is blue!  Hope you like them.  THX        Oh, great chapter.

Author's Response:

Glad you loved the chapter!

Ok, that's the best f*cking birthday present EVA!  Thank you so much!  I can't wait!!

 

 

Sorry this was late, bb, but I think you'll be more understanding than most. We had a rough couple of days.

Oi, but this chapter was fabulous! Even though I already read it (which, you rock for, by the way - sending it to me early), I still had to read it over again. I'm enraptured by your writing - it's enchanting, to sum it up in one word.

I love Charlie. I think you've managed to capture him well.

As for which Cullen I'd give you for your bday (even though it's late)...

Well, I'm kind of in love with Emmett...I'll share him with you, just cause I think you and your writing is THAT awesome. But...you can only have him for the weekends - I get him Monday through Friday.

You're the best and all, but come on - he's my poopsy.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it and that I was able to share it with you early.  I hope that you got a little light in your dark time...

Thank you so much for the virtual birthday gifts and for the review:)