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Reviewer: xlozalinx (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
do they get back 2 gether
Author's Response: Now, if I flat told you, that would ruin the story! But suffice it to say that I believe in HEA.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cha0s (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
oh my gosh i lovvvvvve this update. yeah for code scarlet and the depth of emotions displayed. yeah for shirt less daddyward and him and liz being all cute with the father/daughter time. can't wait for more interactions and dare i say it code reds i'm sorry but i love the emotions that you show in them. i squeed when this alert came to my inbox
Author's Response: I am so glad you're still enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
:( I sooooooo hope they get their shit together sooooooooon!!! I love this story though :D
Barb
Author's Response: LOL! Hang in there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
In my personal opinion it took way to long to get to this point. There was way to much filler.
Author's Response: Again, I am sorry you feel that way. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Shirtless Daddyward was a vision in and of itself.
Now I'm all caught up!!
Looking forward to the rest...
Author's Response: I hope Shirtless Daddyward was worth the hype!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Good story, way way way to much filler, A whole chapter on chosing the baby's name? and why in Jaspers POV? Long chapters are very nice but not when there only dragging the story on. It makes it boring and kind of unbearable to read. I love the Plot its an amazing story line but please speed up the story.
Author's Response: I am sorry you feel that way. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I finally have some reading time! Yay!
Honestly, this is the best chapter yet. So well written. You didn't need dialogue - their actions spoke so loudly. Breaks my heart that he left.
Very sweet moments with Edward and the baby and then Bella and Edward and the baby.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: heathersriddles (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I just started this story yesterday, and COULD NOT stop reading. You have made me laugh (mostly with Emmet and Jasper)... and bawl my eyes out like a baby. Thank you so much for this story. It is killing me, and I love it. Please tell me you are posting the next chapter very soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for giving my story a try! Next chp was submitted Wednesday. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: danqat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I love this story, but you're seriously killing me with the short chapters...I NEED MORE!!!!! I am SOOOOOO looking forward o the next chapters (hopefully lots of them and very soon!) Keep up the fabulous job!
Author's Response: It was submitted Wednesday... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
I noticed my pic didn't come out so I wanted to show you the pic I was trying to attach that is me reading your story:
Author's Response: Aw, hun! *holds you*
Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Beautiful name. Beautiful writing. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and the review!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Elizabeth Grace is a beautiful name. I actually want to name a daughter Elizabeth Rae, if we have one in the future.
Author's Response: I like that! The ladies on my forum thread came up with the name. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
You got my tears to fall with that one. When Edward said "I'm your daddy". Yep, that got me. Got me good.
More sobbing commenced at Edward's confessions to his little girl, then again when Charlie admitted to overhearing it all.
Author's Response: Daddyward gets you everytime. Charlie's eavesdropping did more than any conversation between them could do. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
If I were a more emotional person, I would be bawling right now. As it were, I am tearing up, which is my equivalent of bawling. Almost.
Author's Response: Lol! This was a tough one. The lover's duet.
Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I love this story I trully do but in my opinion its too slow. Theres way to much filler and it seems to drag on sometimes.
Author's Response: I am sorry you feel that way. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I like Angela. I'd have slapped him too. Then perhaps molested him. JS.
Author's Response: LMAO! Good you're keeping your sense of humour!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I am definitely going to need a drink or five tonight when I keep reading more.
Dear lord, woman. The reactions are so real, so true. Not stylized, not proper. Outstanding.
Author's Response: Wow! Seriously? Thanks so much for the compliment. Gift Certificate to the Liquor Barn is on its way!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
awww your story so far has been great a touch of haart ache and happiness. I cant wait to seee where ya go next with it. update again soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
WOW. This chapter was just so beautifully sad. Edward taking care of his little love was so gorgeous and seeing it from Bella's perspective was wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time. It's not how I pictured their first meeting happening but it was SO MUCH better than what I imagined.
Great chapter + shirtless daddyward = AWESOME chapter.
Author's Response: I’m so glad you feel I did it justice!
Be warned, I have been told that Shirtless Daddyward causes spontaneous ovulation...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rushed (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Finally...contact! Really beautifully done. I'm loving this story so much and you're doing an amazing job keeping us emotionally invested even with the gaps between updates. Thanks
Author's Response: I’m so glad you feel I did it justice!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
::reader vacillating between snot-sobbing tears of pain and joy::
I got all three of the things I was waiting for and instead of being happy...well staying happy, at least...I'm in hearfail again.
B meets Lizzie, BxE finally see each other again and B sees E cradling their precious love.
::burst out into fresh snot-sobbing tears::
I knew it wasn't gonna be everything I'd been waiting for, but at least there were words. And the entwined fingers!! WWAAAHHHH!!! Their bodies unconsciously reach for each other even when their mind is unwilling to forgive at this point.
OMG...I'm so glad it stopped at this point, only because I know I'm gonna need to recover from this. I think Daddyward is officially in my top 5 favorite -wards. Shit on a popsicle stick I need to clean myself up. I've made a mess with all these shredded moist tissues all over my bed.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I have gotten so many comments that Shirtless Daddyward causes spontaneous ovulation. Be warned!
I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
WWAAAHHHH! That was really hard to read. The betrayal B felt struggling with her joy at seeing them again.
I love me some Embear. He's so adorable! Now, aside from E, only Rose is left, right?
Oh...I'm really anxious about the next chapter. I know it's gonna be ten times more difficult than this chapter to read because B is not gonna make it easy for E. She's still smarting from what she considers a betrayal and the abandonment.
Whew...sucking it up so I can be ready for the next chapter.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Well, at least the next chapter is up! I'd hazard to say that it's harder than this, but hopefully, I did it justice.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
Awesome chapter. Esme & Charlie discussing...very good. And Jasper with his potty mouth and skewed sense of humor...and his way with words. Rawr! He'd give Emoward (love the nickname) a run for his money.
I'm glad that B finally got some insight on E's reasoning. I hope she takes Jazz's advise and takes it into consideration.
SO...I want my 4" peep-toe patent-leather Louboutin's in Vamp Red with, of course Robward!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Jasper has quite the way with words, doesn't he?:) I love him!
Nice wardrobe choice/Cullen:)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid
Wow...aside from the Bella calling Charlie daddy, I think my eyes stayed pretty dry here. Aww...now I have at least three scenes I'm looking forward to...ExB's conversation, B meeting Lizzie and B seeing E with Lizzie for the first time...
I feel happy tears coming on...DAMNIT! I knew it was too good to be true!
So just to clarify, when B was saying Elizabeth in her head, was it because she had heard E calling the baby that or it was the name she had chosen for the baby prior to her birth? The heartfail for B seems just as never-ending as E's. But at least I can see the proverbial light in the tunnel...even if it's still a very, very faint speck in the distance.
Sorry I missed your birthday...HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!! Hope you got lotsa love on your bday!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I may be able to knock out some of your "looking forward to" in one fell swoop:)
I would like to clarify your point, but I can't just yet. I will tho! Promise!
Thanks for the birthday wishes and for the review!
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