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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Well what I want to happen and what I think is going to happen are two different things. I this were fariy tale land then Edward and Bella would kiss and make up, and live happily ever after with Lizzy, but alas that is not the case. I think it's going to take time for Bella to heal. I love this story. Keep up the great job! :)
Author's Response: Alas, it won't happen like that in this story! But that doesn't mean they will never be! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: darkwavs (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
i expect bella and edward to have an honest conversation about all that has happened and WHY. lay it all out on the table, edward needs to declare his love and they need to move forward, together.
Author's Response: It may not all be accomplished in one chapter but you are on the right track! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Beautiful chapter! On the next chapter I hope they take one look at each other and fall in love all over again, but....I know that they wont talk about anything they need to, the will skirttail around the issues as usual and put words in each others mouths from the actions and body lanquage they see in each other!! God I hope I'm wrong! Love this story so much!
Author's Response: Lol! As for the next chapter, rest at ease, that doesn't happen. Not to say what does is a whole heck of a lot better... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
I loved Emmett and his loud, obnoxious ways. I would love to see Edward holding Elizabeth and giving her to Bella to hold. I know they don't allow walking around with babies in the hospital but you can let Edward do it. I won't tell.
Author's Response: Em is so wonderful! As for what you want, you may be pleasantly surprised;). Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Zing (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
loved it! I can see how the friendship never really left... and Emmitt is really a big cuddly bear :)
I would hope that Bella wouldn't let Edward back to easily. He contributed to her personal hell reather greatly, and should know all about it. However, I am a romatic at heart and can't wait to see what happenes when love triumphus.
Thanks for the update,
Kris
Author's Response: I am glad you liked the chapter! Em is so easy to love... Bella is not going to forgive as easily as in canon, but love will prevail! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
First, review... you had me in tears through the whole Alice POV. Alice noticing at the end..Bella smiling with tears still in her eyes... that she hadn't forgiven them yet.. was just major heartfail for me. As always, beautifully written.
Second, assignment... Hmmm? I would like for Bella to be taken to the nursery to see Elizabeth (before she is transfered to her room) and that she sees Edward, without him noticing her, being an all loving daddy.. maybe with his shirt off holding Elizabeth. I would love for her to overhear him talking to Elizabeth on how much he loves Bella and what a huge mistake he made.. then there would be no doubts for Bella of how much he really loves her, and not just necessarily because the baby is in the picture now.
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the chapter! It is not fixed but a step in the right direction. You have some wonderful ideas on the reunion! Thanks for sharing and reviewing!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
well, thank you freakin' JEBUS that Edward and B will make some eye contact!! I bet she hurls after he leaves the room, poor thing. I wish he could bring Elizabeth in to her!!
She's gonna love him again, I just know it. :) And as for forgiveness....she should realize that he might have some forgiving of his own to do...she never told him about the baby, didn't take care, and damn near died and killed the baby too! Yes, she didn't mean it, but the end result could have been SO much worse, not that it was good! They have to forgive one another, and themselves, before they can move on.
PLEASE OH PLEASE HURRY WITH THAT CHAPTER!!! :)
Author's Response: I love your reviews! I always giggle! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
I think Bella will tell Edward they cannot be together 'cause she's so damaged by him and she needs to remain sane and strong for their daughter. She will still let him see Little Love. But no way she's gonna take him back. That fast at least LOL
Author's Response: Very interesting! Let's see how close you are! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
perfect reunion for A/B. I have to be honest, I'm scared shitless for the next chapter. I dont think she will be easy on him at all. I do hope she gives him a chance to talk tho. I have seen her in so many fics shut him down and not let him talk when he fucks up. But I know you wont disappoint, you never have and never will cause I trust! xoxo
Author's Response: There won't be a whole lot of talking in this next chapter, but I think that you will be satisfied in the long run. *crosses fingers* (hanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
omg i can't wait!! im so excited!! we are all pumped up for next chapter, you're amazing !!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hang in there! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
I think that Bella is going to sit stuned for a moment as she see's him and he is going to burst into tears and appollogize massively while bawling his eyes out saying that he never stopped loving her. It will take her a moment to come out of her dazzlement but she will focus enough to hear what he is saying and start to accept him back in her life but timidly because she is scared and she can even confess this to Alice who will be a good sister and pass it on to Edward when he feels like he is going no where and needs encouragement.
Author's Response: Interesting theory! Won't be long until you find out how close you are! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
i know we all want happily ever after for E and B but these two have so much to work out...there has been so much hurt, lies, and betrayal for all...it can't be that easy for them to work it out...i hated that Bella was able to just forgive Edward in New Moon just like that!!! they didn't even talk about anything to work out the problems in their relationship...and trust me that they had problems, it wouldn't have been that easy for Edward to walk away and lie to B if they had actually talked....even in Eclipse, Edward still continued to lie to her and make decisions for her, try to control her....they need to see if they can have a partnership of equals where they can make decisions together and work on it together....
Author's Response: Very good point! I totally agree! These kiddos have a ton to work through before riding off into the sunset. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
i love Emmett
he honestly makes everything better!
Author's Response: Emmett can definitely lighten the mood! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
hmmm.... i weirdly didn't get an update alert for this chapter, i just happened to spot it when i went to go re-read the chapter of BtS... anyways...
i know i say this literally all the time, but you are brilliant. i could just see that scene being played out and felt the hurt, and it is exactly how i thought it should be. i loved the splash of emmett at the end - unexpected and refreshing.
what would i like to see? oh, gee, i don't know, lol, maybe what i've been nagging about since lizzie was born - edward holding her - and i want bella to see it. i know that they won't just magically get back together and all forgiven (erm, especially with you writing :) <3 ) but i think it would be the spark that will reignite their fire... ugh, i'm cheesy. anyway, another fabulous chapter and i'm so happy i just happened to check my page today - a birthday blessing :)
Author's Response: Happy birthday, a bit late! So glad you liked the chapter. You may be surprised that you get a bit of what you want in the next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
To tell you the truth, Darling, I'm terrified of the next chapter. It's the BIG ONE, and I know, just KNOW that it will destroy me.
Every single chapter since the very first has managed to knock down my defenses over and over. I always end up trembling, wiping tears away as they fall mercilessly down my cheeks.
But with what's to come, I am afraid, for I know that it will destroy me once and for all.
And yet strangely enough, I welcome the destruction.
Author's Response: Wow, I got chills from that review! You're making *me* scared and I wrote it!
Thank you so much for keeping your mind open and trusting me, at least a little.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
eeekkk so this chapter was amazing just like the others but i really can't wait for the next one...EB meet YAY...i know its gonna be bad but I love it like that...it needs to bad for them for a while...any way ud soon
Author's Response: Hang in there! It will be tough, but it'll be ok in the end!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Awww...I swear my heart breaks a little more with each chapter. It was so sad how she asked what Edward was like with Elizabeth..but of course I can completely understand her curiousity and wanting to know his reactions and feelings/behaviors about the baby. I am hoping that by knowing that he absolutely loves his daughter, it might make her more understanding and possibly forgiving of him? He made a mistake. It happens. Now they have to find a way to move on from it.
Gah...I CANNOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! (wait...next chapter is a reunion chapter with Edward or Lizzie, right? - It better be! J/k...maybe...)
Author's Response: I am so glad you're still enjoying it! I know there's so much left to do and so much to heal, but have faith!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Very nice reunion scene here. And I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! I seriously have no idea what will happen, I'm just excited to know it's next. I know she can't just fall back into his arms, but I also really really hope that she's not too hard on him, so I'll just hope for a happy medium. :o) As always, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Good to keep an open mind! Just hang in there. It's not a one shot deal!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: BlueLotusGirl (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
I 'want' them to kiss and make up...I 'think' it is going to be way more complicated than that.
Author's Response: Alas, it has to be...
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP FOR VALIDATION NOW!!!!!!!
I really liked this chapter, and Alice is right, you just can't not forgive Emmet :D
Author's Response: Demanding! LOL! I will get it out as soon as I can!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Jasper was so sweet, encouraging Alice to go see Bella.
Glad Bella and Alice made up - they really needed to talk.
I think after that emotional reunion between Bella & Alice that Emmett bursting in was perfect - really broke the tension.
I refuse to speculate on the next chapter. I will just sit back and let it unfold as you intend.
Oh and the swim lessons? Well, it's still warm enough here in North Texas for swimming, so send Edward on over, please?
Author's Response: LOL! I'm in TX too, although in South TX. In the 90's here!
Jasper is a good guy. He talks a big game, but he's really one of the most perceptive and supportive of them all.
Next chapter will be a toughie. Hang in there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Ahh. I almost cried. And for me that's saying a lot.
I've only ever cried at one fic and that was "The Best Man" and I almost cried at "Hydraulic Level Five".
Sooo... Next chapter dum dum dum (cue ominous music).
Author's Response: Aw! Well, I'm glad we made you feel it. It's a terrible time for these kiddos, but they're working their way through.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Please let them reconcile soon. and when will she get to meet lizzy? I think you are gonna lead up to the meeting and the next chapter with him either coming in the room and not saying anytning or him bringing in Lizzie. I need some bella edward time. I loved the chapter! Alice is great and emmett well he just makes life better!
Author's Response: Hang in there. I'll be interested in what you think after you read it. But they will see each other in the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Tears, tears, tears. you sure know how to make a girl cry. I can't wait for more. I'm really excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I don't' mean to! But I am glad it's making you feel!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is sooo addicting. Love it so much, I think that Bella handled the whole "Alice" situation, very well. She let her know that yes, Ilove you but you hurt me and why? Great job.
Now, what do I hope will happen next. I hope that Bella does tell Edward that he will be a big part of the baby's life. That she never took that away from him that it was taken by his decisions. And that his decisions where the very reason that they all went through this hell. I want Edward to know how much he hurt her and what a horrbile life she had to endure. But I don't want Bella cruel to Edward and I want her to leave the door open for them. I want Edward to be the one to bring Elizabeth to Bella for the first time. For them to be parents together. And I want Edward to BEG Bella for forgivness. Alot to ask for, I know!!!!
Anyway, I mostly look forward to what you always give us.....a great story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! What a great review! I don't know if I can get that all in one chapter, but I hope you'll like what I give you!
I appreciate your review!
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