Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Oh Dear God woman. You are killing me. seriously. Loved it though. So heartbreaking that she couldn't talk to Edward yet though. But I understand where she is coming from. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice! Thank you for all your support!
Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
sigh. so beautiful! you know i have seen this before but i am sitting here and writing and thinking and crying.
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much for all your support!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Oh Ellie, that was just perfect. It's 2am here and I was just about to go to bed when I got the update message so, of course, I couldn't go to bed until I read it. I'm crying and I'm not sure how I'm going to get to sleep.
I'm not sure that I can come up with anything coherent at the moment so I will have to give you my thoughts on the forum tomorrow. I will say though that it did everything it needed to.
Annette
Author's Response: Aw! I hope you get some sleep! Thanks so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Woohoo! Its about time we had our update! I love shirtless Daddyward. Can you send him over to my house to hold me against his chest?
Author's Response: Lol! You get Chubward! Can't I keep shirtless Daddyward? Ah, we can share 'em both! Thanks so much for everything, Right Brain!
Reviewer: LisaV (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I love love love this story! Don't want it to end!!!!
Author's Response: Aw! Eventually, it will have to! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Vero (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
This chapter was so heart breaking. Your a good writer.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Definitely worth something.
Author's Response: I am glad! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
*sniffs* Awesome chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: So glad you felt I did it justice! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Leah_Clearwater (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
That was great, but I need you to update faster! we need more b and e, the angst is killing me!
Author's Response: Hang in there. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
That was extremely, beautifully, wonderfully, painfully written...cannot wait for the next chapter. Awesome job, as always. :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: amylizhawkins (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Please update soon! That was an amazing chapter!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I can just imagine shitless Edward, holding his daughter. *sigh* I loved the chapter, don't know why you think you need to hide. It was great.
Author's Response: I am glad you felt I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
awww...love this...everything goes on hold whenever i see an update on twilighted, and if its not this then it starts up again-i had six updates from twilighted alone yesterday, and i was looking specifically for this story...and i love this...made me feel a whole lot better-especially seeing as i had a fight with my friends yesterday and im ill....but i dont have school today, and im hppy now..:)
Author's Response: Oh no! I am sorry such a bad day! So glad the update helped!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I'm crying here!
Author's Response: *hands you a tissue* Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
*cries* That was beautiful!!! *wipes eyes* That was perfect, exactly what was needed!!! I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Actually, I thought the reunion went perfectly. Like you said, stuff was "said" just not verbally, and of course, actions speak louder than words!
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Oh wow. I'm all teary.
Beautiful. So, so so heartbreakingly beautiful. I think it's PERFECT. You didn't rush, it's just PERFECT. You have such a delicacy in handling these moments with Bella. I'm enamoured.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Shirtless Daddyward was beyond sweet!
Author's Response: He is pretty sweet, isn't he? Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
This chapter was beautiful. Simple, understated, and expressive.
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Loved. Loved. LOVED. Bella and Alice's talk. It was so sweet and so totally them. The way Jasper was with Alice before the talk was so gah endearing. I think I have fallen for Jasper a little bit more :-)
So, Edward and Bella are going to see eachother next... Hmmm... I don't know why but part of me wants Bella to actually see Edward with Lizzie before the talk. Is she well enough to see Lizzie. I just have this mental image of Edward handing Lizzie to Bella. However, if that's not possible, I could totally accept other options :-)
My idea would be to have Edward walk into Bella's room. You know it's going to be awkward. Neither of them have a clue where to begin. Edward owes so much more than an apology but at the same time Bella didn't tell him she was pregnant. So in that regards they have a ton of re-building of trust to work on. If they are going to work as a couple they have to talk but at the same time not everything can be hashed out in one conversation. That is unrealistic. To use these words it's going to take baby steps.
The positive is that Bella and Edward never stopped loving eachother but in order for them to be a "couple" again they have to re-build their relationship.
I am also about 99.9% sure that everyone is going to play a role in them getting their relationship back on track. Especially, Alice :-)
Author's Response: Well the next chapter is up and I am curious as to what you think. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
Blushy McClumsypants.....that was good.
Author's Response: Em has a way with nicknames! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
It gets better and better! Some real hard but great chapters. PLEASE keep them coming!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Such a tear-jerker! This story just gets better and better!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
hey- i am really liking where your taking this story!!!
but its not better than jasper waiting by a lake in trunks-jkjk:):)
can't wait for bellward's reunion!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Reunion part 1 is up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: DinerGirl (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
i found this story yesterday... loving it! i've just been reading along - and then, no more... i'm caught up... it was devastating. i cannot wait for the next chapter with bella and edward!
you've done a great job telling this story! i'm so intrigued to see how the story continues.
thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response: The next chap just went up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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